MANVEER FF:A STRANGE LOVE STORY

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@parish99

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Posted: 12 years ago

#71

Hey!
awesome update dear, loved it
please update next part soon
& thanks for the pm😃

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Kritika

@Karkit

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Posted: 12 years ago

#72

Nice update
read all parts to gud
love it
thanks fr pm n update soon

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anushruthi

@anushruthi

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Posted: 12 years ago

#73

awesome ff

just read all the parts

very nice

Cont soon and PM me if possible

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angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#74

hey nice update

but y manyata hates uday even unnati knew she luv him in past

so what happen and what uday is talking about

plsss update soon

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angleroops

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Posted: 12 years ago

#75

update update update update update update

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srishty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#76

CHAPTER SEVEN
In devgarh palace
manyata,j,shivani,sanaya all were present there.everything was fine between sanaya and manyata.and all the credit goes to unnati.
They were discussing about their cloths,j's engagment etc.suddenly j said
j:oh i forgot you know what manyata ne kal uday se bare payar se bath ki.
Manyata blushed hearing this.
Looking at manyata sanaya asked j.
S:really i missed it.[:-(]
m:tum logto aise beheave karrahai ho jaise hum pahle kabhi uday se bath nahi ki.
Sh:ki par itne payarse bohat din badh ki.
They all laughed.except manyata.
M:very funny.
***
on the other hand in jaigarh palace
uday was waiting for manyata desparately.
Uday to himself:are princess abh jaldi ayo nah.tumhe dekhne k liye hamari jannikal jarahi hain.
When uday heard a female voice.
V:oh uday tumhe dekhne k liye hamari bhi jan nikal gaye thi.
Uday turned and was shocked.
U:tum
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manyata asked:waise kya hamhi invited hain ya or bhi koye hain.
Sh:patanahi.
Suddenly vijay came
vb:tumlog abhi bhi yahi ho oha unnati hame call kar kar k hamari janhinikal di.
J:sorry sorry hamlog abhi nikal rahain ne
they left.
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u:tum yaha kaya karrahain ho?
Coming close v:tumto bebafa niklai par tumhari behan tum jaisa nahi hain hamain use ne bolaya hain.
U:choti ne.
V:han
u:dekho tum yahase jao kabhi bi manyata asakhti hain.
V:toh?
U:toh matlab hamari hone wali biwi hain bho.
V:jo tumse bilkul payar nahi karti.

Edited by shankrishty - 12 years ago

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srishty

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Posted: 12 years ago

#77

Uday tried to controll his anger.
U:dekho urvashi..a
UR:tumhai abhi tak hamara nam yadh hain.dekha hame pata tha ki tum bhi humse utnahi payar karti ho jitna ki hum.
U:aisa kuch nahi hain.i dont love u.
Ur:toh phir kise payar karte ho.us manyata ko.
It was enough for uday.he shouted.
U:UNNATI UNNATI
unnati came.
Un:what happened?Why are u shouting like this?
U:as if you dont know.what is she doing in our palace?
Unnati noticed urvashi
Un:urvashi
Ur:hi unnati.
They hugged.after breaking their hug.
Un:kabh aye tum?
Looking at uday ur:kuch der pahle.
U:tumlog baat hamare room k bahar jake bhi karsakhti ho.
They understood what uday meant.
So They left.
After sometime manyata,j,shivani,sanaya all came.
Manyata,j,shivani,sanaya all started shouting:unnati unnati where are you?
Hearing there shouting uday,unnati and urvashi all came.
After seeing urvashi alls' smile vanished
M:RAJKUMARI URVASHI
*srishty*

Edited by shankrishty - 12 years ago

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Kritika

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Posted: 12 years ago

#78

Nice update
im nt wrong then urvashi uday first mangether

Edited by Karkit - 12 years ago