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Posted: 11 years ago
THE dAWN OF THE dAWN
Chapter 39 - Part 1

Author Request: For the next one week, I will NOT SEND PMS. Please check my status for updates. I will resume after one week.

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It was around 5am Khushi woke up to the sound of chirping birds. She swept her hand on her lap to check on him but she found her lap empty. She opened her eyes sleepily and looked around to find that she is in their bedroom. She looked to her side and he wasnt there. She instantly got off the bed, ran down to the living room and enquired with Kaka. She got worried when he said he didnt see Arnav. She quickly took the landline and called his number. It kept ringing. She ran upstairs to her room to find her cell phone to see if he left any message.

She stormed into her room and was surprised to see him coming out of the bathroom. He stood by the door and asked her what happened.

She ran over to him and hugged him tightly, Where were you? I searched the whole house. She wrapped her arms around his neck possessively.

I was in the bathroom. Kya Hua? Khushi? He tried to break the hug but she didnt allow him.

Lifting her feet off the ground, he carried her to the bed and made her sit on his lap.

Khushi, whats the matter? He asked worriedly.

She looked at him wondering if she can talk about yesterday. When did we come here?

Just few hours ago. Why?

Why didnt you wake me up?

I did but you asked me to Shut UP. He chuckled.

She looked at him all surprised. He looked relaxed as if nothing happened yesterday. She cupped his cheek and asked hesitatingly, Are you OK?

The moment she asked his face dropped remembering how he broke down last night.

Khushi, last night, I...

Shhh, I am glad it all happened when I am with you. I cant see you suffer alone. If you need to let it out, take me along with you through that pain but dont you dare go alone. She pecked his lips and embraced him. Arnav, are you sure you are alright?

I am fine Khushi. Thank you for managing me last night.

She slapped his chest. This is the last time you are saying thanks to me. Otherwise I will have to start some new traditions to punish you.

Oh really? Can I get a sample now?

Oh sure Mr. Raizada. I have loads of those, she quickly leaned over and bit his chin.

Ouuuchh, Ouuuch, damn Khushi!

Khushi giggled fluttering her eye brows.

This is not what I was expecting.

Good, I am glad you liked it. Saying this she tried to get up.

He pulled her down to the bed and he crawled up on her, I dint say that I liked it. You owe me an apology. NOW.

Ok Sorry! She said coolly.

Thats it?

Thats it!

What happened to your Sorry tradition?

I just scrapped that service, sorry no longer available. She said enjoying the frustration on his face.

Let me resume the service then. He rolled her onto him and kissed her fondly.

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Khushi made sure she hid her sarees and lehengas from him and hurriedly packed when he went to bathroom to get ready. She wanted to see his expression the first time he sees her in her best, in next 2 days.

While having brunch, Khushi insisted Kaaka to join them for the wedding but he excused himself saying he will relax at RM, as he is feeling tired due to his age.

Khushi and Arnav sped to farmhouse as soon as they heard Payal family and Akash family are reaching shortly. He drove to the back side of the east entrance where all the guest rooms are. Khushi kept checking on him if he is OK and to her satisfaction, he did looked quite relaxed unlike yesterday. May be he is occupied with all arrangements, she thought. As soon as they reach east side entrance, he called the maids and asked them to carry the bags to the one of the two master bed rooms located on the top floor away from all the buzz.

Mr. Raizada, when you are ready, I would like take you for run down. The event planner approached the couple.

Khushi looked at her in awe. The lady is tall, slim and didnt seem to have an inch of flesh. Must be Size Zero she thought.

Give us few mins, I will find you when I am ready. Saying Arnav held Khushi hand and took her inside the house.

She is hot, Khushi whispered following him.

So? He rushed in hurriedly ignoring the event planner while Khushi kept looking at the poise lady.

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This is where I have arranged for Payal Akash to stay for the night, if they decided to stay.

Arnav opened the other master bedroom on the top floor away from where these 2 are going to be.


Khushi's eyes first fell on the satin white fabric that draped beautifully from ceiling to floor. Wow! She exclaimed looking around the room. But she felt something missing. To confirm, she asked, is this where they are going to spend their first night?

If they want to! He said looking around the room, not quite happy.

I like it but it would be stunning if you added bright flowers to just pop the room a bit.

Yeah that was the plan but Akash mentioned she is feeling nauseated with the flowers scent and candles around. So I just asked them to keep it simple, as we are not sure where they are going to spend their first night here.

Oh but I love it. In a way it screams purity. Dont you think?

He nodded Yes acknowledging her. They both soon felt awkward talking about the first night. Khushi definitely turned red understanding what he must be thinking, the way he swept his eyes from her head to toe.

