Taarey OS : Back Again

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Posted: 11 years ago
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ok so its a bekaar sa one shot not one of my best
didn't come out well
still... its something what i thought taani's entry would be like

taarey os back again

phir se vapis aayi hun iss sheher mein...
ya phir shayad pehli baar...
ab wo taani hai hi nhi jiske saare sapne pure hote hote rehgye
un sapno ne apna raasta hi mod liya aur fir wo saare sapne hi badal gye

(taani on the airport looking her reflection on a glass door)
sab kuch toh badal gya hai , mai bhi mai nhi hun aur ap bhi aap nhi honge...

she takes deep breathes and leaves the airport


scene shift

"haan guys aaj mere ghar pe aa jao i don't mind..." said swayam to all boys on the phone
"haan toh bhai hum vaise bhi aa jayienge tu bas ready rahiyo" said bharat
rey said " ok so swayam hum sab aate hain thodi der mein ... aur main girls ko bhi call kar deta hun"
"ooo aashiii" boys tease rey
" guys shut up yr..." said rey annoyed wid them
"bye guys " swayam said kept the phone down

scene shift

bhai ke paas jaun kya said taani talking to herself while she was waiting for a taxi outside the airport
she decides to go visit him so she stops a taxi in view n turns to take her luggage

scene shift

swayams home
he finds out that taani is coming from his dad and so he goes out to bring a small cake fr her bcoz he was so happy that she is coming bt oblivious to the fact that why she is coming

taani reaches home n sees that swayam was nt at home bt kaka was there so she greeted him n went inside n thought that she will surprise him now
taani freshened up
when she came out, suddenly the bell rang n she
ran to open the door
she opened the door n shouted surprise
she had a wide grin on her face bt it vanished
as soon as she saw Rey n gang standing in front of her instead of swayam

everyone was shocked bt rey was lost , he couldn't understand what was happening
n then there were loud gasps
"taani"
"tum yahan?" n so on...

taani after recovering from the shock herself said a hesitating hi to the gang
"hi...hi guys..!!" said taani

girls came forward n hugged her boys also did the same n after a moment of greeting n all they all looked at rey n noticed that taani was also looking at him

taani was on a verge of crying "rey..."
before she could finish rey came n hugged her real tight
"tum wapis aa gyi taani?"
"i missed u soo much taani... i missed u"
"main... i..." rey couldn't finish when he heard
"taani?" said swayam
"bhai?" said taani
n she broke the hug n went to hug swayam

taani was in tears now
"bhai i missed u soo much"
"missed u too taani"
"chalo ab taani mujhe papa ne bta diya tha ki tum aa rhi ho toh main tumhara fav cake lene gya tha ...so chalo ab khate hain!"
taani nodded n they both n the gang went to the table
taani cuts the cake n feeds everyone n when she was about to feed rey she stops bt rey holds her hand n eats the cake

suddenly she realises something n goes to swayam n told him that she wants to talk to him alone
as no one was paying attention , they all were bsy eating the cake bt rey saw the tension on taani's face n was concerned

swayam n taani went to swayams room n shut the door so rey goes n keeps his ears on the door so that he can understand what swayam n taani are talking
he listens carefully n his expressions change slightly to shock , pain and then anger
he gets away from the door n then storms out of the house
no one again notices

after sometym they come out n swayam calls for everyones attention
the room was a mess bt then everyone looks at taani as she starts to say


" guys...(takes a deep breath) i m going to get engaged.."
all shocked "what???"
they all at once look at rey bt he was not there
"taani aise ... achanak se ...tum engagement?? i mean..." said sharon confused
"i knoe sharon bt..." before she could say anything more she felt a grip on her hand... a tight one
ahe looks at her wrist as soon as she feels the pressure n pain... n them looks at the person...Rey...

taani looks straight into his eyes as he was looking into her hers n then he says "taani... mujhe tumse baat karni hai"
n before she could answer him he dragged her out
"ouchh!!" taani cried at the sudden painful pull

rey wasn't asking her bt he told her that he wanted to talk ... he was angry and no one dared to stop him bt swayam did
"rey tu..." swayam stopped as sharon shushed him
"aaj nhi swayam... tumhe bhi pta hai taani galat kar rhi hai...khudko bhi aur rey ko bhi hurt kar rhi hai"
then sharon said in a joking tone " vaise mujhe toh laga tha ki tum rey ke alawa aur kisi ko bhi apna JIJA JI nhi banaoge?"

