19/10 updated -Ashu k ishq me shayar ban baithe-thread 2

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#11

Originally posted by: jayanti_dj
Thank u alka ji,tupu n bawa

here's d 2nd one

khuli aankhon ke khwab hote nahi pure
yeh jaana humne khwabon ke bikharne ke baad
ab kaise samjhaen us bedard dil ko
jisme basti hai to bas aaj bhi usi ek khwab ki yaad

Wow, that is an emotional outpouring Deepa. So heartfelt, aptly describes the feeling we are left with when our dreams fall apart. Loved both of them. 😃

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Aardhan

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Posted: 11 years ago

#12

Its great to have you back DEepa. Welcome home! 😃

And Hearthy Congratulations for thread 2 👏

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parmarA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#13

Originally posted by: jayanti_dj
Thank u alka ji,tupu n bawa

here's d 2nd one

khuli aankhon ke khwab hote nahi pure
yeh jaana humne khwabon ke bikharne ke baad
ab kaise samjhaen us bedard dil ko
jisme basti hai to bas aaj bhi usi ek khwab ki yaad

Another beautiful shayri deepaji.Too emotional and heart touching.We are missing ashni badly😭😭

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suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Originally posted by: jayanti_dj
Hi there,
this is thread two of my shayari collection.
Oldies(in d forum) would remember that h started writing shayaris when ashu ji maroed dubki in gomati.
Wrote two shayaris today.
Hence sharing them.
Arz kia hai-
unki chahat ne dil kuch aisa toda

ki ek bhi aansoo na baha sake

dil me ghutan hai to bas is baat ki
ki jazbaaton ka janaja bhi na nikal saka

would update 2nd shayari after gng home.

Very nice Deepa

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suku_07

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Posted: 11 years ago

#15

Originally posted by: jayanti_dj
Thank u alka ji,tupu n bawa

here's d 2nd one

khuli aankhon ke khwab hote nahi pure
yeh jaana humne khwabon ke bikharne ke baad
ab kaise samjhaen us bedard dil ko
jisme basti hai to bas aaj bhi usi ek khwab ki yaad

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