Lets go and you need to check out the arrangements. She pulled him out of the trance dragging him out of the room.

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Arnav on his way, called Ms. Sen, their event planner to meet him at the entrance. Khushi kept saying how excited she is to see all the arrangements. In fact he was more excited to show her, to see her reaction as he did everything with a twist keeping her in mind though its not their wedding.

He wrapped his arm around her waist and closed her eyes, he walked her to the front of the entrance.

As she opened her eyes to the humongous entrance laid with red carpet, she stood shocked not because of its size nor because of its beauty. She closed her mouth with her palms and looked at Arnav with tears.

Did you recognize? He asked whispering into her ears.

She nodded Yes. This is so much like our wedding Decor.


He nodded Yes, to the last detail he said smilingly. For few mins, both stood hand in hand, observing each detail, reliving that day they bonded to become one. There is more lets get inside. He held her strongly as she felt weak with overwhelming expressions.

She took her steps carefully following him on the red carpet, remembering the way they walked first time as couple on their engagement day.

As the event planner opened the door to the wedding hall, Khushi took one deep breath and forgot to breath rest. Everything same, decor, lighting, seating, mandap, everything same to the every tiny detail including the choice of flowers. If there is any difference, that would be the bride and groom.


You like it? He asked rubbing the back of her palm.

She nodded Yes unable to speak. Yeh sab?

I knew you would be upset remembering our days. Just a small attempt to give you that feeling of our wedding, which we missed.

She couldnt say anything, she felt speechless. He wiped her tears and spoke softly, I wanna show you last bit since we missed it in our wedding. He took her to the adjacent hall and opened the wide ceiling to floor french doors for her. She instantly kept her hand on her heart as the beautiful purple lighting and its decor skipped her beats.


This is specially for you, for you to dance, for you to sing, to relive your passion. How do you lke it? He asked looking around the room. She left his hand and looked around, the lights, the center stage, the digital audio system, the props...He reminded her school days where she used to perform beyond perfection. She turned back and looked into his eyes as he stood admiring her, and her shocked expression.

She walked to him and spoke in her choked voice referring to the event planner.

Miss, could you excuse us for few mins.

Ma'm I wouldn't mind but we are running late. Guests started coming. I need to check these with Mr. Raizada.

I said we need a moment. Please leave us for 5 mins. I wont take more than that. Khushi said sternly with her eyes fixed at Arnav.

He remained silent as he wanted to push her to become Mrs. ASR, to learn to say NO to people.

Ma'm please...

Khushi interrupted spitting her moist eyes on the event planner, while Arnav tried to control his urge to bash the event planner to listen to his wife. Before he could react, Khushi took control of the situation totally surprising him, Miss, I guess you havent heard me properly. I dont give damn about the guests now. I need to be with my husband for few mins. Please leave before I close the door on your face.

The planner left the room without looking back and Khushi pressed the button on wall to close the doors and locked it from opening it from the other end.

Arnav looked at her waiting for her, thinking what she is upto. She turned to him and cupped his face and gave him gentle kiss on his lips taking him by surprise. She just placed her lips on his without doing anything. She just needed to touch him, express her thanks to what he did. He opened his eyes as her salty tears made their way to his lips.

Khushi? He mumbled her name worriedly as she shed silent tears. You gave the meaning to my name today. It hasnt even been 24hrs since she shared what she missed in her life and how she left her passions. He already started turning the tables to make her dreams turn to reality. And that feeling filled her heart with inexplicable emotions.

She took a step back away from him and did something he wasnt expecting her to do, especially not at that moment.

Na kuch poocha

Na kuch maanga

Tune dil se diya jo diya

He was about to take her name, she stopped him placing her finger on his lips as she sang her heart out putting words to her overwhelming emotions.

Na kuch bola

Na kuch tola

Muskuraake diya jo diya

She took his hands in hers and kissed them, drenching them with her tears. His heart broke. He wanted to give her happiness but here she became emotional beyond words.

Tu hi dhoop tu hi chaaon

Tu hi apna paraya

Aur kuch na janoon main, bas itna hi janoon

She cupped his face and rested her forehead on his singing to his lips.

Tujh mein Rab dikhta hai , Yaara main kya karoon

Tujh mein Rab dikhta hai, Yaara main kya karoon

She left his face and took step back as she shed happy tears.

Sajde sar jhukta hai, Yaara main kya karoon

She bowed her head and touched his feet, making his heart stumble and bleed with her act. He instantly pulled her up to a hug showing her the place where she belongs, his heart not his feet.

Tujh mein Rab dikhta hai, Yaara main kya karoon

She sang the last lines, in mumbling tone, weeping on his chest.

