life of surprises...part 4 6/nov

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hi frenz..
M milli here..
I have a story to tell ,really wana know what u all think about it.
This story will have only the names same else everything is my imaginaation.
Hope u will like it..
Enjoy reading.
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INDEX

PART 1 -PAGE 1
PART 2- PAGE 3
PART 3-PAGE 5
part 4 - page 7 & 8
Edited by MILII_BAKSHI - 11 years ago
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Milli!!! You here!! Welcome😃 yep tell.
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part 1

"jo are u ready?" asked a young man in white scientist close,working over few butons of electronic board.
"hmm" jodha answered him shaking her head in yes Nervously.
"dont wory sweetheart..things wont go wrong this time..!" Jamal assured her as he reached by her side..
"yup ..this is the last time m experimenting with ur stupid invention jamal!" jodha snaped her fingers and gave a brief dare look to him..
"ok sweetheart.." jamal raised both hand in air ,signaling peace..
"So lets start then.." he asked raising an eyebrow..
"ok.." jodha answered as she sat iside a huge circular transparent machine. which had only one seat in middle and few buttons here and there and a big screen in centre.
jodha pulled a metalic coat near by sliping into it.she atached the safety handle to herbody..her arms and legs were properly tucked beneath the raw metal.
"its gona be a one hell ride for sure.."she cursed jamal beneath her breathe.
looking at jamaal once she noded her head in yes..
jamal signaled a thumbs up after which she puled her helmet on and pressed a start buton..
the machine turned to random direction several times and with a lot of quakes it rose litle higher from ground.
"oh god..oh god.." jodha started to panic inside but tried to stay calm as far as posible,she heard a creaksound behind her.
"jo now u r ready..pull the trigger and mark this day as memorable in history.."she heard jamal saying to which she just rolled her eyes.." i doubt of getting history myself.."
she took a deep breath as she pulled the trigger ..a large fumes apeared from the edge and breaking the bariers of gravity the machine slipped to space..its what it looked though!
"yes yes yes..oh moma oh moman" jamal satarted to do a happy dance..oblivious to the mes he just draged jo into.."
...end...
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Originally posted by: ..Diya..

Milli!!! You here!! Welcome😃 yep tell.

diya u here! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hmm whats was that! It was good yar... Would love to read more
P.s. Jamal or jalal..?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey nice story!!
Is it Jalal or Jamaal??
Jalal is Jamaal??
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice start dear...
really good..
do continue soon... do pm me...
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Originally posted by: ..Diya..

Hmm whats was that! It was good yar... Would love to read more
P.s. Jamal or jalal..?

shuKriya dear...
its jamal..i dint introduce jalalyet...jalal entry should be grand nai?..lolz.
thanks once again
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Originally posted by: ..Tahniat..

Hey nice story!!
Is it Jalal or Jamaal??
Jalal is Jamaal??

shukriya dear..
Its jamaal...jalal ko ane metime hai..hehehe

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