Arshi FF: A Regretful Mistake Chpt.4

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Hey guys!!
So I realized that the way I was updating posts were kind of confusing, so I'm going be updating on this post always.

Summary: When Arnav Singh Raizada made a grave mistake, 8 months later he has to repend it and on the way he gets the biggest shock of his life. Khushi. Is. Pregnant. Now, with everyone against him in this battle how is Arnav going to get the forgiveness of his love??
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"Khushiji.. I just got a text from Arnav- he just left India. He's going to US" After Dadiji had told Arnav about Garima Arnav just couldnt take the pain leaving India would maybe have taken the pain he was just given not thinking of anyone he left. Khushi fell beside the mandap shocked as Nk said the words she could never believe.
"How could he.." Khushi said as hot tears trickled down from her hazel eyes. Buaji, Payal and Garima ran beside a shocked Khushi holding her shoulders consoling her. Flashbacks of the past year came to her head.
"I believe in you and your love"
"You are now my mamma's bahu"
"Promise me Khushi that you'll never leave me",
"Because I love you dammit!!!!!".
"Was it all... a lie??" She said to herself, breathing heavily. Nk came running up the stairs to the mandap holding her hand he asked her a question.
"Can I be your Arnav??"

Seven months later:

Arnav walked down the streets of Hoboken,New Jersey as the snow melted making the side walks slushy He stopped as his blackberry rang.
"Hmm it's an international call??" He questioned as he pressed accept.
"Hello??" Arnav asked walking down to a cafe he went to quite a few times. Pushing the door to go inside he asked again.
"Hello?" He heard someone's breathe hitch as they said.
"Hello Arnav bitwa.." Slowly pausing the person continued.
"Its Garima".


Chapter 1: scroll down!
Chapter 2: page 2
Chapter 3: page 2
Chapter 4: page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter 1:


Hey guys really angry because i just wrote the first chapter and then it got deleted.


Chapter 1:

New Jersey:
"Arnav bitwa please don't hang the phone i finally got the courage to talk to you and no one would let me". Arnav rolled his eyes as he about to cut the phone when he heard her yell.
"Arnav bitwa please don't cut the phone I just wanted to tell you that I didn't know that your father was married he told me that he was divorced ever since he met me i swear- I.. I didn't know that I...I " he heard her bursting out sobbing.
"I am so s..sorry Garima Aunty I didn't know that. Why didn't you tell me that before I...I left" and then a thought shot in his head.
"Khushi..." His eyes widened as he bid her goodbye and he ran out the shop running to his apartment.

Delhi:
A tired Khushi was waddling to the stairs as she put her hand on her swollen belly crumpling the turquoise kurta. Her manglasutra dangled from side to side a beat of sweat trickled down her head. Nk who was on his phone put it on the couch running to Khushi's side.
"Khushiji... how many times have I told you to always make someone walk with you when your going up the stairs, you know how careful you have to be I careful I don't want anything to happen to you" he told her softly putting his hand on her cheek. Holding her hand they made their way up the stairs.
"So.. Khushiji have you thought of any names for this little angeI?" he asked her rubbing her belly.
"I have thought of some myself but you tell me yours" he asked giving him a little laugh Khushi looked up the stairs to see a smiling Anjali holding her white hands as she came up the last stair Nk, Anjali , Khushi went to Khushi'sroom. A tired Khushi fell on her bed.
"Ufff" she said as the little angel kicked inside her stomach.
"Khushiji I'll be back I'm just going to get some hot milk for you ok?" Anjali said giving Khushi and Nk her big dimpled smile.
"Diii you know I hate milk especially warm " Khushi pouted Nk and Anjali chuckled. Anjali limped out the room while Nk turned the TV putting his arms around Khushi squeezing her arms. Suddenly they heard a loud crash. Startled they quickly went down the stairs seeing a shocked Anjali and Nani."
"Nani what happened? " Khushi asked beside a shocked Anjali staring at something at the door. Confused Khushi looked over her shoulder to the door her eyes widened holding her breath. Turning completely to the door she got tears stinging to fall down her cheeks. Feeling dizzy she said one last thing "Arnavji" and the world went dark to her eyes.

I know its a small chapter but I promise the next chapters will be longer!

Love,
Khusharni⭐️

Edited by Khusharni - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice update
love it
do pm me
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Read all the chapters in one go. Very intense till now. Arnav is a jerk here. He deserves every bit of hatred for doing this to Khushi. Glad that you decided to post all the chapters in one thread. It helps us readers a lot. Please update soon and if possible do PM me when you update next :)
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Hey everyone Khusharni here! So I honestly don't know what people say at the starting if their post of their FF's lol so I guys I hope you guys like this part and PLEASE comment and like!