He brushed her hair, calming her as he knew how much this means to her. He felt overwhelmed seeing her reaction which at first place, he didnt imagine that she could react this way.

He pulled her out from hug and kissed her eyes drinking away all her pain, then her lips assuring her many more moments to come to cherish.

Arnav?

Hmm?

May I have dance with you? She mumbled through his lips.

Now? He broke the hug and looked surprised at her.

Any problem?

Not at all.

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Part 2 Coming Up...

Edited by deepthiya - 11 years ago
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He asked for her hand and he led to the center of the dance floor, as she started singing for him. She wanted to give that special feeling to him, he should be the first person to hear her and sway with her.

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Song: Tum Hi Ho from Aashiqui 2 (Female Version)

Direct Link of the Song: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=aB0JQRmLN3c

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Tu mujhe chhod jaaye Ye nahin ho sakta, sathiya..

She swept her hand on his heart, sliding it to his shoulder.

Meri baton mein tera zikr sada

She brushed her lips over his, making him smile proudly.

Meri yaad mein teri fikr sada [Your worries in my memory forever]

She tiptoed and kissed his forehead.

Main jo bhi hoon tum hi to ho... Mujhe tumse mili apni adaa...

She stepped back holding her mangalsutra, as happy tears rolled off her eyes. He pulled her onto him.

Kyoonki tum hi ho...Ab tum hi ho..Zindagi ab tum hi ho...

He sang surprising her, looking into her eyes.

Chain bhi mera dard bhi, Meri Aashiqui ab tum hi ho,

He cupped her face firmly and sang kissing her eyes.

Tum hi ho Tum hi ho

Arz bhi, mera marz bhi..

She took over caressing her cheeks with his cheeks, as he swayed along holding her waist.

Chain bhi mera dard bhi..Meri Aashiqui ab tum hi ho

She sang as he showered kisses on her neck, and her shoulder.

Tere liye hi jiya main, Khud ko jo yoon de diya hai

He kissed her maang as her eyes turned moist and turned her around hugging her from behind.

Teri wafa ne mujhko sambhala, Sare ghamon ko dil se nikala

Main jo mit bhi gaya to wajood mera, Sada tujh mein rahe zinda..

She turned around hearing him a bit sad and cupped his face as he held her wrists and kissed her deeply expressing his gratitude.

Kyoonki tum hi ho... Ab tum hi ho..Zindagi ab tum hi ho

Chain bhi mera dard bhi... Meri Aashiqui ab tum hi ho

She hugged him as he swept her off her feet and spinned her in the air, slowly putting her down on her feet.

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He put her down as she brushed her face against his stubble. You gave me the best moment as we begin to create our lost wedding charm.

She blushed as if its his first time praising her. Your voice is beautiful and soulful. Why dont you consider it as career?

NOO I am more than happy what I am doing. I wouldnt change a bit.

Still, think about it.

They heard guests talking why the door is not opened.

We better hurry up. He said dragging her outside from the back entrance, opening the door for guests with remote.

Lets meet Payal and then I will go get ready. Khushi suggested as they spotted Payal and Akash coming towards them.

Arnie, yeh sab? Why do you have to spend so much. Akash asked looking at the preparations.

Payal how are you? Arnav ignored Akash and asked as Payal looked a bit upset.

You dont have to do all this Arnie, its a lot. I am overwhelmed. She started crying again.

Fatty, dont start it again.

Payal, you know how Arnav Singh Raizada is. He likes to flaunt and do everything loud. It has nothing to do with you, akash or me. OK? relax, dont think he is doing any favor. Waise, if you ask me, he is very kanjoos. He spends money only to flaunt not to enjoy.

What the he..

I know what the heck I am talking. She winked at him sighing Payal's state of mind to which he rolled his eyes.

Payal giggled and Akash immediately agreed, I agree he is very kanjoos. He didnt throw bachelor party for me.

Arnav took long stride and whispered, making sure no one hears other than three. You need baby shower not bachelor party. Payal and Khushi laughed out loud giving hi-fi to Arnav who ended joining the ladies to tease Akash.

Payal you look gorgeous. Love the color yaar. Waise, I wonder if you are glowing because of marriage, or this dress or ahem ahem..Khushi cleared her throat teasing her.

Arnav gave her his Seriously? look as she jumped forgetting that she needs to get ready.

Payal wore Princess Pink Anarkali dress, looked very simple yet very elegant in that suit enhancing the motherhood glow. She changed her dresses for the ceremonies at the last min as she didnt wanted to show to her baby bump though it is not explicitly visible. She was scared and felt conscious when she tried her lehengas that exposed her waist, which is why Akash informed Arnav to design her lehenga in such way.


