(close this ff)Kuch Kuch...-imp note-pg 6

Please read the note on page 6 before reading this fanfic because the fanfic has been started again from the beginning with the same concept under a different topic. The link to the same fanfic under a different topic is:

http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=738903&T PN=1&#12539076

Kuch Kuch…

Concept

Kripa studies at high school, she has many friends but in her class she sometimes feels lonely since she isn't DEEPLY in friendship with any of her classmates-friends, but they are her friends but just not very close. Her B friends (B friends-her friends which she is closer to and they all studied in the same class until they got into grade 10) are in different classes but not in her class.

Kripa's class mainly focuses on Science subjects, Maths and A. Maths (Additional Maths), they are a little weak in English but not Kripa. Their English teacher sometimes tells Kripa that she feels bad for Kripa that she has to tolerate the slow-speed-of-learning-English. Because of that, the English teacher told Kripa's class teachers (Only the A. Maths class has 2 class-teachers, the other classes have one only) that they should appoint a new assistant teacher who will be especially assigned/ hired for their class ONLY to teacher English-kind of in a FUN way to…..so that the students will be more interested in learning and improving their English and thus they can get good grades in their public examinations.

When the new teacher will be hired, the English teacher and the new Assistant teacher will divide the class (5I) into TWO halves. One half (Gp-1[12 students]) of the class will stay with the English teacher in their homeroom. The second half (Gp-2[12 students]-excluding Kripa) of the class will stay with Assistant teacher in another spare room or the covered playground (the teacher will change its settings sometimes). The halves will sometimes change, sometimes Gp-1 will be with the Assistant teacher and Gp-2 will be with the English teacher. But Kripa will be always be with the Assistant teacher (to help the teacher with the work too-you can also say that she will be the Assistant teacher's Assistant/ Secretary). When they'll learn new things in English lesson the next day, Kripa will be informed the day before and if she doesn't know/ learnt about that topic before she'd have to stay after school that day (the day before the lesson of learning something new) and the English teacher will teach her so that the next day without any trouble Kripa would be able to help the Assistant teacher while teaching the class.

*A. Maths class has two Class Teachers, two Maths teachers and two A. Maths teachers. The two teachers are same for the 3 cases, e.g. A and B are class teachers so they are Maths teachers also and A.Maths teachers too.*

Let me let you all know that in this fanfic, the parts maybe to detailed, I hope I won't make it over-detailed which might confuse some of you. If you don't like something about the fanfic…..so do let me know…..do not hesitate. Remember my message about COMMENTING (do not hesitate to comment on both of the positive and negative sides/ points of my post. And press the THANK YOU button if you do not want to post a comment (if possible).) I'm sorry if I sounded rude somewhere. The first few parts will be very similar……maybe a few changes…..to the parts I posted in the first 'Kuch Kuch…', there aren't many changes but there might be very little….and I hope no one has problem with the ages, Angad is going to be 20 and Kripa is 17. The introduction part will be posted maybe after the concept or after a few parts. I'm starting this fanfic again under a new topic, so that it doesn't look messy, because I felt that in my first 'Kuch Kuch…' I had made mistakes by posting the introduction first and all. So I'm starting the fanfic again and I hope I don't make it messy anymore. So that was the reason why 'Kuch Kuch…' hadn't been updated for so long, it was meant to be back but I needed time. So here I am. Do comment please.

coool hunnni!!! cnt wait 👏

Originally posted by: Honii

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Thx!

Originally posted by: Gaurav''s Love

coool hunnni!!! cnt wait 👏

Thx! Hey I haven't seen you at Ab Kya kare?.....do come and read it sometime when you have time......but still it's up to you😊!

