19/10 updated -Ashu k ishq me shayar ban baithe-thread 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hi there,
this is thread two of my shayari collection.
Oldies(in d forum) would remember that h started writing shayaris when ashu ji maroed dubki in gomati.
Wrote two shayaris today.
Hence sharing them.
Arz kia hai-
unki chahat ne dil kuch aisa toda

ki ek bhi aansoo na baha sake

dil me ghutan hai to bas is baat ki
ki jazbaaton ka janaja bhi na nikal saka


shayari 1 and 2 -page 1.

khayal -pg 3
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayanti_dj

Hi there,
this is thread two of my shayari collection.
Oldies(in d forum) would remember that h started writing shayaris when ashu ji maroed dubki in gomati.
Wrote two shayaris today.
Hence sharing them.
Arz kia hai-
unki chahat ne dil kuch aisa toda

ki ek bhi aansoo na baha sake

dil me ghutan hai to bas is baat ki
ki jazbaaton ka janaja bhi na nikal saka

would update 2nd shayari after gng home.

Deepaji after long long time reading your shayries.Best but sad shayries.
Ha gum hume bhi hai unse bichhadne ka.Judai ka shabd hi darawana hai
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayanti_dj

Hi there,
this is thread two of my shayari collection.
Oldies(in d forum) would remember that h started writing shayaris when ashu ji maroed dubki in gomati.
Wrote two shayaris today.
Hence sharing them.
Arz kia hai-
unki chahat ne dil kuch aisa toda

ki ek bhi aansoo na baha sake

dil me ghutan hai to bas is baat ki
ki jazbaaton ka janaja bhi na nikal saka

would update 2nd shayari after gng home.

Emotional shayari Deepa di ! Waiting fro the next one..,, 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome ji welcome Deepaji...🤗🤗 And congrats for thread-2!! 👏👏👏 I remember your shayaris in thread-1 😳 Great to see you here with new shayari!!

Lovely and emotional shayari but words r so true... Awaiting next one 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u alka ji,tupu n bawa

here's d 2nd one

khuli aankhon ke khwab hote nahi pure
yeh jaana humne khwabon ke bikharne ke baad
ab kaise samjhaen us bedard dil ko
jisme basti hai to bas aaj bhi usi ek khwab ki yaad
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome back ji,aap toh na kishton mein aate ho,yeh achchi baat nahin hai,aaya karo yaar😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wah..khoob badhiya shayari Deepa!👏👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayanti_dj

Thank u alka ji,tupu n bawa

here's d 2nd one

khuli aankhon ke khwab hote nahi pure
yeh jaana humne khwabon ke bikharne ke baad
ab kaise samjhaen us bedard dil ko
jisme basti hai to bas aaj bhi usi ek khwab ki yaad

👏
Lovely .. keep going Deepa di 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Welcome back Deepa!! 👏👏 Emotional shayaris!! 👏👏👏 Awaiting the next one. 😉


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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: jayanti_dj

Hi there,
this is thread two of my shayari collection.
Oldies(in d forum) would remember that h started writing shayaris when ashu ji maroed dubki in gomati.
Wrote two shayaris today.
Hence sharing them.
Arz kia hai-
unki chahat ne dil kuch aisa toda

ki ek bhi aansoo na baha sake

dil me ghutan hai to bas is baat ki
ki jazbaaton ka janaja bhi na nikal saka

would update 2nd shayari after gng home.

Hai! Nicely written verse Deepa, After a long time got to read something like this from you. 👍🏼 Very emotional. Yes, we are missing Ashuji and Nidhi too. 😃 Guess you were remembering 'Scar-wala' Ashu today, your inspiration of sorts. 😉😆

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