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Maddy

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Posted: 11 years ago

#81

Hey Nice update

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Update soon.

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SNOWWHITE83

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Posted: 11 years ago

#82

nice update .
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ALISHA20014

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Posted: 11 years ago

#83

aap bht acha likhti ho lakin plz aap long udpates diya karo aur plz aap jaldi se next update kardo.

Plz kardo na aap... PPPLLLZZZ

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---ButterFly---

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Posted: 11 years ago

#84

Amazing just totally loved it

Yar give long update

Your sory was superb lovely

When u gonna update

I m waiting eagerly

Sorry for late comment

But ,ere pms delete hogaye tha

Loved your story very much

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

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srishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#86

chapter 8
Everyone was in manyata's room.all were talking with urvashi.no one even looked at manyata.they all seemed so happy to see urvashi that they forgot about manyata.but it didnt bother manyata.she seemed like lost in herself.She was thinking about the which changed her life completely.she was truely madly deeply in love with uday.but her marriage was fixed with someone else.she was hell upset.everyone knew that she loves uday.even uday did know it.but he was acting like he didnt know about it earlier.manyat also called him a lot of times.but all went in vain.first he didnt receive her calls and if he did than it seemed like he didnt interested in talking with her.it irritated manyata the most.one day it crossed the limited.she found out that uday marriage was fixed with YUVRANI URVASHI.that day manyata called him for the last time.
Flashback
Manyata dialed uday's number but no one received it.it continued for half an hour.finally someone answered her call.
M:hello

Edited by shankrishty - 11 years ago

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srishty

@shankrishty

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Posted: 11 years ago

#87

it was none other than uday who received the call.
U:han bolo manyata
Manyata didnt reply.
U:hello manyata are you there
Manyata replied nothing.
U:manyata
M:uday
U:han bolo
M:ham apse ek sawal ponche?
U:han poncho
M:uday tumhari shaadi tai hogaye hain na?
This time uday didnt say anything
M:ye baat such hain na
U:dekho manyata
M:han ya na uday
U:haan ye bath such hain.
There was a completely silent moment.manyata broke the silence.
M:congratualations uday
she disconnect the line.she didnt give uday a chance to say something.and even uday didnt call her back.
A few days later maharani mrinalini devi declared that the next crown princess is princess manyata kumari.after that a lot of thing happened raj broke their marriage proposal.then j and raj fell in love.and the most iteresting part was urvashi refussed to marry uday.when it happened the greatest decided to fix manveer marriage.and that shameless excepted it.
FLASHBACK END

Edited by shankrishty - 11 years ago