Abhi yeh dekhna baki hai

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kahani khatam hone ko hai

Ant hai kareeb

Bahut kuch dekha

Kuch achcha kuch bura

Bahut kuch abhi baki hai


Saras aur Kumud ki shadi

Nanhe munne laddoo


Danny aur Kumari ka pyaara pyaara pyaar

Kusum ka pyaar kisi rajkumar ke saath


Chulbul ki pitayi Saras ke haath

Is ki hum sab ko hai bahut aas


Kumari ka thappad uske bapu ke gaal pe

Jo de rahe the uska haath Umess ke haath main


Lakshminandan ka business poora hi doobe

Guman se uska saath bhi toote


Guman ki Danny se ho jaye ladai

At Danny and Kumari ki sagai


Saubhagya Devi ki open hon eyes

At her prammy baby's evils and vice


Haar jayen election BD neta

For giving in to his nalayak beta


Prammy ki maut ho ek dum achanak

Narak ki yatana mile usko bhayanak


Aur kalika, uska haal ho aur bhi barbaad


SD Maiyya ke woh rahe sada saath


Jo karwaye usko pooja aur vrat


Aur prammy ki yaad main karti rahe jap



Aur kya dekhna hai

Abhi bata do

Baad mat kehna

Ki poocha kyon nahi

Njoy





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Samsangeetha thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
#2
Yes, loved your poem. Answers to many
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Posted: 11 years ago
#3
yes we want all this to happen
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Very nice poem!
Haan hame yeh sab dekhna hai, Sabse zyaada, Saras- Kumud ko pyar mein khush dekhna hai !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Nice post..
Mujhe bi ye sab dekna hain... :)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hope we get to see all this.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome post..want to c all most importantly SaMud shaadi n tht too in typical big fat indian wedding style-coverin their love moments in all rasams n tht too no tension iss baar..


Edited by Nikki_SAS-holic - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Arsh ji tusse kamaal 👏

Ek baat kahu gar suntay ho
mujhko to jaise lagta hai
mohabaat tab tak adhuri hai jab tak
bicharan hi raat na ho
tanhai ki shaam na ho
patjhad ka mausam na ho
zakhmi dil ka dard na ho
aanshu ki barsaat na ho
judai ka ehsaas na ho ...

Sukh ki sukh ho jivan mai
dukh na ho
to kya sukh ho?
Pyar hi pyar ho mitha mitha
shikayat, tanz, aur ilzam na ho
woh pyar hai kya?

Abhi to milan ke din huye hai do chaar
Jivan mai mausam aur bhi hai...😉

Edited by annete - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Kumud ki Maang saras ko bharna hai
Sabke saamne us par rangi Odhni chadhana hai

Saras ko apne shadi ki taiyyari Khud karna hai
Toran se Le kar lighting Tak karna hai

Danny aapko kumud aur saras ko khub satana hai
Saras ko bhi kumud ko taane sunana hai

Sharam ke maare kumud ko laal hona hai
Usse dekh kar sab ko hasna hai

Kumud ko saras par haq jatana hai
Bechare saras ko zoru ka ghulam banna hi hai

Danny Kumari ka pyaar dekh kar dugbaa ko pareshan hona hai
Saras ko unhe samjha kar bharosa dilana hai

LN aur gumaan ko wapas ana hai
Sabke saamne maafi maangna hai

Danny ko bhi aana hai
Kusum aur us ki Jodi banna hai

Saras ko khub samaj seva karna hai
Kumud ko us mein saath dena hai

Saras aur kumud ko shaam ke Samay baatein karna hai
Unka ladna, phir manaana yeh sab mujhe dekna hai


Ek laddoo, mirchi ya methi ka laddoo ko ana hai
Uss khabar sunkar saras ko Khushi se pagal hona hai



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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: pasumarthisa



Kumud ki Maang saras ko bharna hai
Sabke saamne us par rangi Odhni chadhana hai

Saras ko apne shadi ki taiyyari Khud karna hai
Toran se Le kar lighting Tak karna hai

Danny aapko kumud aur saras ko khub satana hai
Saras ko bhi kumud ko taane sunana hai

Sharam ke maare kumud ko laal hona hai
Usse dekh kar sab ko hasna hai

Kumud ko saras par haq jatana hai
Bechare saras ko zoru ka ghulam banna hi hai

Danny Kumari ka pyaar dekh kar dugbaa ko pareshan hona hai
Saras ko unhe samjha kar bharosa dilana hai

LN aur gumaan ko wapas ana hai
Sabke saamne maafi maangna hai

Danny ko bhi aana hai
Kusum aur us ki Jodi banna hai

Saras ko khub samaj seva karna hai
Kumud ko us mein saath dena hai

Saras aur kumud ko shaam ke Samay baatein karna hai
Unka ladna, phir manaana yeh sab mujhe dekna hai


Ek laddoo, mirchi ya methi ka laddoo ko ana hai
Uss khabar sunkar saras ko Khushi se pagal hona hai





Awesome ! Can almost imagine the scenes !! 😊

Lagta hai, Saras aur Kumud ke pyar ne sab ko kavi bana diya hai ! Reading these posts is as enjoyable, as watching Saras look at Kumud with love filled eyes! 😊

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