Taarey os-after 4 years part 20 page 38

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hi guys I am trying to write a story on our own Taarey please give me your reviews
in this story whole group is there and they all are become successful dancers and they are having their own dance academy which is D3:SHINING STARS ACADEMY and Swaron are now married couple and Rey is all alone but always miss Taani a lot
REY aur SWAYAM D3 ke office me baithke kuch event ki planning karte rahte hai ,Rey ka laptop Swayam ke samne hota hai aur vo kuch kam kar raha hota hai achankase ek file open ho jati hai aur usme sare vo letters hote hai jo Rey ne Taani ko yad karke likhe hue hote hai aur har letter ke akhir me bas ek hi wish hoti hai ki "Taani please come back" ye aise letters hai jiske bare me kisiko bhi nahi pata even Rey ke best friend ko bhi aaj pata chalta hai .
Swayam: Rey yar chal ab ghar chalet hai
Rey: are achankase kya hua tuze abhi tak to thik tha bol na kya hua dude
Swayam:tuze kya hua hai Rey ab bas kar Taani chali gayi hai kabhi na aane ke liye kyun aur kab tak uska wait karega tu aur tune hi kaha tha na ki tune use promise diya hai ki you will move on phir kahan hua hai tu move on aaj bhi vahi khada hai jahan Taani tuze chodke gayi thi
Rey: han yar promise to kiya tha par use bhulke kisi aur ke sath move on hone ka nahi bas use yad karke kabhi na rone ka kabhi upset na hone ka promise kiya tha and vo main aaj bhi fulfil kar raha hoon
Swayam: par Rey ye right...
Rey: right( Rey smiles) ab kya right and kya wrong vo main sochta hi nahi par han ek hai ki main Taani se pyar karta tha karta hoon aur karta rahunga please yar tu to samajh
Swayam(angrily) behen hai phir bhi muze Taani pe bahot ghussa ata hai tuze dekhke kyun kiya usne aisa aur tuze kya chod diya usne sabkohi bhula diya main bhai hokar aaj nahi janta ki vo kahan hai kaisi hai aur kya kar rahi hai main to chod infact jodhpur me bhi kisiko nahi pata ye kya bat hui yar chal jane de chal ghar chalet hai
Rey:nahi Yar bahot disturb feel kar raha hoon thodi der akela rehna chahta hoon tu ja
Swayam: par Rey
Rey: tu ja dude please understand
Swayam: ok chal see u tomorrow main bhagta hoon nahi to mere ghar ka siren bajne lagega (both of them smile at each other,but Swayam knows that smile was fake from Rey's side but still he left from there)
(in D3 office Rey remember all that moment which he spent with Taani with teary eyes and he said:
Rey: kahan ho tum Taani ,please aa jao I LOVE U TAANI
( scene shifted to ooty)
ek khoob suratsi ladki with plain pink saree with sleevless blouse ,long golden brown hair till waist,small chain in her neck and small ear rings very simple but beauty is out of this world)
Girl:Reyhan .utho baby mumma ko office jana hai bachha see its alrady 7:30 bachha please mumma ka good boy uth jao
( ek cute sa 3 1/2 year ka but very handsome with lots of attitude vala ladka sar se blanket utarke kehta hai:
what mumma please 10 minsh shone do na
girl: nahi babu please please utho utho
Boy:oh mom ok uth jata hoon
girl : my sweet baby
(vo ladki use tayar karti hai aur school drop karke apne office chali jati hai)
IN THE OOTY OFFICE
(that girl is a event manager in small company ,she just sat on her chair and start her computer and say
good morning Krishanji and Thank you hamesha mere aur reyhan ke sath rehne ke liye thank u aur han jaise aap hamara khayal rakhte hai vaise unka bhi rakhiye
and she open another photo and said good morning and I love u itne me uski frien nisha vahan aati hai
Nisha:hi
Girl : hi kaisi hai (lekin uski ankh me tears hote hai jo nisha dekhti hai)