Originally posted by: banju

sound good to me

I hope you like it when the parts are up......which will be like next weekend! Sorry for the time but I'll try to fix things up then I'll post parts like 2 parts in a week........the parts posted here will be longer than Ab Kya Kare? and I'll post parts here less frequently as in Ab Kya Kare?...........but I'll try my best to make it worth reading.........hey but maybe who knows I might as well post like 7 times a week.....I'm not sure...it's just a roght idea so we all just need to wait simply!😛

Originally posted by: janu_2006

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Thx!

Kuch Kuch…
Part 1


Someone just got off from the bus number 33A. Another person got off from the same bus. It is 7:50 am. It is a winter morning (late November). We hear laughter. We see both of their backs; we now know that they are girls by their long hair. One of them has tied up her hair into a pony tail and the other girl has left them open. They are walking in the bus terminus. Suddenly they stop when they see another bus has entered the terminal. That bus is bus number 87A. The two girls stand there waiting for someone. When the bus is parked, a girl comes out. We see her beautiful eyes, then we see her lips mouthing (we cannot year as she is speaking in mute) 'HEY'. The other two girls who were standing turn around to see who shouted 'HEY'. We see the other girl's back, she is walking up to them, we see her legs. When she reaches them, we see a pair of black shoes, then we see white socks, then we see bare legs (and knees), then we see a green and blue dress (like a uniform), then we see that the girl is holding a white school vest (the sleeveless one) in one of her hands, then we see her neck with a necklace which has a sharp-pink beaded-heart locket, then we see her lips (again), we see her nose, then we see her eyes (again) and finally our eyes zoom out and we see her full face, she is Rani (Sushmita Sen as Rani). The girl who has tied her hair is looking at the road (the path where the buses enter the terminal) so we just see her hair. She's looking at the few buses which entered the terminal; she's waiting for the buses to pass them so that they can safely walk across the bus-pathway to the pavement (in the terminal). We don't see the other girl, but we know that the girl whose hair is open is talking (we see her green-blue uniform dress only) 'Where were you? We were waiting for you for so long. It's been 10 minutes and 37 point 5 seconds to be exact.' The other girl turns around, her pony tail swirls in the air, and we now see that she's Lina (Aishwarya Rai as Lina). She looks at her friends, the girl and Rani, a little confusedly in a cute way. After Rani heard that she starts to laugh 'Oh really. Looks like A. Maths has partly taken over you already. So umm…….let's finish the other…..what is that…….ummm…I think the other 20 seconds before we go.' The three girls start to laugh hard. Some passer-bys look at them. The girl says (still laughing) 'Well it's supposed to be 22.5 seconds not 20.' All the three girls were trying to calm themselves but before they could one of them (the girl) had said something which made them burst into laughter again. Lina was laughing too hard and Rani was trying to control herself and Lina. The three of them were laughing too hard that each of them had to put one of their arms against their stomachs to try to control themselves but it was of no help too. They couldn't control themselves. When again they were recovering, Lina looked at her watch and her eyes widen. 'Hey let's go now. The others will be waiting for us.' All three of them started to walk. They crossed the pathway and were walking on the pavement. When they were outside the bus terminal walking on the pavement, the girl jerked up. 'Oh My God!! Oh My God!! Where's my hair band?' she now brought her backpack from her back to the front (one of her arms are still carrying the backpack-I hope you know what movement/ action that is) now. She is opening the zips back and forth now. 'Where is it? Gosh how could I forget that the teachers are walking here and there in the morning to check the students uniforms if they are tidy or not.' Still finding. 'Gosh!! Where IS it?' Lina is grinning. Rani looks at Lina a little confused then smile knowingly. Lina pretends to cough. The girl is still finding her hair band between the books now. Lina says 'Let's go now. We might get late.' Rani says (grinning) 'Umm……yah let's go……you can find your hair band while walking.' The girl-still searching-without looking up says 'Okay…but walk slowly…' When the three of them were walking, Lina purposely takes out the hair band from her uniform's right pocket, kind of takes it half way out from the pocket so that anyone who glances that way can see the hair band there. They are 10 meters away from school. Out of desperation, the girl looks up from the bag, then side ways, then when she's about to look back in the bag she spots something like a black fluffy object poking out from Lina's pockets. The girl now realizes that Lina was playing a little prank on her. She says out loud (kind of knowingly)'Oh…NO…..You aren't getting away from this.' (this-the prank not the hair band). Lina starts running-jogging actually, while running she purposely takes out the hair band and drops it on the floor. Rani is laughing at the back and now running to catch them up. The girl picks up the hair band and the wind starts blowing harder as she slowly walks towards her school gate. The hair is all getting messy as the wind is coming from behind her, so we see her face which is mostly covered by her hair-many hair strands covering her face-so she turns her back-we can see her back now. The wind is now blowing on her face, so her hair is flying back now. Rani and Lina are waiting at the school (they can see the girl's back too) gate for her to finish so that they can all three enter the school together. We see her hair in her hands, tying up her hair. When she's done, she turns around and we see that she is Kripa (Neha-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai- as Kripa).