Akash tu tho chaa gaaya hain. You look great man. Khushi punched his shoulder while Arnav looked amused at her.

Akash equally looked dashing wearing the Kurta Pyjama, in similar color tone as that of Payals.


Payal couldnt stop blushing. Where were you guys? We have been looking all over.

Khushi blushed while Arnav tried to come up with some reason.

Payal, dont ask such questions about their romance. They are just catching up the lost time. It was Akash turn to tease and he made sure he embarrassed the couple. Arnav couldnt help but smile at the truth.

Trying to change the topic, Arnav asked Payal and Akash to settle down in the Sangeet hall and excused themselves to get ready.

While they are on their way, event planner asked Arnav to go through final details as she need to make the payments. He sent Khushi to get ready while he takes care of the bills.

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Its been almost 30mins by the time Khushi is done getting ready. She waited for him to return but he showed no sign. Payal and AKash kept texting them to join and Khushi was worried that she is going to miss the Sangeet function altogether.

As anger riled up, she texted Arnav, Where are you? Are you planning to show up after function gets over?

Arnav's phone beeped when he was talking with Aman in the lower floor, making the arrangements for their honeymoon. He needed to get it done today as it all planned at short notice and there is not much time left. He texted her, Might take some time, you go ahead. I will join you in a bit.

She read the text and stormed out of the room peeving at him. She was so excited to show him her wear. She felt disappointed and walked out almost on the verge of tears, and didnt care to reply him.

Though he was talking to Aman, all his mind was glued on Khushi and understood that she is mad at him and hence no reply from her.

Finally Arnav got freed himself and rushed to his room. As he was about to enter bathroom he noticed his Kurta on the bed. He smiled at her choice and rushed to get ready.

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As he was about to go down, he looked at himself in the mirror one last time, to make sure he is dressed for her. Never he felt he needed to impress someone in his life as much he felt that urge today. Letting out satisfactory smile, he rushed down texting her, I am coming, I cant wait to see what you are wearing.

She read his message and said to herself that she will not let him see her and thats his punishment. I wont let you see me. She texted back.

YOU WILL! He replied with an evil smile making her huff.

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Part 3 Coming Up...


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As he stepped inside, the whole place was chaotic with cheers, dances and people were going crazy as if drunk. He stood at the entrance and tried to look where Khushi is but she was no where to be seen. He spotted Akash and Payal in the center, dancing with their relatives. He shouldered his way to Payal and asked if she has seen Khushi. After learning that she must be somewhere, he grew restless dying to see her.

The moment he entered the hall, Khushi's eyes fell on him. He looked so different, much younger than his age and dashing. Nobody would be able to pull that suit better than him. Simple, fit and casual but very contemporary, nothing extravaganza like every other man in the room. Her lips curved into smile happily as he wore her pick. She was glad that Akash wore better suit otherwise she was sure her husband would have stolen the limelight. What took her thoughts to dirty world was the way he loosely tied the strings at his chest, revealing most part of it cleanly shaven as if he did it on purpose to nail her, to kill all her rational thoughts.


He tried to call her but it was impossible to hear her, even if she picks up the call. He texted her as his eyes turned restless and impatient. Where are YOU? Will you come out right now or do you want me stop this crazy function?

She giggled and replied, Lets play a game!

That means you can see me? He wandered his eyes all around.

Twig hiding behind large human pot. was her next message.

Twig...Khushi, human pot? he remembered calling her twig once, so first part was easy, and he looked around to decode. He noticed atleast dozen men and women with oversized bellys.

He walked towards them unsure of which one she is referring to.

Sindoor ka rang...came her next clue.

He narrowed it down to 2 men and 2 women who were wearing red color kurtas and sarees but all were standing in different directions and his one step closer to any one in particular, might lose the other ones in the crowd.

Mehendi ki khusboo, par mehendi ke pehle mehendi???

He looked at those 2 women's hand keenly from far. One woman to his right and other to his left. But he couldnt figure out who is wearing mehendi.

As he was about to walk towards the lady on his left, he received another text,

Hum tho aapke paas ana chahthe hain, aur aap humse door jaane ki soch rahe hain?

He smiled and turned around to see pair of eyes fluttering, standing behind the heavy woman.

He caught his one ear and sighed Sorry raising his brows. She nodded NO, feigning anger. She walked behind the ladies as he walked parallel to her, sighing her and pleading her to come out of the ladies gang. He looked irritated as she is not giving in. But quickly his master brain worked the plan and walked away ignoring her.

Before she could realize where he is gone, the music stopped. Everyone stopped dancing and looked over to the DJ station.