Nisha : main ekdam first class par tu? ye rojka hai tera tu usase itna pyar karti hai to chali kyun nahi jati hmm please apne liye na sahi reyhan ke liye tuze vapas jana chahiye Taani use bhi to apne papa ki zaroorat hai aur tu tu kitna pyar karti hai ab tak Rey se meri bat man chali ja mera dil kehta hai ki vo aaj bhi tera wait kar raha hoga
Taani:Nisha main thik hoon aur Reyhan bhi thik hai sab thik hai chal ab tu kam kar go go baba nahi to boss datenge
Nisha:(in her mind) tu aise kabhi nahi manegi last 2 years se keh rahi hoon par tu hamesha tal jati hai oh please Taani ke krishnaji kuch idea do kuch aisa karo ki main is family ko complete kar paaon please
(I know ki tum log sab jan hi gaye honge ki vo Taani hai yes guys ooty vali aur rehan ki mom hai hamari Taani aur uske papa hai yes Rey par Rey ko is bare me kuch nahi pata par jaldi hi aisa kuch hoga ki use pata chal jayega )
Precap:Taani ko uske boss bulate hai aur kehte hai ki kisi event ke liye use 7 din Mumbai me jana hoga aur vo unke purane clients hai to unhe sirf Taani pe trust hai, Taani shocked aur ye plan hai Nisha ka Taani ko Mumbai me bhejneka )
Index :
Part 1: page 1
part 2: page 2
part 3: page 4
part4:page 5
part 5:page 6
part 6:page 7
part 7:page 8
part8:page 10
part 9:page 11
part 10:page 14
part 11:page 16
part 12:page 17
part 13 :page 20
part 14:page 22
part 15:page 24
part 16:page 26
part 17:page 30
part18:page 32
part19:page36
part20:page38
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Awesome start
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Part 2:
Taani Rey ke bare me sochte sochte kam me busy hone ki koshish karne lagti hai ,Nisha ye sab dekhke bahot upset hai aur vo kya kare aisa soch rahi hai par uske mind me koi idea hi nahi aa raha hai
Scene shifted to Mumbai
(Rey still in D3 office and Swayam and Sharon reach there )
Swayam: lagta hai ye ghar gaya hi nahi kya Karen Sharon main aise nahi dekh sakta isko
Sharon: I know Swayam lekin tum practically soch rahe ho aur pyar me practically kuch nahi hota kyunki pyar ka connectin dil se hai to...
Swayam:(teasingly) kya bat hai sweetheart ye bate tum kar rahi ho hmm
Sharon: han Swayam main kar rahi hoon tumhare sath rehke aur apne best friend ko pyar ke liye tadapte hue dekhke pyar ki importance agar main nahi samjhi to mera tumse pyar karna bekar ho jayega
( Rey utha jata hai aur Swaron ko dekhta hai)
Rey: are tum log itni jaldi aa gaye
Swayam: jaldi dude its 11:30 so tu ratbhar yahan tha isliye tuze aisa lag raha hai
Rey:oh so sorry muze time ka pata hi nahi chala
Swayam:han vo to dikh hi raha hai ki tu time ko chod hi nahi raha hai pakadke baitha hai ( Sharon Swayam ko hat pakadkar chup rehneka ishara kerti hai)
Rey: u are right dude aur ek bat kal rat maine decide ki hai ki main time ko chodunga bhi nahi vo time main vapas leke aaonga
Swayam and Sharon confuse hoke Rey ko dekhte hai
Sharon: means kya keh raha hai tu ?
Rey: matlab ye ki main Taani ko dhoondhke laonga maine bahot socha yar ki us waqt vo chali gayi to maine use jane diya lekin bad me maine kyun nahi use dhoondha main pyar karta hoon na usase to kaise har man li maine no no ways lekin abhibhi der nahi hui hai so main Taani ko vapas apni life me lake rahunga
Swayam: lekin Rey kahan dhoondhega tu hum koi bhi to nahi jante ki vo kahan hai phir its difficlut yar
Rey:nahi Swayam Difficult to itne sal the jo maine uske bina gujare han its not easy I know par jisko maine itni asanise khoya tha agar use dhoondhna mushkil na hua to phir mere pyar ka kya fayda
(ye sunke Swayam and Sharon happy bhi hote hai aur tense bhi )
Rey: chal dude main fresh hoke aata hoon(and rey went to washroom)
Swayam: Sharon kya Rey jo soch raha hai vo sahi hai agar use Taani nahi mili phir kya hoga ?
