A TAAREY FF TILL MY LAST BREATH CHAP 27+NOTE PAGE 84 UPDATED - Page 12

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: navk

nice it was
again mystery and suspense
o god plzzz save me🤣
btw i love taani's attitude towards
rey and swayam
it was so cool
it seems like a
action movie

ACTION MOVIEEE...YEHHH
Edited by anjanankuttu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: premlata

awesome and interesting concept ...

day by day concept much interesting ...i love it ...
plz relief taani character ...
i read all part ...super ...
update soon add pm me when u update

THANK YOUUU...
Edited by anjanankuttu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --Suhani--

Very Nice Update :)

sigh. they still hates tani
and this was too much...this is all because of them that problem has came as if they didn't go to tell that guy nothing would have happen :/
anyway I hope soon they come to know that tani is very nice :)
and banner is awesome ā¤ļø
Update Soon!!!

Edited by anjanankuttu - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: d3fannm1

I sooo sososo love your ff

please please please. Do pm me your next chapter
I love you
And love your ff





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Posted: 11 years ago
CHAPTER 10

When they reached downstairs,they found Annu sitting inside a black van with Kaka on the driver seat. Taani moved forward and opened the door for them...
Taani: jaldi kijiye...
they glared at her...there were many questions in their mind...where is she taking them,who were the ones who attacked them,how did she know about the attack...
Taani: i don't have the whole day...
As they didn't have anyother option, they moved forward...when they were about to enter the van..
Taani: aap logon ka phone...i don't thnk you will need it any more...
Nil: we are not going to give you...
Taani: phirse...why do you want to argue for each and everything...its irritating...give me...
Rey: guys,give her(looking directly at Taani's eyes)who knows for a phone she might kill us all...
Taani looked at Rey...her eyes were emotionless...Rey was not able to figure out what was going in her mind unlike before...
Gang gave their phone one by one and entered the van...Taani then closed the door and went to the front and sat beside Annu..
Kaka started the van...no one spoke much except for Vicky wondering aloud about their destination...Annu,by that time, rested her head on Taani's shoulder and was preparing to sleep,she stroked her hair...Swayam felt like
killing himself when he saw this...
Kaka: Mohan ko gaadi laane keliye kahoon...
Taani: pehale hum koi hospital jaayenge...bhaiyase kahiye vahan aane ko...
Kaka:(eyeing her with concern) Anni kya hua...tum kuch chot tho nahin lagi na...
Taani:(smiling) mujhe...nahi kaka...inloggon ko dikhane keliye...
Gang were surprised with this...why is she doing this...its true that their wounds were hurting like hell but still because of their ego,lack of trust on Taani,they kept mum...they didn't want
her to think that they were weak...
Annu lifted her head and looked at them...
Annu: jyatha chot nahi lagi hain...aaj hi hospital lekar jaana zaroori hai kya...wo log phirse aage tho...
They looked at her...
Swayam: keep your drama with you Taansia...don't think that by doing this we will forgive you for this...
Annu:(giving him a disgusting look) see...i told you...
Taani: i don't want to hear anymore on this topic...its decided...

CLINIC:
after few minutes,the van stopped in front of a clinic...Taani and gang went inside...
Taani: may i come in,doctor...
Doctor: yes...please be seated...(when the boys settle down)how can i help you...
Before Rey can say anything...
Taani: wo..doctor...yeh mere friends hain, hum log picnic pe jaa rahe the tabhi...raaste mein kuch loggon ke ssath jagada hua...issi liye...
Doctor: oh...ok,then...please wait outside...i will dress them up,you may pay the bill...
Taani: thanks,doctor...(to the girls)hum bahar wait karenge...
They have now got used to this...Taani and her lies...

When Taani left, the doctor called the nurse and they started dressing their wounds...
Bharat: doctor can i use this phone...
Doctor: oh,yes...
Doctor and the nurse went to Rey who was more injured..
Amar: kisse call kar raha hain...
Bharath: Vikram Kundra...
Swayam: WHAT...
Nurse: silence please...
Swayam: tumhare paas unka number kaise...
Bharath: before i gave the phone to Taani,i feeded the number here(tapping his head)...
Swayam:(patting him) that was just brilliant, Bharath...jaldi call kar...
Bharath dials the number and gives it to Swayam...after few minutes...
Swayam: hello, Vikram sir...my name Swayam,we met today...
Vikram: Oh...what happened...
Swayam explained everything...
Vikram: oh my god...yeh sab uska chaal hain...tum loggon ko wahanse le jaane keliye...tell me,where are you all...
Swayam: Tara clinic...
Vikram: give the phone to the doctor...don't worry i will send my men for your help...
Swayam call the doctor...Vikram tells him something, the doctor just nodes his head and gulps...
Doctor cuts the call and turns to the gang...
Doctor: kundra saabne kaha unke log,yahan 20 minutes mein aa jayange...tab tak kuch bahana banakar tum loggon yahan rokna padega...
They hear a knock on the door...
Taani: doctor is everything all right...please jaldi kijiye hamare paas jyada waqt nahi hain...
Doctor: sorry,ma'am...kuch time to lagega...injection bhi dena hoga...please wait outside...
Taani leaves...
Swayam: thank you sir...for helping us...

