Short Story - cards in destiny’s hands - Page 6

Rose
I loved the way u cleared the ONS raaz-esp. the fact that JW was aware of
the results of the DNA report--that was smart--JW with brains! Loved
the way him/Bani come together--Why wasn't the ONS raaz handled in
this manner, showing JW having some kind of sense. JW in ur ff still
retains his old self...Ur stry is filled with emotions all the way...Reptile
deserves only to be punished.
Thnxs for sharing
AP

Originally posted by: aperture

Rose
I loved the way u cleared the ONS raaz-esp. the fact that JW was aware of
the results of the DNA report--that was smart--JW with brains! Loved
the way him/Bani come together--Why wasn't the ONS raaz handled in
this manner, showing JW having some kind of sense. JW in ur ff still
retains his old self...Ur stry is filled with emotions all the way...Reptile
deserves only to be punished.
Thnxs for sharing
AP

now today i think they are in a solution to redeem pia with a tumour or something... or they are going to redeem jai by putting pia's child in need of blood and it will match with pushkar's... or pushkar will come across with the DNA report she hid... something is going to happen... i have a feeling that pushkar will get a call from bani... or from the hospital.. on the search for her medical report he may end up with dna report... it will have his name as father...

Originally posted by: rose467

now today i think they are in a solution to redeem pia with a tumour or
something... or they are going to redeem jai by putting pia's child in need
of blood and it will match with pushkar's... or pushkar will come across
with the DNA report she hid... something is going to happen... i have a
feeling that pushkar will get a call from bani... or from the hospital.. on
the search for her medical report he may end up with dna report... it will
have his name as father...

Rose
I'll take anything any blooper/loopholes anything as long as JW is set free
of the repto claim game..

Originally posted by: aperture

Rose
I'll take anything any blooper/loopholes anything as long as JW is set free
of the repto claim game..

since every time we are asking for it they are taking it for teasing us... well the point come when jai is the father of the baby for me ks dead..

it was a wonderful story, very good, very intense, warm, touching overall best story

Originally posted by: amiee

it was a wonderful story, very good, very intense, warm, touching overall best story

thank you amiee... glad you liked it