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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys hw r u all?sry main kafi tym k liye gayab ho gae thi par kya karu exams ane wale hai bt usse pahle i want 2 write a ff on rantara main bhut zada parts nae likh paungi coz of my exams bt i will try 2 write as much possible hope u enjoy...

PART 1

A:thik hai tum dono yaha rah sakte ho
R:shukriya
M:chal bhai saman rakh de andar
A:dekho mjhe yaha koi shor sharaba nae chaiye or na hi koi galat kam...
M:han han thik hai vaise b hum yaha sirf apna maksad pura karne aaye hai
A:(scared)kaisa maksad?
R:vo iska matlab hai ki apne kam se kam rakhenge or kuch nae
A:thik hai jao tumhara kamra vaha hai kitchen k pass or han vaha upar floor par nae ja sakte tum
R:kyu?
A:tum apne kam se kam rakho bola na nae jana matlab nae jana samjhe!
raghu n machmach agreed...
Raghu and machmach in dere room:
R:machmach is kamre k sare khidki darwaze band karde kisi ko pata nae chalna chahiye ki hum yaha chupe hai...
I know its very short n u r going 2 kill me 4 dis par itna hi likh pai so bear it pls n do leave ur comments

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Nice start
do continue soon
Take care

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Posted: 12 years ago
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omg...raghu n mm taking hideout in antus house...
intresting
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Posted: 12 years ago
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nice start dear do continue soon and pm me

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