Sharon: vo to hum nahi jante par I think Rey ko ye karna chahiye kam se kam uske dil se ye boz hat jayega ki usne kabhi Taani ko pane ki koshish hi nahi ki so I think hume uska sath dena chahiye
whole gang: Sharon is right
(Swayam aur Sharon piche dekhte hai,puri gang vaha rehti hai )
whole gang:humne suna aur hume Rey ka sath dena chahiye
(Scene Shifted to OOty)
Boss: Nisha Mr.Singhania hamare bahot bade client hai aur tumhe to pata hai ki unke ooty ke ghar me jab bhi koi function ya event hota hai unka trust sirf humpe hai par is bar unka event Mumbai me hai actually unki wedding anniversary hai so unka abhi call aya tha ki vo pura event traditional style me chahte hai to hamare kisi do representative ko Mumbai jana hoga to ek nam to muze tumhara laga lekin aur kaun ja sakta hai?
Nisha(in her mind ) oh bhagvan do na idea kaise bhejun main Taani ko Mumbai
Boss:Nisha tum sun Rahi ho Nisha are dhyan kaha hai tumhara?
Nisha : ha ha boss han maine suna kaun jayega delhi right?
Boss:Nisha delhi nahi Mumbai ?
Nisha :Mumbai?(in her mind she say wow bhagvan kya idea diya hai) oh muze laga Delhi Mumbai na Sir kyun na hum Taani ko bheje
Boss: bheje matalab tumhe bhi uske sath jana hai
Nisha : oh No problem hum dono chale jayenge
Boss:lekin Taani ke bte ka kya karegi vo
Nisha: hum use sath leke jayenge uska jana to bahot zaroori hai
Boss:confused )kyun?
Nisha: vo rahega nahi apni mom ke bina so..
Boss: ok fine vaise bhi Taani ko tradional event ka experience bhi hai aur vo expert hai event manage karne me bulao Taani ko
(Nisha Taani ko boss ke cabin me leke aati hai aur boss use Mumbai event ke bare me kehta hai )
Taani(shocked): nahi sir main Reyhan ko chodke kaise jaongi sir isase acha aap kisi aur ko bhej dijiye
Boss:nahi Taani ye event bahot khas hai hamare liye so please as elderly main keh raha hoon please chali jao
(Taani soch me pad jati hai ki jaon ya nahi jaon aur piche se Nisha apne man me kehti hai ki han bol han bol please bhagvan isko akal do aur ye han bolo )
Taani: ok sir main jaoongi lekin kya main Reyhan ko leke jaoon?
Boss:of course Taani jao ok to tumhe parson ki flight se nikalna hai jao tayyari karo aur Nisha madam aap bhi
Taani and Nisha : yes Sir Thanks
Boss:ok go
(Taani aur Nisha Cabin ke bahar aate hai,Nisha bahot khush hai lekin Taani bahot dar gayi hai)
Nisha: kya hua ? aise chehre pe bara kyun baj gaye tere
Taani:Nisha vapas usi sheher usi waqt me jana pad raha hai bahot dar lag raha hai kahin kisine muze dekh liya to kitne sawalonke jawab dene honege aur aisa kuch hua to kya kahungi main mere apnonse aur Reyhanse kahan leke ja rahi hai meri life muze samajha nahi aa raha hai chal kam khatam karke Reyhan ko school se leke ghar jati hoon tayyaari bhi to karni hai
Nisha (in her mind) ekdam sahi jagah leke ja rahi hai jahan tuze aur Reyhan ko bahot pehlese hona chahiye tha bas tu apani tayyari kar main apni matalb Rey ki sari info jo nikalni hai aur in do dilon ko muze kisi bhi halat me milvana hai bas to chal Nisha beta lag ja kam pe and (she simles)
Precap: Reyhan Mumbai ke bare me bahot sawal puchta hai aur Taani use achese jwab nahi deti itne me ek bag me use Swayam aur Rey ki photo milti hai aur vo puchta hai ki ye kaun hai ?Taani shocked
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nice update, taani in mumbai, will meet rey and taarey moments,

please update next part soon.


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