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Posted: 11 years ago
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This is for u Rashmi😉



Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank you all for the Comments and likes...they mean a lot...

Here is the next part...hope u'll like it...


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Maan - Dekho yeh aunty ko bhi lag raha hai ki hum dono Made for each other hain. Bas jinhe lagna chaiye unhe nahi laga.


Geet smiled at him, shook her head at his drama and took garv from him. Sales girl came with the dress. Maan asked to pack it and moved out of there after paying the bills.


Unknown to the there is a person standing there watching everything happened.


On the other side...

Rohan - Arre anu plz meri baat suno na...Main aaj hi aaya hoon abroad se...aate hi yaha aagaya...


Anu - Aur tumne nahi bataya mujhe...


Rohan - Maan ne mana kiya hai toh main kya karta. Abhi toh uski har baat maanni padegi na...Nahi toh woh mujhe tujhse milne bhi nahi dega...tera khadus bhai...


Anu smiled a little...


Rohan - Finally tum hasi toh sahi...and hugger her said Missed you.

Anu - I too missed you rohan.


Rohan - aur batao kya kiya mere bina ye ek mahina.


Anu became dull suddenly. Rohan was confused.


Rohan - Kya hua mere AK47 ko. he teased...


If it had been some other time she would have eaten him live for calling her that, but she remained silent.


Rohan looked at her once again and thought the matter must be serious otherwise after calling her AK47 anu cannot be this calm, she seemed least bothered about that now.

Rohan - Ab bato mujhe anu kya hua...


Anu looked at him and said...Dadi Geet ki aur veer bahi ki shaadi karana chahti hai...


Rohan was shocked - What??????? ye kaise ho sakta hai...


Anu narrated him all the happenings of last 2 days.


Rohan - Aur maan ne kya kaha he suddenly asked.

Anu - Maan bhai ne abhi toh baat sambhal li par aage kya hoga kuch pata nahi hai...Mujhe kuch samajh mein nahi aaraha hai...


Rohan is tensed ...so this is the matter he called me. I need to talk to him right away...He tried to call maan but could not get through because of the secluded corner.

He turned to anu and dragged her with him..

Anu - Rohan kya hua...

Rohan - Aisa kaise maan chup reh sakta hai...Geet woh kya karr rahi hogi.

Anu - par abhi toh dadi ne apne faisle se hat gayi na...

Roha turned aroung and said - Tum sach mein pagal ho anu...Dadi is mastermind, woh humse bohut aage ki sochti hain...

Tumhe kya lagta hai unhone veer ko tum dono ke saath kyun bheja. Woh veer aur geet ko paas lana chahthi hai. Woh abhi bhi apne faisle se hati nahi hain...god I cant believe tumhe itni si baat samajh mein nahi aayi...Anu stopped in her tracks after hearing what rohan said...


She rememberd morning incident when dadi asked Veer to join them for shopping.


She came into senses when she felt rohan pulling her with him.


Kyun main itni si baat samajh nahi paayi...Anu thought.


Rohan - Maan aur Geet ka kya hoga .


Anu was puzzled...before she could ask anything about it rohan reached the food joint where Maan and Geet are waiting...

Rohan - Maan yeh anu kya keh rahi hai...he asked to confirm from Maan...

Maan - Pehle ye toh batao ki anu ne tumse kya kaha...

Rohan - Maan I am serious...Kya anu jo kaha who sach hai...Dadi Geet aur Veer ki shaadi karana chahthi hai...


Maan looked at Geet and waited for her response.


Geet nodded and gave her acceptance.


Maan - Yes.


Rohan - God! Aur Tum abhi bhi chup ho...


Maan - Rohan its getting late hum ghar jaake baat karenge...


Rohan - No, Mujhe abhi baat karni hai...


Maan - Nahi rohan yaha nahi hum ghar jaake baat karenge...


Rohan - Maan tum aise kaise react kar sakte ho...Dadi Geet aur veer ki shaadi ki baat kar rahi hai, tumhe lagta hai ki woh apne faisle se hat gayi hai, nahi unhone aisa nahi kiya, balki geet aur veer ko paas lane ke liye hi geet ko KM mein rehne ke liye bulaya ha...he heard a gasp and turned to see geet...