...Oh! Now I remember one thing. Ok guys people who write stories and FF's enjoy making and hearing comments about their stories but when someone copies it we turn into the Hulk!! LOL kidding so just please DO NOT copy or use my story for your own purpose. Copying people is just... just don't do it ok? Thanks!






Chapter 2:
"Khushi!!" Arnav yelled with widened eyes running to her before she fell.
"Khushi!!!Khushi wake up!!!" Arnav said patting his hand on her soft white cheeks. As everyone gathered around.
"Arnav" Nk said in anger. He shoved Arnav's hands away from her lifting Khushi in his mighty hands running to one of the cars. Everyone followed Nk quickly leaving a shocked and hurt Arnav. "She's married to Nk and... Pregnant" reality hit him like a slap in the face. His Khushi was someone else. "What did I do?" He asked himself falling on his knees to the marble ground.
At the hospital:
"Doctor.. Is she and the baby...ok??" Nk asked as everyone came towards the doctor.
"Yes Mrs.Raizada is fine but the child is in critical condition. If I may ask did she reasently get a shock of some how?" Everyone looked at each other as the doctor continued " I have already advised you to keep her in a calm state her conditions were already very critical in her first month.She is still very weak." He paused as he took a breath.
"I will be back after a few hours ok? Until then please just wait here". "Thank you doctor" Nk whispered with a lump in his throat. Nani and mami heavily sat into chairs hugging each other as Akash consoled them and a three month pregnant Payal.
"I need to talk to Arnav" Anjali said as tears trickled down her cheeks.

A few hours later:

"Di??" Arnav asked as he entered the hospital hall where everyone was desperately waiting. "Di.. I-" He was cut of by Anjali who put her hand to him.The tears didn't stop coming as she started talking.
"Do not call me your Di" Anjali said barely being able to talk looking straight forward. Arnav went beside her putting his hand on her shoulder.
"Di I'm so-" Anjali shoved his hand away standing up she looked into his eyes angrily.
" I said... I said don't call me your Di- I feel so ashamed to be even related to you. Do you know how it feels to have your marriage broken right at the mandap?? Do you know what you did to Khushiji??" She asked yelling at him.
"Di, just try to understand-" she cut him off getting angrier and angrier after each word. "Understand???? Did you even think of anyone?? Me??? Khushiji??? She may have been happy on the outside but in the inside her soul was dead!!! Do you ever try to hear Garima aunty??? Khushiji ?? You ruined her life. Nk was the only one who could help her keep her happy something that you didn't do!!! You became so selfish for ma that you forgot everyone else who loved you so much" his eyes stinged with tears threatening fall down uncontrollably at the word "loved" not "love" After sometime Anjali started again " After so long Khushij has actually has started to laugh freely and then you came back again breaking her healing heart again please just... just leave" she said sobbing pointing to the entrance. Tears fell down Arnav's cheeks at the hatred his sister had for him now. Before he turned to talk to the doctor Nk came in between holding out his arms. As everyone looked away from Arnav angrily. "Wait" Nk said with anger in his eyes.
"Arnav, come with me i need to discuss something with you". Nk said with nothing but hatred and anger in him. Arnav held his breath as he realized what Nk said not Nannav just "Arnav".
"Khushi's pregnant??" Arnav asked hurt. "Yes she is" Nk silently answered "How did this.. Pregnant??..married to-" Nk cut him off closing his eyes.
"Arnav.. I just have one question... Why?? Why?? Why did you do this to us.. to Khushiji?? Do you know that- that she was so heartbroken I had to do something to get her back to her normal state because of what you did to her and finally when she was back to her happy self again you came back".
"So you married her..and got her pregnant??" He said in disbelief thinking of the night before there marriage when they became one.
"No.. We are not married...and I'm not the father of her child " he paused for a second opening and then closing is mouth.
"You are".


Wow that was one VERY long update! Guys please keep on commenting and liking my FF it really makes me inspired. Hope you liked this part & the parts to come!!

Love,
Khusharni ⭐️
Edited by Khusharni - 11 years ago
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Beautiful update
read all parts
love it
do pm me n update soon
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Great start - update soon.
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where is the third part I can't see na
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First of all soo sorry guys I haven't updated this in so long it's been months but I have an excuse... I've been really busy studying me head off but I'll try updating more often!! Ok just a note in this story Shashi is recovered because the poor guy was in a wheelchair for half of the serial he deserves to stand now lol.


