MANVEER FF:A STRANGE LOVE STORY - Page 6

Originally posted by: shankrishty

so that should not be her problem yet she is jealous, does she loves raj and raj was supposed to marry her

Originally posted by: annabh

so that should not be her problem yet she is jealous, does she loves raj and raj was supposed to marry her

MANYATA DOES NOT LOVE RAJ.AND REST OF YOUR DOUTES WILL BE CLEARED IN THE NEXT UPDATE.

awesome update
do continue soon
& thanks for the pm

Hai, Very nice part ! Loved it. Here J is a nice girl and Manyata is wicked and selfish. Continue soon... Thanks for the PM.

Hey! Superb update

[DIV][I]..Wow...that was amazing very nice wow jay her elder sister raj and all nice characters very nice story awh uday loves her then why he didn't express it's wrong ager aisa hi raha then confusion badegi Manyata use door hojayegii wow I love jay he is very nice I love her character because she deserve it she very understanding hope Manyata uday express love and say eachother yar please right long chapters your chapter was very small I think it was very very ver small please wire big update or normal ok that's very nice story I like it so much very good keep it up and really sorry for late commenting dear I m was busy in eid sorry or please pm me and yeah pm me hyperlink because me comming fom mobile I can't open only link pm me hyper link very nice keep it up update fast fast I can't wait more and yeah this comment for prologue,character sketch,chapter one,chapter two,chapter three,chapter four part one,or chapter four part two super lovely update on eagerly waiting cont...ASAP[

CHAPTER 5
Manyata is ready.she sees her reflection on the mirror then she looks at the clock.it is 8:30.
Manyata to herself:oh shit.ofh hum bhi na!!abh jaldi chalo.
She comes out from her room and sees her mom is standing there.
M:mom ap yaha.
K:oh..hum..a..
With a smile k:bohaat khubsorat lag rahi hain app.
Gives a Kiss on her forhead and both smile
m:jijusahab agaye.
K:saab agaye bas dulhan ki behan hi nahi.
M:aww...app aise bhi matboliya.mom.
then vijay comes.
Vb:mami sahab,nichai saabh apko dhon rahaihe.
They leave.
Here uday is searching manyata when dadi sahab comes to him.
Ds:kise ko dhundh rahai hain?
Uday is shocked and nods in a no.
U:no nahi toh.
Ds smiles and uday doesnot know what to do so he also smiles.
When manyata enters.she is looking amazing.everybody looks at her.manyata becomes nervous.so she quickly goes to j's side.
J:wow manyata you are looking so beautiful.
M:thanks jiji.
When shivani comes and says:lagegi q nahi akhir behan kiski hain.
J:yuvrani shivani kumari ki.
S:han nahi toh.
They laugh...
M:by the way kise nai sana ko dekha.
Shivani and j both look at her.
S:tumne phirse sana se jhagra kiya.
M:no.hum q jhajhra karengi.tum bhi na.hum usd abhi dhund k late hain.
J thought:manyata kabhi nahi sudhrage.jhot kitne asani se kahte hain.
Uday is watching this.
Manyata is looking for sanaya.she knows her behavior with her was not good at all.
Unnati is talking with uday.manyata excused herself and goes to unnati.
M:hey,unnati.how are you?
Uday's heart beats stops for a second hearing manyata's voice.
Manyata hugs unnati and she hags her back.
Un:good.tum kaise ho?
M:hum bhi asce hain.
Un:i thought tum party me nahi aogi
m:agaye nah abh tana dena bandh karo.
Ok listen humne kuch galat ki hain.
Un:is me naye kya hain.
M:agar badme tane maregi toh mar jayegi kya.
Un:kya galat ki hain?
M:humne sana se tori rudely baath ki hain.
Un:hume samajnahi ata sana tumhari sath rahti hain?
With a smile M:qki vo tum nahi ho is liya.
Un:oh information k liya thank you.
M:hum yaha info dene k liya nahi aye.
Un:humbhi yahi soch rahaithai.aj the greatest yuvrani manyata kumari ko hamari kaise yad agaya.
M:kam karegi ya nahi?
With a smile un:nahi.
Uday was hearing their convercesion.
U:choti manlo.
Un:par dada??
U:ofh choti princess thori nah tumse kise ko mardal ne koh kahrahi hain.bas sanaya ko manane koh kah rahi hain or tum bhao kharahi ho.
M:tumhe kaise pata ki hum sanaya ko manane ki bat karrahain hain.
U:bho isleya ki hum apko asce tarah se jante hain.[:-D]
m:what ever.unnati plz abh to uday bhi kakdiya hain.
Un:ok.par bho hain kaha.
M:bho garden main bath k rorahi hoge.i'm sure.
Un:kitne bori ho tum bechari ko raladiya.or upar se apne deeds k liya sorry kahne k liya himmat bhi nahi hain.
M:jana yar.
She leaves.
With a sweet smile M:thank you.
U:you are welcome.
With a smirk u:by the way tum aj hamesha se bhi jayada khubsorat lagrai ho.kise nai kaha hain ya humhe first hain.
Manyata shyly says:j jiji or shivani jiji ne kaha hain.
U:oh my bad luck.
M:hum jiji k pas jate hain.unhain hamari jarorat hoge.
U:sure.
Everyone notice them.manyata goes to j.then brij announce that:j beta and raj please stage par ayeah.and then he says them to exchange their rings .they do as he says.

*Srishty*
please ignore my mistakes.and plz like it.[:-D]