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Posted: 11 years ago
MAAN TRYING TO SAY SORRY BUT CANT GET THE WORDS OUT

WONDER WHAT WILL HE DO NEXT TO APOLOZISE
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Marital Tie - A Journey In Marriage


Part 40

An Unsaid Sorry,

The dinner was quite in the Khurana Mansion, Dev too joined them on the diner, and they finished the dinner and said an good night and went to their respective room, Maan was feeling restless as he haven't said the sorry, "Maan you have to tell her the sorry, she deserve to know that the mistake was yours and you are feeling sorry for your mistake, Be an Gentle man Maan, after all she respects you so much," Maan was speaking to himself,

And he finally decide to go and speak with Geet and looked at his watch, it's 10, it's late, but still he decided to go and see if she is awake, Maan then went to her room and looked in, Geet was standing near the window looking at the sky, she was thinking about her roller coaster life, one day tears, the nest day smile,

"Baba ji, I am happy that Maan Ji, had understood me and he is not upset on me, and I am so happy that he is back to normal, please Baba ji, don't make him upset anymore, please, I want him to be happy always, and a smile on his face when he sees me and a little love for me in his heart, that's all I am asking," Geet was talking to her Baba ji,

Maan saw her turning with her back to him, "Maan what are you thinking, just go, say a sorry, and that's it, come back," Maan said to himself and stood at the door and knocked it, but Geet was too deep into her whole world and she didn't hear his knock, Maan then stepped in, "Geet," he called out as he walked in, but she was still in her world and didn't hear him nor his presence was felt, "What happened to her, she is standing like a frozen statue," Maan thought and went a bit closer and called her name, and still no reaction, Maan had enough, so he went too close to her and saw her staring at the open sky,


"Geet," He called slowly into her ears, his hot breath hitting her ears, her felt a shiver but thought she must be dreaming, "Geet," Maan yelled in her ear, suddenly pulling her back to sense and she turned suddenly and as Maan was standing so close, Geet lost her balance as she trembled see him so close and stepped back falling backwards to her window, Maan held her by her waist and pulled her back, and she fall on to his rock hard body, holding his shoulders for balance,

Maan now held her by her both side of the waist to support her and stood there frozen as she fall on him, Geet felt his hot breath on his bare skin on her neck, she felt a shiver, and even without her knowledge she pressed her hands on his shoulders slightly, and Maan was stud and her softness under his holds made his heart beat fast,

Maan could feel her heart beat raising and her body heating up and he just pressed her waist more and held it tight and he doesn't knew why he did so but he did and his act made Geet to look shocked and more nervous, by she was so mesmerized by his hold and fragrance and so she slowly closed her eyes and drown into his magic,


Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi


They didn't move or even make a slight sign, they were drawn into a world even without their permission, a slight grin appeared on Maan's lips as he felt Geet's reactions and he liked it and was enjoying it too, "

He could too feel the her aroma spreading in the air, making his breathe inhale the sweetness around him and he was feeling the heat increasing in his body

Rooh ne chhu li jism ki khushboo tu jo paas aayi

Tu jo paas aayi, tu jo paas aayi

Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi


Slowly Geet pulled herself from Maan, but still holding his shoulder and looked into his eyes and he too looked into hers, her lips parted and inviting and face turned red and she looked so beautiful in the moon light hitting her face, Maan was still holding her waist having no heart to take his hands of her, They both were looking into each other eyes as if searching of something, something which is deep inside their heart,

kab tak hosh sambhale koi,

hosh ude to ud jaane do..

dil kab seedhi raah chala hai

raah mude to mud jaane do

tere khayal mein doob ke aksar

achchi lage tanhaai..