"offcourse sharon bt..." swayam stopped as he knew now it didn't matter only if rey could make taani understand thet he hasn't moved on and he cannot move on...

scene shift

rey took her to a lone place where he could talk to her it was a small park which was surrounded wid trees n no one was there

"ye sab kya hai taani kyun kar rhi ho aisa tum "
"itna aasaan hai kya mujhe bhool jana"
"taani mai move on nhi kar sakta"
"infact mai wo rey bhi nhi hun , wo rey jo taani se pyaar karta hai wo , wo tumhare saath hi chala gya tha taani"
"pls ye sab mat karo plss..." n rey breaks down

"rey maine aapse pehle bhi kaha hai ki i love u bt hum kabhi bhi saath nhi reh sakte"

"kyun nhi reh sakte taani?" rey caught her shoulders n asked her

"rey saath mei rehkar kuch accha nhi hua hai "
"isliye i've decided to move on"

"toh u don't love me?" asked rey now angry

"i love u rey par..."

"par kya taani? ek taraf tum kehti ho u love me aur dusri taraf tum mere saath nhi rehna chahti! kyun?"

"rey fir se wohi baatein. maine pehle bhi kaha tha aur ab bhi keh rhi hun ki hum dono ke liye ye hi accha hai... alag rehna"
taani takes some backsteps n turns to go bt rey holds her wrist n turns her to face him again

"mere liye ye accha nhi hai taani, tum samajhti kya ho apne aap ko , meri lyf ke decisions bhi tum logi"

taani says softly " meri lyf ke decisions toh hamesha aapne hi liye rey , wo sirf one sided relationship thi, maine toh kabhi kuch decide nhi kiya na rey... aapne chaha toh dur chali gyi aur aapne chahha toh app paas aa gye, rey kabhi aapne socha tha ki main kya chahti hun... aapko pta tha ki main aapke saath rehna chahti hun bt mere sapno ke baare mei kuch nhi pta tha aapko... aur ab koi faida nhi hai rey kyunki mere sapne hi badal gye hain"
"bye rey"
taani runs away as rey had left her hand

"nhi taani tumhaare sapne badle nhi hai bas ek cheez badli hai ki ab vo sapne sirf tumhare nhi mere bhi hai... tumhare saath rehne ke liye agar iss sapne ko pura karna hoga toh main wo bhi karunga taani" said rey wid determination n went home wid lots of work to do from tomorrow...
afterall he had to manaofy taani...

hope u all like it n this was not at all my best ...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
It is the best OS ! I've ever read ! On this concept !!
So nicely written *claps*
U've described each n evry thing so nicely n perfectly *pats*
Love each n evry thing !
Loved TaaYam n gang 😊
Loved Each n evry emotional dialogue of Taani n Rey 😭
In short ! A brilliant OS !!

P.s : m frm phone...so when i'll come frm lappy.. i'll pm ur os to all my buddies ! Thank u so very much for writing this ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wonderful os
hats off to u
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Posted: 11 years ago
#4
Superb one shot..
Hope same happens in D3
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Posted: 11 years ago
#5
superb os...loved it so much...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#6
superb os😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
#7
Actually kuch jayada hi accha tha
Real jaisa
Per I want 2 see taarey together 4 forever
Do write more dear
Waiting 4 yr new os
Bye till then
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Posted: 11 years ago
#8
Loved it so much..!
*bows* Perfectly Written!!
Keep Writing 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome os...loved it to the core😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#10
awesum OS ..! 👏
luvd it alot ..! 👍🏼

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