SS: Lost Love in Lost Memories Part 4 (19 April)

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Aakriti

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Originally posted by: memad
lovely start...interesting concept...I hope I'll find out what ITC is

Thanks memad :D

but i ended it 😆 🤣

This was the first time i was writing nd i literally messed up everything 🤣

This is my weakest writing to b honest 😆

ITC was from the book 'Timeline', a science fiction :P

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

superb part 2..nice to see madhu seeing traces of her past n rk seems like first time interested in madhu...i think that photo must be of madhu's n their kids..it means madhu is his wife?

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

Originally posted by: CrazyCryztal

Thanks memad :D
but i ended it 😆 🤣
This was the first time i was writing nd i literally messed up everything 🤣
This is my weakest writing to b honest 😆
ITC was from the book 'Timeline', a science fiction :P

honestly, m loving the story...i don't find anything out of sorts at least by now but still if u feel this is ur weakest work,let me tell u,

everyone makes mistakes at 1st time but eventually learns..
...though i don't find anything wrong..m enjoying the story

Edited by memad - 11 years ago

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Rafangirl

@Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

sweet part 3..nice ...loved the way the events are unfolding in front of madhu n rk lending a helping hand to her

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Rafangirl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#85

very nice the last part 4...it couldn't have ended better...loved madhu's meeting with ishaan n gradually recognizing rk...lovely..i enjoyed it

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Aakriti

@CrazyCryztal

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

Originally posted by: memad
very nice the last part 4...it couldn't have ended better...loved madhu's meeting with ishaan n gradually recognizing rk...lovely..i enjoyed it

before i say anything else i must tell u that i m totally surprised by ur feedback...nd it is a pleasant surprise :D

Thanks a lot for liking the story memad, i m really really glad u liked it :')

Thank you...:)