If someone had told me a month ago that Marriage would be the most beautiful phase of one's life, I would have probably thought that person is mental, which is exactly what I thought when Akash Payal announced their marriage. He chuckled, taking the center stage, speaking over the mic.

Khushi looked wide-eyed at him speaking on the stage and she came and sat behind Payal, hiding herself from him.

I have known Payal and Akash for many years and I wondered why the hell she fell for him. He smiled looking at Akash.

Akash turned to Payal and said smilingly, thats true, I do wonder sometimes. while Payal blushed.

She is crazy and he is weird. But both experienced most important part of their life together, holding onto each other. While she forgave all his mistakes, he became the pillar of her life, protecting her. Akash wrapped his arm around Payal as they both felt emotional of what they have and been going through, while Khushi looked at her husband proudly.

As we begin and continue the wedding bash of Akash and Payal for next 2 days, I request everyone, with all their heart, to bless the couple as much that they will never a shed a sad tear in their life. He then looked at the couple under hot seat and spoke, Payal, Akash, you both know what you guys mean to me and Khushi, remember we are always here for you both, just a phone call away. We wish you both all the luck and happiness in the world.

Khushi leaned over and hugged Payal and Akash from behind, as they felt emotional.

Khushi was too engrossed in cheering them up, congratulating that when all lights turned off, she stood up shocked and scared.

Then fell a spotlight on her, just her. His heart skipped a beat seeing her under the silver light, glowing in her own radiance. If he clearly felt right, his heart sang with a tenor voice, praising her beauty as she stood quivering, feeling nervous at the attention she is receiving.

He started his gaze at her pointed stillos, moving up to the pink georgette lehenga that fit snuggly right below her belly button. His eyes took their sweet moment drooling her round dip. The overcoat on her choli barely covered her anything due to its sheer material but beautifully showed the most important part of her, which never disappoints him, always turning him on, playing with his own rational thoughts. Her Belly Button! As she consciously hovered her palm over her belly button, feeling someone is deeply gazing at her, he shifted his gaze to her extremely short choli, showing all her curves that he never knew such beautifully existed in his woman.


He hated the delays they are facing in taking the relation to next level. Yet another reason to curse her God, he thought. He lowered his eyes for a fraction of sec, nodding at his dirty thoughts and looked at her quivering lips, fluttering brows, and frowned forehead as she couldnt see anyone in the dark.

Then came his words echoing the room, while she searched for him in the dark,

Pehli baar jab mein tujhe dekha,

Aasmaan Jhuk gaya, Pal yaheen ruk gaya,

Raah chalne lagi, Barf jalne lagi

***its taken from song guys..not mine...😆

The lights are turned on and she saw him standing on the stage looking at her all lost. As the claps roared in the room, she looked down shyly. DJ asked everyone to join the floor while Arnav took control of the mic.

Khushi, this one is for you...He spoke as she blushed looking flustered, as some old ladies giggled looking at her.

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon, Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahoon

Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon, Kehna Chahoon Bhi To Tumse Kya Kahoon

He raised his eye lids and looked at her fondly walking to her, while she looked at him excitedly and threw a huge smile at him for his surprise. Akash asked Payal's hand for dance and led her to the dance floor.

Kisi Zabaan Mein Bhi Woh Lafz Hi Nahi... Ki Jin Mein Tum Ho Kya Tumhein Mein Bata Sakun

He touched his fingers to his lips and swayed it in the air, and trailing them along her cheek line.

Akash cupped Payal's face and kissed her forehead while she blushed.

Main Aagar Kahoon Tumsa Haseen, Kaynaat Mein Nai Hai Kahin

He pointed his finger at her and wiggled it, spreading his arms to the world showing no one like her exists.

You look stunning, I cant wait to start our life, Akash whispered in Payal's ears.

Tareef Yeh Bhi To Sach Hai Kuch Bhi Nahi, Tumko Paya Hai To Jaise Khoya Hoon.

Khushi smiled pushing him away, while he ruffled his hair blushing. Khushi teasingly ran to the dance floor bumping to Payal and Akash, while Arnav followed her with huge grin on his face. As Arnav was about to sing his next lines, Akash took the mic and sang for Payal shocking all the other three,

Shokhiyon Mein Dooobi Yeh Aadayein, Chehre Se Jhalki Hui Hain

Zulf Ki Ghani Ghani Ghatayein, Shaan Se Dhalki Hui Hain,

Akash sang caressing Payal's hair and hugging her from behind, with his hand on her belly.

Lehrata Aanchal Hai Jaise Badal,

Arnav took the mic again to sing and tried to hold Khushi but she was too quick and slipped away from his hands, teasing him further.

