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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey, MBians!!
Trying to write my first story, inspired by Rishbala ofcourse!!






Prolouge:
"MADHUBALA!!! can't you do one thing correctly? I told you to get my award trophies cleaned by Mangesh and arranged in the living area. The producer will be here anytime soon!!" said a breathing fire RK.
It had been 6 months since his paralysis had been cured and he had turned into a more overbearing control freak than ever before. Pabho had been packed off to the ashram but things for Madhubala hadn't been easy.
Hearing her husband shout, she closed her puffed eyes that had somehow dipped in to a pool of dark circles. Her tired mind saying "not again".

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Interesting start. Please continue. Looking forward to the next update. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice Start
Continue Soon 😛
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Its good. nice try . cont soon dear.

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