KR OS - My sleepless Sunday mornings *HBD Shailu* - Page 3

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Posted: 12 years ago
#21
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

Such a funn OS

Super cute

Sweet n innocent

so loved dis innocent story n rey doing all dat for herr

Aweee

Marvelous :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#22
Ahahahahahahaaa... 🤣 🤣

Yogu toduuu concept.. ahahaaa.. still cant stop laughing.. 🤣

honestly ur OS reminded me of Amy's Mangolicious OS :P

i completly forgot abt this Parineeti ad :P

Honestly even I Love Mangoes a lot but i havjt done nything like this before..

and trust me..if som1 wil say me to wake up at 5 na.. tab bhi i'l never wake up..no matter watever the situation is.. *well..ermm.. except Arsha* ... :P

nywaz.. OS was damnn Funny..

i just loved it...

Tooo Good.. :D *hugs*

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Posted: 11 years ago
#23
Well this was hillarious.

Are you seriously saying that she made him get up at 5 in the morning just to steal and eat mangoes? 😲

Yes!! I did have a different image when I read the title. I though it would be something, you know.

But due to that mazaa kam nahi hua as I seriously enjoyed it.. Truly fun. !!

Adorable couple. The friendship wasn't stretched as done by many, most of the times. That was something I loved. Simple, Sweet and straight to the point.

Kya baat hai. Bade achhe concepts aa rahe hai aapke dimaag mein. Koi special reason. ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: yogini64

Hello everyone... I'm here with a Kriyansh OS..😊

Its dedicated to Shailja,,, her bday gift... 🤗

Sooo sorrryyy tingi for posting it sooo late... Was caught up with tons of assignments...😭

Hope I can make you smile with this fun oneshot...😃

& ya don't even try the Stunts mentioned in OS sweetu...😆

Enjoy!!!!😛




Oh God! 😲

Giguuu jaaannn this is beautiful and sweet! 🤗 ❤️

Loved it extremely!❤️

Each and every part ws soo cute just like U!😳

Muhhaaa. Love u loadddsss! 🤗 ❤️ 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: yogini64



My sleepless Sunday mornings - Kriyansh OS

"Reyyy!!! Get up you idiottt.." kriya shouted on the phone angrily...

Rey got up with a jerk & sighed looking out of the window & then at wall clock...

'This girl is insane.. Who the hell wakes up @5 am on SUNDAY!!! '

"Arrgghh . . Let me sleep... I promise to get you whatever u want,, but don't spoil my life like this" he literally begged her but it didn't melt the morning devil on the other line... After all she was trying to wake him from a long long time...

"Get up or else don't talk to me... Ever" she said sternly...

Rey got up alarmed; he can sacrifice even the precious jewels of the world but can't risk her wrath & not talking to her... Coz she's dead serious...

'god ... She's such a blackmailer'

"Coming in 10 minutes" he said sternly...

"That's like my kuchiku" she cooed on phone trying to melt his anger..

He smiled n cut the phone call & rushed out of the bed...

****

"Damn.. I just hate these morning chilly winds" Rey rubbed his arms over his thick jogging suit...

"If you are done with your tantrums, then shall we proceed?" Kriya mocked at him...

"Huh" Rey kept walking with an angry fake pout...

Just then kriya linked her arm with his... Snuggling closer.. Feeling warmth of his body...

He smiled at her cute antics n pulled her close kissing her forehead & both kept on looking in each others eyes lovingly...

They were best of friends since childhood however their equation changed with time... As they realized they are more than friends...

And In no time, they accepted their feelings for each other... Deeply n madly in love, they are inseparable ever since...

Every Sunday morning they go for jogging on her wish & against his... :P

Actually, the main reason is something else..

Her love for the mangoes of old Rainbow garden brings her back there n of course Rey has to come along... :(

And they were habitual of doing this since childhood...

She maybe a grownup now, but old habits die hard...

She can never give-up this stunt of stealing n eating those mangoes...

That's why she had chosen this early morning time of weekend to have her own kind of fun... & not to get caught by the strict Gardner whom they've fooled till now n escaped from his beatings every time...


*********

"REY!!" Kriya hissed surprisingly, as Rey pushed her gently against the big Mango tree...

His mischievous eyes bore in hers happily gleaming pretty eyes...

Her lush pink lips turning in a hot darker shade due to chills, her soft fair skin getting more fairer each second...Only if it is possible... or maybe it's his imagination...

He caressed her milky cheeks slowly.. To which she blinked her eyes innocently & he traced his thumb over her lower lip making her blush deeply n trembling with his intense gaze...

He couldn't wait anymore,, trapping her hands with his against the trunk of tree,, he smashed his lips over hers...