Preview: Kripa's school day------Stay tuned!!


So that's for the first time. It's short I know but if you want it to be longer or shorter or interesting or boring, etc…you've got to tell me in the comments.

Please do tell me how you like it. It's my first part…………….I'm eager to know how I did it. I can only know and improve myself if you comment. If you want more nice-interesting-cool scenes, you've got to comment or PM me. Do not hesitate….tell me my good and bad sides…..that's a request….I really need to know. If you don't have a problem-(I don't mind)-than you can rate me out of 10 too. Not only this time but every time-as you like. It'd be nice if you rate me out of 10.

Awesome, are the first few parts gunna be the same as the last time u started this, or r they gunna be different, but cnt wait for u to rite this ff!!!

tat was really gd continue soon

just read the first part its realy good continue soon, cant wait to read the second part 😊

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome, are the first few parts gunna be the same as the last time u started this, or r they gunna be different, but cnt wait for u to rite this ff!!!

Last time I had posted 5 parts only. So the 5 parts will be jst slightly different. THX THOUGH!!

Originally posted by: asian_gyal

tat was really gd continue soon

Thx!!

Originally posted by: janu_2006

gr8 part

Thx!!

Originally posted by: night girl

just read the first part its realy good continue soon, cant wait to read the second part 😊

Thx!!

Kuch Kuch…

Recap:

The girl picks up the hair band and the wind starts blowing harder as she slowly walks towards her school gate. The hair is all getting messy as the wind is coming from behind her, so we see her face which is mostly covered by her hair-many hair strands covering her face-so she turns her back-we can see her back now. The wind is now blowing on her face, so her hair is flying back now. Rani and Lina are waiting at the school (they can see the girl's back too) gate for her to finish so that they can all three enter the school together. We see her hair in her hands, tying up her hair. When she's done, she turns around and we see that she is Kripa (Neha-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai- as Kripa).






Kuch Kuch…
Part 2

Kripa is walking towards Lina…hot tempered. Lina doesn't move but Rani is a bit surprised because she never saw Kripa like that before and what was up with her this morning. She didn't get a thing.