Bhaahon Mein Bhari Hai Jaise Chandani, Roop Ki Chandani.

He dropped the mic and walked following her, admiring her as she led to secluded corner behind the screens.

Caught in her own web, she tried to escape but he cornered her to the wall and leaned over her. She felt nervous and bit overwhelmed with the way he came close, his chest thumping against her heaving chest. He spread his arms on her either side and whispered nuzzling her ears, You took my breath away today. You look divine.

She had her eyes lowered and the whole atmosphere made her feel like to-be-bride trapped by her fiance. He slipped his hand underneath the sheer fabric that barely covered her long waist, This is beyond perfection better than I imagined. He spoke huskily referring to her slender waist, squeezing her in his hold while she struggled to focus with his peeking chest almost inviting her to kiss.

He lifted her chin and made her look at him, She couldnt look at him for long seeing the way he is ogling at her. Sorry for not showing up early, if I had known that you would look like this, I wouldnt have left you alone in the room. He lifted her chin further up, letting her stretch her neck giving him access. He leaned and kissed her chin, slowly moving down her neck. He stopped at the base of her neck and licked the sweat that beaded. He could tell she is nervous like its their first time. Thats what every time got him hooked, the way they both share that first time jitters no matter how many times they come close to get comfortable. He curved his lips as her fingers dug in his shoulders, showing her urge. He tugged the coat to the side right above her chest and nipped her delicate skin making her pull him closer. She crossed her feet and pressed her thighs together feeling the tickling sensation in her belly. He pulled the coats draw string to open, that she tied at her midriff. As he was about to slid it off her shoulders, a shrieking voice came from behind startling both of them.

Hey Mr. What are you doing to my Di? A young boy questioned keeping his hands on his hips. Arnav immediately moved covering her, making sure whoever that is, shoudnt see her in that state and she instantly adjusted her choli and tied the strings in place while Arnav gave the young boy What The? look. As she stepped from behind, the boy asked, Di, is he bothering you? the young boy asked with serious expression, the boy is one of Payal's cousins who became super friendly with Khushi since yesterday.

Khushi playfully went and stood next to the boy pouting and nodding Yes.

Arnav instantly said boring his eyes at her, What the?

Hey Mr. I got green belt in karate. If I see you again with my Di, I will break your nose. The boy seriously warned.

Arnav smiled at the boy's guts while Khushi fluttered her eyes and asked "What will you do now?"

Ohhh I am so scared. He spoke in mocking tone and walked towards Khushi. Wrapping his arm around her, he kissed her cheek and whispered, I am afraid I will lose my sanity and stop acting rational if you keep surprising me like this. He flicked her belly button and walked away smirking at her, leaving her all flushed.

Di, who is he?

He is missing his wife, so he just came to ask if I can marry him. She didnt know what she blabbered, all thanks to Mr. Raizada for throwing her sensible mind out the door.

But you said you will marry me? the young boy asked with a pout.

Oh did I. When did I say?

Well you said if I let you dance with me on Radha...you will marry me.

Oh yes yes. I remember. Definitely tomorrow night. We both will elope and marry Ok? but first lets go and perform.

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So dey r back 2 dere home... Hawww... Poor gal gt so scared nt finding him on her side...

Khushi asked him 2 Shut up wen he tried waking her up... 🤣 Arnav felt sad d way he broke dwn in front of Khushi bt I luvd d way Khushi shushed him up tht she'll b on his side always... 👏

Did he say THANKS 2 her??? 😡 D sample cud hv been more interesting Mrs. Raizada... 😈 Sorry service no longer available... 🤣

Evil Khushi hid her wedding clothes 4m him... Smart move.. 👏 Kaka excused himself 4 joining... 👍🏼 Dere room is located away 4m all d buzz... Interesting!!! 😉

Size zero event planner... 😲 Bt Arnav is least interested... He has sum1 more interesting by his side, so accepted... 😆 😉

D room Arnav gt prepared 4 Payash left me mesmerized... Truly a best example of Purity... 😃 Awkwardness... Ahaan... 😉 😳

OMG!!!!!! Screaming... Arnav got everythng same 4 Payash's wedding as of their wedding... This cudnt hv been better... Applauses... 👏

1 Highlight of update- I knew you would be upset remembering our days. Just a small attempt to give you that feeling of our wedding, which we missed. I wanna show you last bit since we missed it in our wedding. This is specially for you, for you to dance, for you to sing, to relive your passion. How do you like it? 👏 👏 👏 Hayeee...

