JODHA AKBAR EK NAYI KAHANI

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CHAPTER 1

YE KAHANI HAI MUGHLIYA SALTANAT KE KAMIYAB SEHENSHA ABUL -FATH- JALAL-UDDIN MAHAMAD AUR UNKI MAHABAAT KI

Kahani ki surwat hoti hai san 1576 se jaab 20 saal ka jalal adha Hindustan jeet chukka tha aur sapne dekh raha the ke ekdin wo pure Hindustan par apni hukumaat kayam karega . Jalal me pure Hindustan ka badsha banne ki kabiliyat to thi par usme ek khami bhi thi wo samajhta tha ke jang se rajya jite jate hai aur dehesth se avam par raaj kiya jata hai . Waise ye soch jalal ne apne abhibhawak bairam Khan se hi payi thi . Bairam khan ki mrittu ke baad jala ne agra me apna raaj pat samhal liya ,par abhi bhi wo apne Khan baba ke sikhaye hue ususlo ko nahi bhoole . jala har chiz ko har jasbaat ko kimat se tolta tha aur dimag se kyu ki uske mutabik uske pass dil hi nahi tha kyuki dil insaan ko kamzor banata hai aur ek sehensha ko kamzor hona sobha nahi deta .

Raat ka samay hai jalal apni begam rukayiya ke khab gah me hai . Rukayiya aur jalal ki Shadi 9 saal ki umar me hui thi aur tab se rukayiya jalal ki begam bhi hai dost bhi aur hum razz bhi . Rukayiya kuch khas nahi dikhti par uski siyasati samajh khas thi isi liye Rukayiya ki jaga haram me khas thi . haram agre ke mehel ka wo hissa tha jaha jang me jiti, sehensha ko nazar hui, sehensha ke logog ki uthai gayi aur sehensha ki begame reheti thi . Sehensha hukka gurgura rahe hai aise me Rukiya unse keheti hai

Rukayiya - Aap ne Kabul me bagio ko acha sabak sikhaya aab wo aap ke khilaf bagawat karne ke baremenahi sochenge .

Jalal - ha Rukayiya waha humare khilaf bagawat ho rahi thi aurjo sehensha bagawat na rok sake wo apni riyasat nahi samhal sakta .

Rukayiya - Waise iss baar aap dalat ke saath saath kuch arto ko bhi haram me laye hai jalal .

Jalall- Kyu tumhe jalan ho rahi hai rukayiya?

Rukayiya - aap to jante hai jalal hume jalan nahi hoti , kyuki hum jante hai ki kuch hi dino me ye ladkia aap ki nazro se uttar jayengi . Ji behela kar aap unhe bhool jayenge .

Jala - Tum to janti ho rukayiya ki kisis bhi insaan ya cheez me humara maan zada dino taak nahi laga raheta . Log kehete hai kekisis ek ka hokar zindagi bitane ko mahabaar kehete hai . Par hume to ye mahabaat kamzoror ka bahana lagti hai.

Rukayiya - Hum jante hai jalal tabhi to humare aur aap ke bich begam aur sahar hone ke saath saath dosti ka rista hai . Kyuki hum aap ki takat banna chahte hai kamzori nahi

Jalal - Hum jante hai Rukayiya ke tum hume samajhti ho tabhi to tumhara ahada iss haram me saab se ucha hai begame khas ho tum .

DUSRI TARAF HAI HARKA BAI AMRE RAJYA KE RAAJ VAIDYA KI KANYA HIRA BAI . USKE TEEN BHAI HAI SANKAR PRASAD, BHAWANI PRASAD AUR DURGAPRASAAD. TINO AMER KE RAAJ PARIVAR KE LIYE KAAM KARTE HAI. SANKAR PRASHAD RAJ GUPTA CHAR HAI AMER RAJ PARIVAR ME BHAWANIPRASAD UP SENAPATI HAI AMER KE AUR DURGA PRASAD APNE PITA SE CHIKIYSHA VIDYA SIKH RAHE HAI . IN TINO BHAIYO KE PITA HAI HARIPRASAD SING JINHE APNE BETO KO LEKAR CHINTA NAHI . CHINTA HAI TO APNI EK LATI BETI RUPMATI/HIRA KO LEKAR . HIRA BAHAT BAHAT GUN WATI HAI WO ACHA GA SAKTI HAI, ACHE CHTRA BANATI HAI, GHAR KE KAAM BHI JANTI HAI AUR SAABSE BARI BAAT WO BAHAT HI SUNDAR HAI ITNI SUNDAR KI RAAJ KUMARIYA BHI USKE SANDARIYA KA MUKABLA NAHI KAAR SAKTI .PHIR BHI USKA VIVAH NAHI HO RAHA . RAAT KO HIRA KE PITA APNI PEHELEI PATNI SUPRIYA KE SAATH BAITHE THE

Supriya - Kya hua ji aap itni chinta kai kar rahe ho?

Hari - To Kya Karu? Hira ka viha nahi ho raha hai. 26 saal ki ho gayi hai .

Supriya- Aap chinta na karo ji. Raaj jotshi ne to kaha hai naji ki solwe saal ke lagte hi humari hira ka viha hoga

Hari - janta hu par tu to jane hai halat thik na hai . Mughlo ki sena kabhi bhi kisis bhi rajya pe akraman kar rahi se . Aur waha ke sampatti ke saath saath waha ki bahu betio ko bhi utha kar le ja rahi hai apne sehensha ke liye .

Ssupriya - main saab janu aap ko chinta hai na ke humari hira ka rup rang uske liye abhisaap na bane? Aapdekhna ambe maa saabthik karengi aisa kuch na hoga .

Hari- Ishwar kare tera kaha sach ho warna uski chinta me to mane nind na ave

Supriya aap so jayiye ji saab thik hi hoga . Dono diya bujha kar so jate hai .

YE JA PAR FICTION HAI ISKA REAL SHOW SE KOI LENA DENA NAHI HAI.a

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NiCe start😊
Continue sOon...
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You have written beautifully!! I'm sorry my hindi is weak so it takes me time to decipher but you are awesome!!👏👏👏👏
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wow !...awesomely written..plz update soon...😊
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total hindi fanfic,loved it,do continnue soon.
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Originally posted by: Sofia13

NiCe start😊
Continue sOon...

Thank you . i wiil upload it in the weekenda so that you do not miss the show .😃
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Originally posted by: Sofia13

NiCe start😊
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thanks😃
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thank you😛
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Originally posted by: Az3003

You have written beautifully!! I'm sorry my hindi is weak so it takes me time to decipher but you are awesome!!👏


thanks a lot . thanks for the compliment😃
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Originally posted by: neetu53

wow !...awesomely written..plz update soon...😊

ofcose dear . i will upload it in the weekends so that you do not miss ja . love 😛

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