Kripa reached them and stopped right-7 inches-before Lina. Rani was going to start talking to Kripa to calm her down but Kripa was staring only at Lina with a fake expression: Anger. Kripa glanced at Rani and then turned back to stare at Lina. Lina burst out laughing and after 2 seconds Kripa started to laugh hard too. Rani was confused. When Rani figured everything out, the two of them had already started running inside the school towards their other friends (we can't see their faces, we can see their backs and Kripa and Lina running towards them) and Rani was running after them. When Kripa and Lina reached their other friends (can see Kripa's face and Lina's face only and their friends' backs) both of them went behind their friends and were hiding from Rani. They all understood that they played something on Rani today. Rani is in the front, Kripa and Lina are standing at the back and in the middle are standing their friends (We can see Rani's face and their friends' backs and Kripa and Lina's backs…once in a while you see Kripa and Lina's heads poking out from in between their friends-but you never see who their friends are). Rani is trying to get between her friends so that she can get the two of them. Kripa and Lina are trying to stay away from Rani. Their friends are trying to just stay in the middle-like a wall-between them. All this while Rani, Kripa, Lina and their friends are laughing hard-so hard that all of them can't even control themselves to breathe too, they each have one arm across their stomachs. Kripa, Lina, their friends and Rani-all of them-know that all-this-while Rani did not even once felt bad or got angry about what Kripa and Lina had done to her: a simple joke-because she knew that they didn't mean to hurt her or anything negative, she knew that they had no intentions of doing anything bad to her-but only to make the morning in their world laugh, enjoy, happy and playful-no stress, no tension. They all knew that what would be happening next. When all of them controlled themselves-because they were laughing hard before-. The group of friends in the middle broke and then Kripa hugged Rani. When they were hugging Kripa said 'Sorry'. Rani playfully hit Kripa's head. Then they parted. Lina and Rani hugged each other. Kripa then hugged one of their friends, we can see the back of the friend and Kripa's face. When they apart…we see Kripa's face smiling and the back of the girl-we know that because of her long tied up hair-we are determine to see who that friend is…so we walk around semi circularly around the two of them to see Kripa's friend…we see the big beautiful brown eyes-we better zoom out fast-we see the girl is no one other then DIA (Bipasha Basu as Dia).

REWIND------------PLAY-RIGHT BEFORE KRIPA WAS HUGGING DIA

Rani is hugging a girl, we can see her back. After two seconds Lina is also hugging a girl, we see the girl's (the one Lina is huuging) her eyes. Rani and the girl split and we see that she's ANGEL (Amrita Rao as Angel). Lina also parted when Kripa parted with Dia, we see the girl who Lina was hugging was REA (Priyanka Chopra as Rea).

FAST FORWARD-------------PLAY-KRIPA JUST PARTED FROM DIA

Lina is hugging Dia, Rani hugs Rea and Kripa hugs Angel. Then Kripa gives a friendly hug to Rea, Rani hugs Dia and Angel hugs Lina.

The guys were waiting for the girls to finish it all. They were all bored so they sat down. When the girls had finished…

We see slowly each guy sitting on the bench, Uday (Shahid Kapoor as Uday), Neal (Uday Chopra as Neal) ……the other guys weren't there and so as the other girls. Then Neal had stood up and was now walking towards the girls. While he was walking he opened his arms and said 'What about me?' The girls laughed 'Shut up Neal!!' Uday also stood and came towards everyone now.

Suddenly Lina spoke up 'Where are the others, guys?' Kripa walked behind her and hit the back of her (Lina's) head playfully and said 'Do you sleep when you stand?' Lina was confused now 'What does that have to do with them?' Kripa smiled and said 'For my General Knowledge.' Lina was totally confused now she was thinking 'What's up with her…….I don't get a word she's saying!' Kripa noticed that and hit Lina's head-at the back-again 'Because last Friday morning assembly they announced that the people who joined the camp will not be coming to school for this week as they will be enjoying their camp at the campsite…' Then Lina remembered and bent her head with one eye closed tightly (it looks like she winked-I'm sorry I don't know how to describe this bit of action but she didn't wink). Kripa continued '…if each of them have twins, whom I don't know about, then only then we can see them and that is if their twins prefer to come to their twin brother's or twin sister's school…' Dia and Angel hold Kripa and Rani had covered Kripa's mouth by then. The guys and the other girls were laughing hard and so was Dia, Angel and Rani. When the three of them freed Kripa, Kripa said innocently and in a little defending tone 'WHAT?' She opened her mouth to say something but this time Dia put her right hand index finger on Kripa's lips and she put her left hand index finger on her own lips and spelled 'S-s-s-h-h' and pronounced slow and steadily 'Sssshhhh'. Then Dia hold Kripa's index finger with her left hand and replaced Kripa's index finger with her own index finger on Kripa's lips. Kripa stood like a doll and open-closed (kind of like blinking) her eyes fast several times-it's like an innocent look. The bell rang and Kripa panicked.

