24 written update 19/10-Terrifying Dawn*Completed*

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That Mihir is a mysterious yet funny character. He seems more like someone from a youth comedy, completely out of touch with the seriousness of the ATU. Whether he's a hero or not is unknown, but Niki's suspect intentions come up here. Why would she trust him so blindly that she casually assigned him to the job? Jia herself didn't trust him at all. JSR was too concerned about his daughter to notice.

The assassin posing as Abhay was rather believable, until you find that he's never met JSR or Trisha- then doubts creep in. How he seemed to have control over the whole scene is a key issue, but he began to act up when inside the hospital. The real Abhay was an accountant by profession, so he's not really an emotional person, but the impostor did that quite well. Good job Ajinkya.

Nothing suspect about Divya? I feel there may be more to her story. Maybe the abortion bit must be a reflection of a hidden PM bid.

We've forgotten one character- Veer Singh Rathod, Jai's son. He may make a grand entry- either taking his father out to safety, or taking out that outright vindictive, forceful WNCC reporter Mehek.

In fact, I feel Mehek may eventually be taken down, either by terrorists who feel she's useless and likely to leak secrets about them, or by the mole in the ATU under the terrorists' orders, or by someone from the ATU or RAW or army.

Talking of WNCC, the boss of that channel (possibly superior to Mehek) may be the hidden main villain, on the side of the terrorists, possibly himself being someone else's right hand man.

Considering the character sketch I read about Veer I think he'll have a bigger role to play here.

One of Naina and Divya is a suspect. Somehow, Naina would be too obvious a choice, so Divya's a lot less likely to get picked on. I wouldn't be surprised if there were more abortions performed, since she seems to have no intention of starting a family.

WNCC, as I have said earlier, is a dead ringer for NDTV. Plenty of internet users, particularly the blogging community, slam NDTV for pro-Pakistan/pro-separatist slant, and their intrusive coverage of security forces' operations that leave them open to attack. The planted (?) story about the death of that one student at Aditya's hands may be a plot to make him vulnerable to an assassination (this one by JSR won't really work, I guess), because Aditya may act hard and tough against the terrorists- which is not what the terrorist-aligned boss of WNCC would want.

Alternatively, the Indian National Party (silly name) would engineer financial and other trouble for WNCC, leaving them vulnerable to a collapse, and in need of financial and other aid to survive- which would come from the Government, leaving them completely dependent on, and thus slave to, the INP. Tough luck expecting Aditya to let it happen- he'd sink the INP like he would sink Vikrant and KK.