Saans me teri saans mili toh mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi

Mujhe saans aayi, Mujhe saans aayi


They both were starting at each other just a two inches gap left between them, "Maan what the hell are you doing," he conscious screamed and Maan blinked out of his own spell and looked at Geet, who was watching him mesmerized,

"Geet" He called and she shivered a bit and looked at him, "what am I doing Baba ji." She thought and looked at him, and Maan stepped back a bit, and took a deep breath, "Not now too, I have to say it," Maan thought, "Geet, actually I need to tell you one thing, that, that yesterday, I, hmm, I, misunderstood you," Maan finished and Geet looked at him shocked,

"I should have believe you, you were not lying and I am so angry and so I wasn't thinking straight, thus, I, I hurt you," Maan said, Geet was looking at him, "he found the truth", a small smile appeared on her face, "Thank you Baba Ji", she prayed, Maan was trembling and looked totally calm, "I should not have yelled like that, doubted you like that," Maan said slowly,

"Geet, I am, I am," Maan said slowly and Geet knew what he was going to say, Maan let out an huge breathe, "I am," Maan started but before he could finished, Geet kept her hands on his mouth blocking his words and Maan looked at her in shock, and looked at her hand on his mouth, and Geet slowly took her hand away, looking down.


"Please, don't say it, I know you had never said an sorry to any one and you don't like to say it too, and I too don't like hear that word from you, and why should you say sorry, all the mistake was mine, if only I had told you about seeing him in the hospital that day even and these things would not have happened," Geet said slowly looking into Maan's eyes,

"Geet, don't take the blame on your head, the mistake was mine, I misunderstood you, I hurt you, and I am responsible for your pain," Maan said in his own boss voice, "And whoever does a mistake, has to accept it and apologize, even if it's MSK," Maan said in his decision tone,

"But when someone can understand your heart itself, what's the necessity of saying you're feelings in words, I understood that you are feeling bad for hurting me, the moment you caught my hand in the afternoon, and I never wanted an explanation, I was just happy that you found the truth" Geet said slowly,


And Maan looked at her and she smiled a bit, her love for him was showering in her eyes, Maan was just taken aback by it, he looked at her and without a word went away, leaving Geet in confusion, she looked at him rushing out of her room, "What? What happened, why did he went away like that, did I said something which I shouldn't have," Geet was confused,

Maan reached his room, went inside his washroom and stood under his hot shower, the hot water was running down his body creating no effect on him, his closed his eyes and all he could see was her big eyes staring at him with love, "you are my life, you are my only life, my are my only life," Geet screaming voice hit his ears and he opened his eyes,

"No No, I can't let her fall into me and my life, I had hurt her enough, and I will not anymore, she has to be diverted, she had to get away from me," Maan thought as he came out and wore his night dress, "I need to find a way, to keep her away," Maan thought as he sat before his laps,

Just then Adi's phone came, "Maan's sir, I am not disturbing you right, I am so sorry sir, it's an emergency," Adi said scared of calling Maan at late night, "No Adi, I am awake, so what the emergency," Maan asked, "Sir, our client had send an email and it says that Mr.Castle, he is coming to India in 10 days and he wanted us to see the sample ad and the advertising Team, and sign the contract and finalize everything" Adi said,

"What, but he was said he will be coming only after a month," Maan said shocked, "Yes sir, I knew, but now, we have to revise our month plan and turn into as 10 days plan," Adi said, "Adi, tomorrow morning before I come, arrange for the Meeting, ok, I want everyone there," Maan ordered and Adi said an Ok and a good night,

Maan cut the call, "God, within ten days," Maan thought and suddenly something hit his mind, and a grin appeared in his face, Good, Good, Maan thought, It would work atleast for a few days, Maan thought and went to his sleep,

Morning sunshine shined bright, and everything was going as usual, "Geet," Maan called her out loud, as he came to the hall and Geet rushed to him from the kitchen, and stood before him, "Geet, you are suppose to go to the office early today, Adi there will explain you everything. Just Get ready and go there," Maan ordered and Geet looked at him puzzled,

"But ji, o, breakfast and Dev," Geet said looking at him, "Geet, I will take care, just do what I said, I want you to be there in the office before 8.30, understood" Maan said in his boss voice and Geet just nodded and went to her room as it was already beyond 8, "Baba ji, what happened now," Geet thought as she got ready,

Geet then said a bye to Dev, and went to the office, "Good morning Geet," Adi welcomed her into the empty office, "Adi sir, what happened," Geet asked as she looked at him, and Adi explain about the sudden change in the project, "What, 10 days, with in that how will we find the model, Direction team, and shooting,"

"Geet I know, so only Maan sir had asked me to prepare of an meeting and he said he will send you to help me," Adi said and Geet nodded, the both of them started to prepare the files, plans everything related to the project and slowly the staff members too started to come, and Adi and Geet informed them all about the suddenly meeting, "Geet, take those files and go to the conference room and check the projector once, I will do the rest here," Adi said and Geet too nodded and too the files and went out,

