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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: anushka1129

tasha you update..yipee
n awesome update..
loved Swaron cute nok jok part..
n sharon hug swayam😳
sharon imagining all this..
poor sharon,she love him so much yaar..
just small gesture from him make her so happy..
but you know what, am happy it was dream sequence..
becoz if it wasn't then again swayam did all this imagining ganga then it will hurt me more n if with sharon also it will look like his lust only coz still he imagine ganga ever now n then na..so am happy.
actually i want all this when swayam totally forget ganga n truely feel for sharon..
n again happy that swayam is happily spending with sharon n opening up with her..
lets see what happen next
update soon..
n thanks for the pm :)

ps:Get Well Soon tasha :)


Yes i finally did update
N i m again late :/
But i m glad u liked the update
U r right i didnt wanted to create a lust relationship of ss
So it had to be a dream
Hope u enjoy their actual kiss
N next chap which is ready n will b posting in couple of hours :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
yes maam 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
extra post 😳
Edited by --Ta_Sha--PMs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


thanks to all the above mentioned names for liking the previous update and also to all those who commented on it. 🤗

next update will be out as soon as i get THREE pages of comments 😃

Love
TaSha ❤️
Edited by --Ta_Sha--PMs - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago


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Posted: 11 years ago
Res me first dhinka chika..🥳
Unreserved
Tashu I loved this part it had all the elements in it.. It had light hearted comedy romance, hardcore emotional stuff everything I think I read an emotional bollywood masala movie in 15 mins..😃
The opening scene where swayam silently admires sharon and caresses her face was an awww moment for me..😳. And then sharon's weird reactions were fun to read..😆.
The bossy swayam and the docile and obeying sharon were nice to read and then it turns even more fun bechari sharon ki saari mehnat paani main I liked swayam's light hearted teasing and sharon's reaction wohoo I could actually imagine her having the "Ruk jao abhi dikhati hoon tumhe swayam ke bachhe" expression..😆.
Then the intense swayam again returns when sharon suggests to celebrate his parents's anniversary I liked the convo here.. Sharon handles it in a very mature manner and finally mana leti hai swayam ko..😊.
Anddd finally we get the magical kiss it was wowww yaar angel... Aise moment ke pehle koi ganga ke baare main sochta hai kya swayam swayam kya hoga tera..😛.
I was touched when swayam adds sharon's photo to the collage already adding sharon again to his small family..😊.
I loved the update angel it was blockbuster awesome for me..😃.
Love,
Kashmi..🤗.
P.S- I look forward to everything and everyone but not ganga naa yaar itna jaldi mat laa usse.. Thoda toh romance kar lene de swaron ko pleasshhh meri request hain ji..
Edited by sweet16cash - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
res for me
Edited

Awesome update 😊
Swayam first angry for his parents's anniversary but agreed later
The emotions were beautifully penned
He is set to get his best friend back

Edited by SanskritiS - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely nd awesome update..update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update Atlast
He he he 😆

Coming to the Update it was just... AWESOME
Like Always 😉
Swayam is one confused fellow I tell you
But was happy to know that he doesn't want to repeat his "mistake"
The kiss ☺️ was apt for the situation and somewhere I was expecting it 😉
But one of the cutest moment was Sharon and Swayam living their childhood moments
And the second cutest part was Swayam including Sharon's pic in the collage

You are an OUTSTANDING writer no doubt in that..
(I hope you are not bored listening to the same thing from the past 18 updates but kya karu yaar OUTSTANDING se upar kya hota hai yaad hi nahi aata 😔 Agar kuch hai toh shall use it in the next comment for sure 😉)

Can't wait to read ahead
How will Swayam try to get back his BFF and in that process will he realise his feeling for Sharon??
Yaar jaldi update karna..

P.S Thanks for the PM and future main bhi karna 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
Dis is wat i call amazing n fab writing skills
i completely loved d way u showed swayam's pov
i m glad he has started caring for sharon
dat kiss was simply amazing
swaron r meant to be
but i m waiting for ur twists
coz u never fail to amaze me wid ur creativity

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