Geet hadn't expected this. She turned to Maan and questioned him with her eyes...


He nooded very slowly...Anu for the first time noticed the small eye talks between maan and geet.


Rohan - Maan jaldi faisle lo, yeh tumhara hi nahi balki geet ka zindagi ka bhi sawaal hai...aur kitne din chupaoge apne pyaar ko sab se...


Maan looked away...Rohan is right ab dadi ko batane ka waqt aagaya hai...he looked at rohan and nodded.


Maan - I will Rohan do it Soon. Very Soon...


Anu - Koi mujhe batayega ki kyaho raha hai yaha...


Rohan turned to anu and said Duniya mein sabse badi budhu mujhe hi mili...Anu apni bakwass band karo aur batao mujhe ki yeh sab kya hai...


Rohan turned to Maan and asked Yeh tumhari hi behen hai na...isse kahi se uthakar toh nahi le aaye...


Anu pushed rohan a little and went to Geet and asked...Geet tu mujhe bata tujhe kuch samajh mein aaya...


Geet just smiled...Anu's irritated now...stop it and just tell it now she said in an irritated tone ...


Rohan - Tu sach mein budhu hai...tum dekh nahi paayi ki yeh dono tumhare aakhonke saamne ishq lada rahe the...


Anu - kya? Maan bhai aur Geet pyaar karte hai ek doosre se...?


Rohan - thank god tujhe baat samajh mein aagayi...Badhayi ho Maan ...Anu baat samajh gayi...


Veer - What?


Anu and rohan turned to see veer standing there with Garv...


Veer - Bhai yeh Rohan aur Anu kya keh rahe hai...Kya yeh sach ki aap aur Geet Ek doosre se pyaar karte hain...


Maan - Haa Veer...Yeh sach hai...


Anu pounced on Geet and Geet ki bachi tune mujhe kyun nahi bataya...Jao main naraz hoon...tumse baat nahi karungi...aur rohan tumse bhi...tumne jaanthe the aur mujhe nahi bataya...


Veer came to maan and hugged him and I am haapy for both of you...Even naina will be happy for her little sister...Geet ko aap se acha koi aur nahi mil sakta...Main sach mein bohut khush hoon bhai...


Maan - thank you Veer and Anu, ab chalo ghar chalte hain...baaki ki baatein ghar par karenge..


Anu - Haa... lekin mujhe poori love story sunni hain.aap mana nahi kar sakte...


Maan - Ok. But dadi aur jasmeet aunty se kuch mat kehna abhi ke liye...main khud baat karunga undono se...



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Here is part 8...

Plz share ur views...

I will be waiting...

Edited by -indu- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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main first aagayi hoon


chalo ab sab ko patha chal gaya maan aur geet ke baaremein

jisko maloom hona chahiye tha bechari anu ko hi nahi maloom😆😆wo kitni pareshaan thi geet ke baaremein soch kar

aur yeh dono mazey lerahe thay😛
Edited by priya111111 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34

Haww
itni jaldi secret open ho gaya ...
matlab ...no more drama ?
Will Dadi be agree?
jasmeet to pakka ready ho jaayegi I m sure
but that also means that you are going to end this
NO NO NO
I want some more twist in the love...
Please Please Please

BTW

it was a lovely update
Maan is so sweet.
I was surprised that Anu too was unaware of bthe love between her bro nad best friend
but Now everyone knows so I m happy that all will help them

Edited by rashmivaish - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: -indu-

This is for u Rashmi😉





Aww
love you Indu
don't be too formal
anything for friends
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Posted: 11 years ago
#36
Nice part
Ab anu aur veer ko maan geet ke pyar ka pata lag gaya
Bado ka kya faisla hoga...ye dekhna hai...
Maan anu ko apni premkahani sunayga?
Waiting for next...
Thanks for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update
so all came to know about maan and geet even veer now
but who was the person who had seen maan and geet together????
update next part soon!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update dear :) I was waiting for soo long for ur update dear :) since I read it as a silent member because can't come often to IF.. but your os attract me... update soon can't wait to see who's the one who were listening and seeing Maan Geet... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update
Ab toh veer & anu ko bhi pata chal gaya.. better maan talk to dadi & jasmeet also abt his & geet's relation
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Posted: 11 years ago
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comment edited on page 6😛

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