Geet arranged the files and checked the projector and waited for Adi, and she felt a nervous due to the sudden change and so she went near the window and opened it and was having some fresh air hit her face, Maan just the entered the room and sat down without noticing Geet's presence, the wind hit his hair and so he looked around to see the window,

Maan was stud to see Geet smiling, closing her eyes and enjoying the fresh air on her face, her happy smiling face gave Maan a grin and he was staring at her, Geet felt weird as if someone was staring at her, she turned and found Maan looking at her and she smiled at him, Maan then cut his grin and signed her to closed the window and she too did and came towards him,


As she came near him, Adi too came in and he asked permission to call the other and Maan nodded and in few minutes the Conference hall was filled and everyone sat there looking at him puzzled, Adi then asked permission to start his speech and Maan nodded and Adi started to explain the current situation,

"What within 10 days, how is even possible MK," Sasha asked shocked, "Sir, right now, Direction team is ready, Mr. Jay had said he is fully set to work with us and will start the work at anytime," Adi said, "That's a good news Adi," Maan said, "You go and meet him and check his profiles once again and finalized him if it's ok," Maan said and Adi nodded,

"ah and take," Maan paused thinking, "God, not this Sasha again," Adi thought in his mind, "And take Geet with you, she will be doing this project with you," Maan said Making everyone to look at him in shock, "What" Geet looked at him, and Sasha was shocked to Dead, "MK, this much big project and Geet? What are you saying," Sasha asked in shock,

Adi was happy that it wasn't Sasha, "Sasha, what's wrong in it, I am giving her the project, I am just asking her to help Adi in his work, Adi is there na, and also you have to take care of the construction project going around na," Maan said and Sasha looked at him and nodded, "Sasha, Adi and Geet will take care of the Ad works, and you and Me could take care of the constructions," Maan said,

Sasha Immediately turned cool as Maan said that, "Hell, who care about the Ad project as long as MK is with me," Sasha thought, and Now she too wanted Geet to work in the Ad project, "Right MK, and if she works with someone as talented as Adi, then she too will have an opportunity to learn more," Sasha said suddenly making Geet and Adi too shock,


"Ok, then lets continue the other discussion," Maan said and Adi continued his speech and they planned everything perfectly, "Ok, then I think everything is clear, let's start the work now," Maan said and everyone dispersed except Maan and Geet, she was looking scared, "What happened Geet," Maan asked looking at her,

"Sir I don't know whether I can handle these things, what if something goes wrong," Geet asked, "Geet Adi is there na, he will guide you, so don't think too much just go on" Maan said, and Geet too nodded and went away, Thank god, now I can be free from his girl as this project needs lots of travelling and outside work," Maan thought relieved,


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Next Update on Nov 4th, as it's Diwali, Celebration begins,,,

Wish you all an Happy and safe Diwali, always be safe and have lots and lots of Fun and Happiness... Love you all,,,




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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...finally he said sorry//...
wishin u a very happy n safe diwali..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update
Maan wants to keep away from geet...ye kaise ho saktha hai...haina
HAPPY DIWALI TO YOU 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n spendid update! Geet lost in her thoughts ! Maan tells he misunderstood wt happened n is sorry bt Geet stops him frm saying sorry! Bt MSK! Maaneet closer n Mana feelin attracted to her! Wants to stay away frm her! Bt hw? update soon! Well written! Happy diwali 2 u n ur fam!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally he Got the courage to apologize. Maaneet scene was romantic.
Geet so happy n her answer made Maan amaze.

He neeeds to distract her so got the perfect idea of Ad.
Again guiding her.

HAPPY DIWALI !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice one...finally he said sorry/
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update! Finally his gesture was understood by Geet! Loved the update! Continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
GEET DID NOT WANT HIM TO DO SOMETHING WHICH MADE HIM UNCOMFORTABLE

AND NOW MAAN IS LOOKING AT WAYS TO STAY AWAY FROM GEET
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Posted: 11 years ago
Outstandingly, awesome. I just love every bit of it. Loving the changes taking place between. It's fact! Maan never said sorry and now its difficult. Please continue soon.

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