SCENES SHIFT

SOME WHERE….FAR AWAY………..

We see a cupboard which is packed with clothes only. We move back and see someone's back looking at the cupboard, the person looks like a guy. He is looking at a……..well it's a giant…um…..cupboard. It's a big cupboard-how do we know it…because we look from the bottom to top slowly and it takes us 37 seconds to complete that one round of looking at the cupboard from down to up. It took us 37 seconds…..imagine how long it took that person? That person has been standing and looking at the cupboard-down to up…at the speed like just we did-for a long time, well not THAT long but you can say for about 5460 seconds (about 1 and a half hour). What is that person thinking……do we want to know…….okay so let's see…….actually let's get into the guy's mind '…me this blue jacket. Josh gave me those POLO caps, Alliyah gave me that red shirt, John gave me that blue………..' Um…..so we really want to hear all this….let's get out of his mind…..hold on a sec…wait let's just stay for a few seconds more….'…Oh my God….what shall I throw now, more than half of it are gifts from my family and friends…….umm....I'll just throw a few of those shirts.' He is bending and we come out of his mind and see him picking some shirts in his hand and dumping in the black bag. So that person was not thinking 'What to wear there?' or 'What shall I wear today?'

We look back and see someone sitting on a couch, we come closer to that person, we don't see the face but we see the person's clothes, by that we can judge that the person is a guy, there's no chance of that person being a girl…not even 1% we see his hand holding a photo 'A Graduation Photo'. It looks like the people there were graduated from a big University. Then we hear a voice, a male voice, the guy sitting on the couch-his voice, the voice sounds young, mature, deep and smooth, the voice spells these words out sighing (a little sadly) 'Man…who was she………why I never noticed her before?'

The guy standing near the cupboard turns and we look at his shoes and he is saying 'Now who is…' we see his dark blue jeans '…she? Meena or…' we see a white and blue designer shirt with the first two buttons (on the top) open and the collars a little up and open-like '…..Tina or Mary or…'

The guy on the couch interrupts 'Angad I'm not even that worse okay……you know up till now I just saw…'

We see the face of the guy who was standing, he is Angad (Iqbal Khan-from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai and had been in Karam Apnaa Apnaa-as Angad). He opens his mouth to interrupt the guy sitting on the couch 'a century girls.'

Both of the guys laugh. We look back to see the guy on the couch stand up and walk to Angad and say with a wide smile-we see his lips only-on his face 'Yah…you know me' Angad tiredly says 'Prithvi…'. We see the guy who was standing next to Angad and had one of his arms around Angad's shoulder-in a man-ly style (just like guys do…you know) – by now and we see he is Prithvi (Prithvi from Kaisa Yeh Pyaar Hai). Prithvi says 'What?' innocently. Then Prithvi pretends to be seriously-innocent '…if I've seen more than a hundred girls then what about Josh. He has seen more…pata hai kitne?…maybe just a few hundreds.' He said it casually like it was nothing, then they both laughed over their silly comments.


Preview: Why did Kripa panick?


I hope no one got confused with the too-much-detailing I did. And I hope you all liked it…and the part is slightly different then the part I posted when I first posted Kuch Kuch…(old readers might know what I'm saying).

I'm desperate for your comments…..do give comments and give suggestions too…..if you want it to be more boring or longer or shorter or more funny or more serious, etc……….tell me in the comments.

I hope silent readers also post their comments…….and I hope all of you loved and enjoyed everything and all the scenes till now. Actually I had been sick at the weekend, and today, Monday, I didn't even go to school because I was really sick so I thought I'll just post the part because otherwise I wouldn't find time in the future. I'll try to post another part sooner. Sorry for the delay though.