VriMar FF: Teenage Love - Page 13

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

@Part1

itna chota😡

anyways

it was cute..

loved thier characters😳

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Ela bilkul hogi 😳
Amar bhii aa raha he re 😳
Wait kar 😉
Sabar ka fal meetha jo hota he 😉
Thanx for the comment yaar 🤗

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

Great..😃

I think I'm right😉

Jaldi bula na Amar ko😳

🤪

Aaja gale lag ja🤗

Originally posted by: Ale_TaaRey

Hayee 🤗
Hehehe ruk jaa meri maa 😆
Aata hi hoga raaste me hai 😆 🤣

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis

Raaste mein bohot traffic hai aisa lag raha hai...ufff...Mumbai...🤣

Jab pahunch jayega tabi PM jarur kariyo😉

Hey guys back with a update 😊 But I am really disappointed with the response I am getting 😔 😭 I send nearly 100 Pms but I receive few comments 😭 I know that I am not a good writer as others are but still... All I want is genuine reply from you guys. I am even ready to take criticism. But please comment. The starting chapters are small. I promise to give longer updates. But you need to respond guys. I will not be updating this FF if I don't get proper replies. This FF is really close to my heart. So it's my request please COMMENT. Sorry if I was rude. I kinda hurts soo...

Ok guys read 😊 Pleasee comment..!! Sorry for the small chapter. 😭

Part 3: Guess Who..!!

Both are getting closer to the table dispersing the crowd. All of a sudden the music stops... Vrinda and Naina are wondering what's going on. The crowd starts clapping and appreciating the boy who was playing the guitar. [Time to open the secret] It is AMAR or Amarjeet Singh.

Introduction: Amar is the handsome hunk. He is a new comer in the school. Uski ek nazar se ladkiyan pagal ho jati he... He's a basketball player, loves music, a very good guitar player and not to forget... [Aaa abhi nahi wait for further parts to know more...] 😉

Back to the canteen

When Vrinda sees Amar she is perplexed watching him... While was walking away his guitar hurt Vrinda unknowingly. An "ouch" is heard to which he turns back! Vrinda is full with anger. She goes to him...!

V: Vrinda & A: Amar

V: [shouts] Aj mujhe maarne ka din he kya...? Jo dekho maar ke jaa raha he! Oe Mr. tumhe dikhta nahi he kya...?

A: [calmly] Excuse me aapko problem kya he...

V: [angrily] Tumhara guitar laga mujhe...!!

A: Oh I am sorry! But aap ye dhire bhi to bol sakti thi na...!!

V: Aj ka din he kharab he. Mene na school he nahi ana tha...!

Vrinda starts murmuring to herself! Naina is back with her snacks and Amar has already left...

N: Mera to ho gaya! Ab library chale please!

V: Han yar chal... Pata he abhi vo guitar wala mujhse takra kar gaya or sorry bolke ehsaan kar raha tha!

Both are walking and talking on their way to the library...😊

Part 3: END

Precap: An announcement [Important wala :P]

So thank you so much for reading... I'll continue soon (hopefully) *fingers crossed* 😊 Till then take care and have fun and... COMMENT please...!! 😊