Di, Mujhe bhi aisa Pagal Aashiq Pati chahiye... Plz dila do na... 😳

I luv d way Khushi tuk d charge d asked Ms Sen 2 gv dem a moment 2gether... Luvd it... 👏

2 Highlight of d update- You gave the meaning to my name today. Beautiful... 👏

Khushi sang 4 him??? 😲 I wntd her 2 sing n d song she chose ws appropriate n an emotional one... Touched... 😃

D mst beautiful part of dis part of update is wen she bows her head n touches his feet n he instead hugs her close telling her d ryt place where she belongs... Utterly Beautiful... 👏


Part 2-

Dis cudnt hv been more better... Khushi and Arnav both singing dere emotions out 2 each other n swaying wid each other on an another beautiful song... 😃 😃 😃

3 Highlight of d update- You gave me the best moment as we begin to create our lost wedding charm. 👏

Payal's reaction ws expected bt Khushi's justification of Arnav being Kanjus n luvs 2 flaunt cracked me up... 🤣

I'm glad tht Arshi r catching wid dere lost tym... I so wanted dis 2 happen... 😃

Khushi ws all excited 2 shw her dress 2 him bt he ws also equally busy in d MOST IMP wrk, planning HM... 😉

Sum1 is dressing up 2 impress his wife... Nt bad Mr. Raizada... 😆 😉

Challenge thrown n accepted... This is getting interesting... 😉


Part 3-

I ws more interested in tht shaved chest portion... Hayeee...

Arnav's excitement 2 c ws too cuteee... 😃 Treasure hunt??? Interesting... Khushi as twig, True... 😆

Since Khushi wsnt ready 2 give up Arnav tuk d charge n I luvd his short speech 4 Payash... 👏

I so luvd d part wen Arnav made a spotlight focus on Khushi separating her 4m d crowd... Her dress blew me off... Beautiful piece n I'm in luv wid it... 👏

D way Arnav ws gazing her I cud feel a song played in my BG... Dis is so damn scandalous... 😉 😳

Evn I'm hating d delay bt I luv d initial lines spoken by Arnav in her honour followed b d song... Its 1 of my favs n I always secretly wished sum1 2 dedicate it 2 me... 😳 😳 😳 *Hiding*

I so luvd dere MOMENTS... 😉 *BLUSHING LYK A TOMATO* ☺️ ☺️ ☺️

Wat the?? Payal's cousin interrupting dem??? 😡 😡 😡 Aur koi nhi mila di??? Baccha hai isley chod rhi hun...

Did he jst threaten HIM dat he knws karate n hez a green belt?? WTH is goin on??? 😕

If dis is hw sumthng or d other keeps on interrupting dem I'm sure very soon dey both will lose dere rational minds... 😆 😆 😆

Wat d, d baccha wnts 2 marry her if she dances if him??? Eloping 4m d marriage... Cuteee... 😃 😆

I knw ur wrkng day n nyt 4 dis bt at d sm tym I jst wanna tel u tk cr of urself at d sm tym... U r imp di... I knw hw much efforts u hv put into dis 2 mk it utter perfect... Luv u loads... It ws a beautiful n mesmerizing chappy... Luvd it.. 🤗 ❤️

Edited by asthagarwal - 11 years ago
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Part 1

Aww...Khushi got so afraid not seeing him...after last night her fear is so understandable...
He brought her back home without even waking her up...oops...no no he did but she asked her to shut up...LOL...
Loved their convo...her way of punishing him...and modified way of saying sorry...And his resuming the service...
So the event planner is hot...no worries Khushi...ur husband doesn't even notice...loved the way she dismissed the lady later...Mrs. Raizada ne no kehna sikh liya...
the room PayAsh gonna spend their first night...simple and beautiful...
Awe...he planned everything keeping her in mind...so sweet of him...and together they are re-living the moments...
Then the hall...her song...their magical moments together...so amazing...and they are gonna dance...wow...



Part 2

WOW...their dance...his singing...so amazing...loved it so much...
And the friends moment...these guys are awesome...thoroughly enjoyed the whole...
Arnav was busy with Aman...and she thought he is still with the wedding planner...awe...jealous Khushi...got so angry on him...
Loved the way he instantly realized that she is angry...
And he dressed for her...ufff...he is so cute...and Mrs. Raizada wont let him see her...dekhte hai kaise...



