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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hi people...!!!
I am Natasha once again...
I am really upset that a newbie can't post more that 10 posts day..
But never mind..Big smileBig smileBig smile
Posting my first FF on JA...
Hope you like comment and appreciate...
Sorry I won't be able to reply all...
And Mini sorry can't Join RT AT now after a Senior Member as they can post unlimited na I think as Tani told...

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Based on:
"No matter what has happened. No matter what you've done. No matter what you will do. I will always love you. I swear it."
--Defiance by C.J. Redwine

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'Hmmm...Hoshiyaar bas ab kaal ki der hai fir Jodha Begum humari zindagi se aur is duniyaan se humesha ke liye chali jaiengi'
'Bilkul sahi kaha aapne Malika. Chali thi aapse muqaabla karne ke liye.'
'Hoshiyaar humare se koi bhi muqaabla nehi kar sakta voh do kodi ki Jodha Begum bhi nehi'

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Jalal's Room
'Kya vo Jodha Begum ke Bhai Jaan the'
'Haan Jalal beta vo Jodha Begum ke Bhai Jaaan the'
'To fir yeh baccha kiska hai Ammi Jaan'
'Kaunsa bacha Jalal'
'Ammi Jaan...bas kijiye aap chahe Jodha Begum ko kitna bhi chahti hoon maagar unki jhoothi tarak dari mat kariye'
'Jalal Mham ne ek aisi jadibooti banvayi jise khane se ek aurat ko pet se hone ke lakshan hote hain jaate hai usne wahan se yahan Ruqaiya Begum ko pohanchaya aur aage usse Resham ke hathoon Jodha Begum ko pilaya...aur Khwaja Shera ko daolaat d kar Jodha Begum ko garvbati khelaya...humare pas sabot hai'
'Kya sabot'


Hamida claps and a man comes with some of the body gaurd.

'Kahiye Sheikh' said Hamida
'Shehensha humare hathoon hi Maha Anga ne eh khat asur jadibooti bhij wai thi'

'BAAASSS' Jalal shouted and went out of the room.

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Jodha's room

She was slept on her bed. Her eyes were swollen off crying. Jalal entered the room. All maids only Akdha in the room.Jalal sat besides her creased her face and kissed her on her head and said to himself 'Aap pe bharosa na karke humne sabse badi gaalti ki hai Jodha Begum ab iska pashchatav bhi hum karenge' saying this he leaves the room...

But this hand is held by Jodha Begum Jodha in sleep murmuring 'Shehensha aapne hum par bharosa kyun nehi kiya...kyun'. Hearing this Jalal busted in tears. He left Jodha's hand and went out of the room rubbing his tears off.

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Next Morning Diwan-I-Khaas

'Baadab Babulaiza Hoshiyaar Shehensha-E-Hind Jalal Ud Din Mohmaad padar rahe hain' said the speaker. All stood up as Jalal came in and sat on his seat. All the important people came.

Ruqaiya was the most happy out there with a huge smile assured that Jodha will be dead by tomorrow...

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Precap:

'Dhaak' a voice echoed in the whole court...
'Shehensha yeh kya kiya aapne' shouted Jodha
'To kya karte hum' with a teary voice
'Par yeh aapki'
'Jo bhi ho Jodha yeh hume tumse zyade priye nehi hain' shouted Jalal in front of the court.

Ruqaiya full in tears
Maham in shock
Hamida happiest person on the earth
Cheapudin and Adham Khan amused

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How was it...???
Acha tha...??
Nehi tha...???

PS: Bura bhi ho accha comment karna please...šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
First time na...

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Posted: 12 years ago
#2
This One is AmazingšŸ‘šŸ‘
NiCe start...want to read more😃
Plz Continue sOon...n do pm me whenever u update😳

P.S lOve the title😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Clapping clapping...šŸ‘šŸ‘šŸ‘
Awesome little sis...😃😃😃

Never knew you had this talent...
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Wow nice update...
Do pm me n cntinue
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Yaar Nats awesome!!! It's really nice...
Want to see how u shale this story up.
I'm sure it's different!
Pm me whenever u update..
Nice one Yaar!
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Posted: 12 years ago
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very wel written...nice ff...😊
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wow nice,plz add ff in ur title...continue soon.
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i really like it. plzzz update soon and pm me when u do update.
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Just Loved it Yaar!!ā¤ļø
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Plz Continue Soon!! 😃
Can't wait for the next part!! 😳
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Very nice..waiting for ur update...

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