He sucked her lips as if his life depends on it,, showing all his love...

Cupping her face, he tilted his head to relish the sweetness of each corner of her mouth...

Kriya hold his sweatshirt & pulled him more close to her.. to kill the gap between them...

Feeling all contented with the moment,, she pushed him away panting heavily...

"You moron, stop taking my advantage & concentrate " she scolded him... & then chuckled..

He chuckled at her cuteness... He was there just for her, to help fulfill her immature wishes... But he just couldn't blame his heart coz she looked so inviting...

Actually she's weird,, preferring mangoes over romancing with her boyfriend..'

Is she normal.. For god sake?'

He saw her climbing the tree slowly, & stopping midway to look back at him...

"HELLO!!! Drama queen... Done with your curses? Then Be a man & help me in 'what we are here for' "she mocked at him hitting the right nerve...

He groaned in fake anger & climbed the tree in a lightening speed,, making kriya climb faster...

She reached up just in time, settling on a big branch.. Her back hit his hard rock chest... as He holds her by waist balancing them on the new area...

Kriya laughed as she remembered his sudden reaction on her teasing & Rey joined her...

"Shhh! Dheero haso varna yamraj jaag jayega" kriya winked..

Rey smiled on her kiddish behavior; moreover that Gardner is no less than a 'yamraaj' for them...

"Ohk Madame!" he pulled out a Ripe juicy mango from the other branch "Here, eat it & spare my brains.."

"You don't have brains honey" she said, lost in devouring the poor fruit,, leaning on his shoulder...

"ya.. That's why i'm your boyfriend" he counter attacked her & grinned over his smart answer...

Kriya rolled her eyes...

"Your girlfriend is very much smarter... Admit it" she said never giving up...

"ohk baba.. You win.. Now finish it fast.."

She groaned slowly in protest.. But soon got busy in the heavenly sweet taste...

He didn't let her eat more than 3 at a time, moreover eating a large portion by her hands only, playing all the while...

They sneaked out of the garden slowly & then ran off for life, even if nobody was approaching them... Its Just that- they loved to act like kids sometimes...

******

"Yay!! Rey you're the best..." she squealed with joy hugging him with all her might & he happily responded to it...

"It's my duty to fulfill my princess's wishes"

"Awww!!!"Kriya smiled widely & pecked his cheeks...

"I'm not that bad girlfriend either.. Tell me what you want?"

"How about a date tonight?" He winked..

Her mouth opened with excitement...

"Does that include my favorite mango drink?"

He looked at her in disbelief *face palm*

"Do you want me to take you for a diabetics test or should I consult psychiatrist?"

"HAW!! How mean... That's natural sweetness... Duh..." She smacked his arm lightly...

But he still kept his face straight...

"Actually get lost.. Go take ur doctors on date.. I'm not coming" she moved forward angrily..

"What?"

"I'm sorry baby,, plz... Listen.."

"kriyaa . . . . . . Wait.."

"Ohk,, mango drink is done.." Rey accepted his defeat unknowingly...

"Huh" kriya stopped..

"Baby plzz... Sorry na.."

"ohk.. Pick me up @7" she beamed with joy...

He grinned, while she choose to run & he followed her after realizing what she had done just now..

"Kriya,, you Cheaterrr!!!!!!!!"

****And they lived Happily Ever After*****😆




Gorgeously written and executed!

Very Fab! ❤️

So good and sweet! Loved KR 2gether.

Love U so mucchieee Gigu! ❤️ 🤗

And the siggies are too good! Muaaah! ❤️ :*
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26
Yogs!!!!!


I read it while Travelling in Metro! So I couldn't comment.

But WOW!

It was so so Cute!- The OS I m talking about . :P Itti subah uth ke Mangoes..Eeeps! That too khud tree pe chadd ke! Aww! :$ Ye Humari Kria hai 😆 And Humara Rey...always ready to do anything for her! =]

And.. I want one more OS from you :* :* :* KriYaansh Week ke liye!

Please na..Please..Please...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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And I Loved the Banner! 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

Originally posted by: -shenz-

Well this was hillarious.

Are you seriously saying that she made him get up at 5 in the morning just to steal and eat mangoes? 😲

Yes!! I did have a different image when I read the title. I though it would be something, you know.

But due to that mazaa kam nahi hua as I seriously enjoyed it.. Truly fun. !!

Adorable couple. The friendship wasn't stretched as done by many, most of the times. That was something I loved. Simple, Sweet and straight to the point.

Kya baat hai. Bade achhe concepts aa rahe hai aapke dimaag mein. Koi special reason. ;)

Last Line Bold Part.. Yogs.tell us the reason! Ahem! ;)
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
it was so cute update i loved it 2 da core...❤️

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