Chapter 3
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Arnav sucked in his breath as reality hit him like a bat. Slowly he slumped down into the metal chair.
"How... How did this happen?!" Arnav didn't know how to react angry,sad,frustrated,confused? Nk hastily took a deep breath in.
"This happened after you left India. It was three days later and Khushi was in a very serious case of depression, she wouldn't eat or even make anything jalebi's, pakora. Di was getting really concerned so she took Khushiji out for dinner. I got a call from Di sometime later she was saying that Khushi fainted so she took her to her hospital.
"I informed everyone about this and we all came to the hospital as quickly as we could. The doctor said they had taken test so the reports would be their by the next week."
"When we got the reports back, Di was the first one to check since Khushi only replyed to her. And at that moment do you know what happened Arnav? Khushiji finally responded she actually smile, Di told her she was pregnant. Even thought the society didn't matter to us, people would've hurted Khushiji's self respect saying she's not married and she's pregnant so we pretended to get married. And since then me and Khushiji were known husband wife".Arnav was silent for a minute trying to digest the facts he heard.
"Because of me, my Khu-".
"No Arnav she is not your Khushi anymore-she's no ones now." Anjali said limping towards Arnav looking dead serious with not a trace of his sweet forgiving Di who could forget anything he did, no matter how bad it was.
" Arnav you realise that because of you Khushiji and her baby could have got-" she stopped realizing what she was saying, Anjali may have changed but her beliefs were solid as stone, saying such bad things could make them happen. Everyone was dead silent not uttering a word to each other or to Arnav, all just sitting anxiously for the news. Luckily the doctor came out of the operation room smiling slightly "Congratulations the baby and Mrs.Raizada are safe." Everyone let out a sigh of relief hugging each other and squeezing each others hands.
"You can go inside but I'm just recommend that just avoid bringing anyone in that would cause a big effect on her making her happy sad, annoyed." Arnav knew it was him maybe indirectly but the doctor was talking about him. Arnav was in such deep thought he hadn't realized Nk ran inside along with the family leaving him alone, all alone. From the window he peeked in looking at everyone crying asking Khushi if she was ok all she did was nod and smile, she may have been talking to them but her hazel eyes were wandering around looking for someone.
"She's looking for me" he said letting out a sigh of relief. Khushi took Nk's hand off her cheek and she asked him for someone. Nk took out his phone dialing someone's phone number. Giving a reassuring smile to Khushi he put it down sliding his hand into hers automatically. Confused, Arnav sat back in the hospital chair some minutes later an aged Buaji came running with her big black reading glasses right pass Arnav as if he was invisible.
"Hai re Nandkishore! What happened Titaliyia? Are you and the baby ok?"
Buaji asked putting her hand on her head. Khushi gave her a small smile nodding reassuringly. Garima and Shashi came running in minutes later crying and hugging Khushi.

Night time:

Everyone had left the hospital except Nk who insisted he stay with Khushi. Arnav had taken a cab home sometime before knowing he couldn't see Khushi. Impatiently, he waited on the turquoise couch for everyone to come. The doors of the entrance way creaked while opening, Arnav could here the footsteps of his family. They stopped right where they were seeing Arnav. Anjali's brows furrowed with anger walking straight upto Arnav who stood up.
"What. Are you doing here?" Anjali asked clenching her hand into a fist.
"Di, I just c-"
"Oh so you think that you can come into this house after breaking Khushiji's heart and we will all happily accept everything and it will be happily ever after?"
"Well then your wrong Mr. Arnav Singh Raizada this time there is no explanation for your deeds." Anjali couldn't help but stifle a quiet sob slouching into the couch. Within nanoseconds Akash and Payal were beside her teary eyes trying to comfort her. For the first time ever since he met her, Arnav saw hatred and only hatred in the eyes of Payal who was glaring at him.
"Anjali bitiya we can handle this in the morning right now you need rest. Hari Prakash told me you didn't eat anything since breakfast either." Completely ignoring Arnav, Nani held a broken Anjali by the shoulders leading her upstairs. Slowly, one by one everyone left the living room leaving Arnav in a pit of darkness and grief.
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Well? Hope you guys liked the update and PLEASE do like and comment the update and keep giving me your awesome suggestions!! I know I know.. It's very depressing right now but in the upcoming chapters there's going to be more romantic and all so stay tuned!

*Chapter 4 coming before Christmas!! *

Love,
Khusharni ⭐️
Edited by Khusharni - 11 years ago
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Amazing update
happy that she and the baby are safe
waiting for the next update to see what will MR ASR would to get into their good books 😊

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