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Posted: 11 years ago
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Poem: Are You Okay??



Someone asks . " Are you okay??"

No I am not..
I am not okay at all
I feel lonely , I feel alone
I feel abandoned as if no one is my own!!

I feel lost , I feel confused
No one to talk to , No one to listen
All busy with their lives
Not a single soul to spare some time!!

I hide my feelings
I hide my thoughts
I hide my tears and just move on..
Each day brings more fear
Each day becomes worse..
But i just move on!!

Life becomes harder with each passing day
I really need someone to talk too
Someone to listen'
Someone to pull me out of my own world..

But all I reply with is - " YES"



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Posted: 11 years ago
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You amaze me sometimes sweety!😛

Your poems are awesome!👏👏👏👏👏

And remember, I'll always be there for you even in my busy schedule!😉

Wanna talk to you... Missing you baby!😭😭😭
Edited by Angelic_Friend - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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It's really awesome Ridhzz...
I luv ur poems always...
u have an amazing talent...
keep writing dear😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Angelic_Friend

You amaze me sometimes sweety!😛

Your poems are awesome!👏

And remember, I'll always be there for you even in my busy schedule!😉

Wanna talk to you... Missing you baby!😭😭😭



Thanks choco😃

Arrey dont cry naa...
We will talk soon naa..
U give ur exams first n get rid of them
n then We will have lots n lots of chat😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: samtarey

it's awesome buddy👏


thanks a lot😊

P.S i will read n comment on ur story soon 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Ridzi123



Thanks choco😃

Arrey dont cry naa...
We will talk soon naa..
U give ur exams first n get rid of them
n then We will have lots n lots of chat😊



Sure sweety!😉

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Posted: 11 years ago
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I just love all of ur poems, including this one. You write them so flawlessly. I don't have words for them. They r amazing. Keep writing. Its always a pleasure to read what u write! 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome poem ritzi
really loved it 🤗
u written very well 👏
Keep written more ritzi 😉


Thanks for pm ❤️
Edited by Rabertmona - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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yo rock ridzi the widzi👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome POEM!!!
loved it!!!
wanna talk to u yaar
jaldi se aaja naa dhanno!!!

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