Part 3

So Khushi doesn't want her husband to catch the limelight...awe...possessive...
And he took away all her rational thought...haye...
Loved their hide & seek game...the way she made him find her...superb...
Then his speech for PayAsh...and for Khushi...his lines...then the song...both couples...BEAUTIFUL...
And ArShi romantic moment...amazing..
Though it got interrupted, but loved the way it did...
and the boy...and her convo with him...so Khushi's gonna dance now...with her monkey gang...
Edited by nishu_shorna - 11 years ago
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in morning coudn't comment .was in a rush..
awesome piece of work..
so much emotion..
y he had to go through so much...?
w8ng for next..!
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Unres soorrryy 😭 phn se hai so no monkeys 😔

Back to update

Part 1
Khushi woke up and found arnav missing made her worry she have indeed chngd

Gosh she searched d whole house 😲 loll wats d use he was in d washroom 😆 were she didnt bothered to check

Bt i liked dis possesive khushi who loves arnav crazily madly truly whole heartedlyy 🤗

She only have d capability to tell him shut up 🤪

Khushi is worried for him for d last night and arnav was worried bcz he thought he went overboard in his past opening duffer hr doesnt knw how much happy he made khushi by opening and sharing his past wid her 👍🏼

Traditio chngd 😒 so not done mrs raizada koi baat nai wen mr raizada is dere tradition fir wapas ajayenge

But i liked khushi new tradition also 😆 poor arnav 🤣

Loll she hid her clothes wid mr raizada buahaha good going loll just to surprise him

Waisa r u sure khushi is straight loll i mean she is hitting on a girl wen her husband didnt spared a look to dat lady 🤔

The room was awesome dii i mean it soo calm yet elegant the view was just beautiful full of peace 👍🏼 loved d room ❤️

Hayeee dere first night wen wil it come

The venue of d marriage was soo eeeks lovely and moreover he gave d look of d venue mostly of dere marriage just for khushi

Arnav loves her so damn much ❤️

He wants her to be bold commandable to anyone just d way he is hayeee lovely dii

Khushi was emotional wid arnav gesture to make her feel good and nt be sad feeling how she missed dere custom in dere marriage

D song was so apt dii just beautiful d way she expressed her feeling in d song made me cry

She proposed him for dance omg wowww 👏


Part 2
Lovely song selection dii

D way d dance going on i felll in love wid it

Loll baigani shadi mein abdullah deewana wala case hai 😆

Shadi akash payal ki dance arnav khushi kr rhe hai 🤣 🤣

I loved d way how khushi managed to cnvnc payal lolll bt poor arnav 😆 👎🏼 how could khushi do dat

Babyshower omg really loll arnav cn crack jokes sachi ❤️

Arnav one look and khushi understood dat she needs to rush to get ready 🤔

D dress of payal was just woooww dii

Akash was also looking nice

Arnav should have married aman nd laptop 😡 idiot fellow

Challenge btwn arnav khushi omg wowww just for wat lolll for a glimpse buahaha

D game is on baby bring it on 🤗




Part 3

He stepped inside and strtd looking for his wife imoatient raizada 😳 cheating khushi cn c him bt he cnt 😲 dats so not doe mrs raizada 😒

Samne ana ka liye v clue well well dat was fun 😆

Damn mr raizada was looking smoking hot ☺️ dori thodi aur khuli hoti toh jyada acha hota

Raizada blackmailing khushi beta its nt ur sangeet were u cn do everythng 🤣 pagal raizada


Hayee arnav and emotional speech dat qas so cute dii emotional hogyi main nd dis khushi bhow khana khatam nai kr rhi 😡

Finally d sangeet strtd and both d lovers were om floor

Lovely songs dii 👏

If arnav dress was smoking hot khushi was too looking sesxy

Disturbig arnav in romancing his wife so not done monkey 😆

😲 u serious khushi elopng wid d monkey 🤣 omggg i cnt stop rofling nw 🤣 🤣

Beautiful update dii ❤️

Loved it muahsss

Soorryy diii kaan pakkad ka sorry

Finally i did dis one runing to part 40 nw


Edited by Barun_Gf - 11 years ago
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unres
Awesome update. Beautifully written. Loved it.
Loved her way of
punishing him and the
way she sent the lady out. Loved the Mrs.ASR.
Then her song,their
moments together so
amazing and khushi sang for arnav wow loved it.
Their dance, arnav's
singing for khushi was awesome loved it
so much. Loved their
game. The way she made him find her, his speech, their dance and the moments was awesome. Loved khushi's dress. Its very beautiful. Waiting to see khushi's dance and arnav's reaction. Totally a beautifully written update. Loved it. Thank you. Waiting for the next


Edited by divyashree449 - 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: MeenuArshiCrazy

chal koi toh hamein miss karne wale hai..
Miss you too..
kahin bhi kitne bhi din jaayiye.. lautkar yahin toh aana hai
TAKE CARE..
VESE SHORNA ACHA NAAM HAI😃
I thought ur name is NISHAT😕


Shorna meri ghar ka naam hai...(see my user name)😛

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