AFTER 20 MINUTES...
Boys come out of the cabin...girls go to them
Sharon: Swayam,Rey...tum sab...are you all ok...
Taani: comeon guys...lets go...
As soon as everyone reaches the entrance,they see few people standing outside...seeing them boys get happy...
Taani: Mohan bhaiyaa...gaadi laye kya...
Mohan: yahanse kuch door park kar diya hain...yahan lekar...
Taani: samaj gayi...guys lets go...
After walking few steps, a scorpio halts in front of them...5 people rushes out of the car and attacks Taani while one person
Raju: mera naam Raju...Vikram ssabne beja hain...aaploggon ko yahan se le jaane keliye...jaldi chalte..
They follow himm
Taani: hey...
Taani gives the person holding her hand a punch and runs to them..
Taani: bhaiyaaa...
soon Taani's men come their and the whole area becomes a battle field...Taani was fighting everyone like a lioness...punching and kicking while keeping her eyes on the gang...
Raju some how reaches the car along with gang and starts the car...just then they heard a loud sound...Raju swearing sticks his head outside to find Taani standing there with gun in her hand...
He comes out and the gang follow him...
Raju: aapne aap ko jhansi ki raani samajh ke rakhi hain kya...
Taani doesn't reply...
By this time mohan and his friends come,panting...
Mohan: Anni, sab bhaag gayee...(pointing at Raju)bas yeh chuha baaki reh gaya...
Raju: oyee...kya karenge tum log mera...mera tu kuch bhi nahi bigaad sakta...mere peeche koun hain pata bhi hain tujhe...
Taani moves towards him...
Raju: Taani jaane de mujhe...varna...
With Taani's every step forward he moves backwards and hits Rinni
Rinni: ouchhh...
Raju catches her and keeps his knife on her throat...
Sharon: hey...
Simmi: Rinnni...choddo use...
Raju:(with a evil grin) jaane de...varna...
before he could complete their was a gunshot...
Rinni fell down with a earsplitting shriek...
Amar: Rinni...
He runs to her...but before he could reach her Mohan and two other came forward and lifted her and ran to the hospital...Girls and Amar follow them...
Raju taking it as a chance yanks his knife at Taani,but Taani caught it in the midair and and directs it to his stomach...his eyes seem to pop out with the pain...blood starts to flow through his mouth
Gang cover their eyes while Taani gives the knife a twist(twisting a knife can cause maximum internal damage)Raju catches Taani's shoulder tightly and slowly falls down...
Taani kneels down and takes out that knife...
Taani: tujhe mein chod rahi hoon...
Raju: madad karo mera...ahhh
Taani: madad bhi nahi karoongi...maroongi bhi nahi...mein tumhe yahin chod thi hoon...agar tumhara kismat aacha hain to bach jaooge..nahi toh POOJARI keliye mera pehala tofha...(turning to the boys)
aap log jao...
Swayam: we can't leave him like this...
Taani:(her eyes were red with anger) SAMAJ MEIN NAHI AATI HINDI...I SAID GO...RIGHT NOW...
Even though they wanted to disobey they couldn't...they were really scared with this face of hers...they wanted to help him but didn't have that guts to go against her...they didn't know what to do
BUT they knew this she is no longer the Taani they knew...

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Posted: 11 years ago
res/unres
yipee am the first
this was an amazing 🄳
update
again full of
action
omg taani was
so brave
she acts so strongly😲
against the goons
taani;s fight was
superb brilliant
can't even explainšŸ‘
i think there is a big
mystery behind itšŸ˜‰
i think boys are
dumb y they don't obey taani😔
overall this was superb update😊
Edited by navk - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeyeyyee
I am sooo in love with this ff
Thank you for the PM
Please please please please update soon
Kant wait
Do PM me when you update please please
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update ...
taani fighting with gooms ...nice
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awsum ff dear...
full of suspense...
pls update soon...
and pm me...
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Posted: 11 years ago
god...its becoming interesting and more interesting...what a great update...gang taani ko trust nahi karti but uske orders bhi follow karti hai...i cant wait to read further chapters...

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