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Posted: 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Sorry for late update!

EID MUBARAK!


Accept this update as a gift on this occasion.

PART 12

Geet's POV

After few hours

Jeh had fever from last incident and geet saw Kajal's red puff eyes.

May be she cried after seeing her brother like this. SIBLINGS? All the siblings have strange relationship they may fight all day but in the end of the day if any one of them got hurt they will cry buckets for them.

She smiled painfully thinking of her brother.

She always sent RAKHI (bracelet) on brother sister day (I don't know the real name of that festival sorry) to her brother but he never protects her.

In fact it has been years since he has come to meet her. But she loves him he is her brother after all.

She just brushed the thoughts. And called Amy to tell office about her leave for tomorrow

Oh God! I never thought you will patch up this soon with that good for nothing husband of yours.

Jeh have fever Amy that's why I am taking leave.

Fever? How he was fine.

Will tell you later

But.

Bye

i disconnected the call .

After few minutes

Her cell rings

Hello?

How did he have fever?

Amy?

What I know my name.

Go to hell

She disconnected the call with a small smile lingering on her lips.

Amy really knows how to make her feel better in the worst situations.

After few seconds

Her cell phone rings again.

Amy?????

Hello is this Mrs. Khurana?

Yes?

This is sister lily from HEALTH CARE hospital.

Yes how can I help you?

Madam your husband is very critical and is about to be taken to OT.

Husband...?

Yes Mr. Khurana. He was met with an accident.we found his identity and your num from his wallet.

Ok I m come... n...g

I felt something unbearable.

A loud sob escape from my mouth.

I can't take Jeh and Kajal to hospital because of Jeh's health it's almost night and Maan need me there.

I never felt so helpless.

Choice was between my kids and my love cum husband cum my deceiver.

But now I know my choice loud and clear.

After few minutes

I reached the building named as HEALTH CARE HOSPITAL.

I had left my kids with my landlord. And called Amy for further assistance

I went against my mind and supported my heart once again.

I reached the reception and asked about Maan and got to know that he has met with a very disastrous accident the car was completely destroyed and luckily Maan was alive and he is in a very critical condition. I completed the formalities and sit on my bench outside OT.

A girl beside me passed me a tissue.

I looked at her in shocked.

I didn't realize that tears were continuously flowing out of my eyes.

I love my Maan no he is just my husband I love my husband.

That girl passed a smile and assured me every thing will be alright.

Alright (I smiled robotic-ally)

Yea alright I thanked the girl and was again lost in my agony.

My head was heavy and tears were continuously flowing out but I was blank.

I looked at my wedding ring that was the ideal ring in the appearance but the Man who made me wear that ring was not ideal.

Now I wished that not even enemy's daughter get such husband. But still I was in love with him.

I felt a hand on my shoulder

I looked up and saw a girl again who passed me a tissue.

How is my husband?

Doctors are still operating him.

Okay.

I was about to lost again when I heard her again.

Please drink this water.

Water? I looked at her again and saw a glass of water in her hand.

No I m fine. Thanks.

You are sitting here from last night it has been nearly 12 hours. Nor you have slept a wink or have eaten or drank something. You will fall ill.

I took glass of water from her and drank that.

She come and sat beside me.

You and your husband must be deeply in love right?

Love? I let a chuckle out. No dear he hates me.

Hates? She looked at me as I am an alien.

Yes.

Then why are you here?

It's complicated.

After few minutes

Why are you here?

i asked her not able to hid my curiosity.

I have blood cancer.

Cancer? I m sorry

Don't be! I will be operated dear (she smiles)

I looked at her and admired her.

You want to live don't you?

Yes I want to.

How does that feels?

You know I was engaged then when my in laws and the boy I loved came to know about this they broke the alliance.

What about your family?

Orphan!

I suddenly realized that people have bigger sorrows than me. I have my kids with me at least.

You know honey. There is always a day after a dark night.

I looked at her again. A girl hardly of 19 was giving me advices.

That girl has that innocence on her face that will melt any one.

When is your operation?

Soon! (She suddenly becomes sad)

I noticed that!

What is your name?

And why will I tell you aunty (she showed me her tongue)

I was amused a second before she was mature giving me advices and now.

A nurse come and informed me that Maan has been shifted to a room after a successful operation.

I said to that girl to wait. I don't know what attracted me towards her.

I went into that private room where Maan was kept.

He was lying there lifelessly with many wires attached to his body.

I felt a pang on my heart.

I went towards him and admire him sleeping.

That was my habit to admire him sleeping.

Doctors told me that his hand and leg's bone are broken and he is still quite critical.

I made my decision that was tough but was justified.

I called Arman and inquired about kids.

They were doing well and Jeh was better.

I let out a sigh of relief.

Maan was unconscious and doctors were checking him!

I suddenly remembered about that girl.

Doctor?

Who is that girl outside the wards?

That girl is orphan very sweet girl but she has cancer. And she always inspires others to live their lives because she knows about her death very soon.

Y? What about her operation?

She can't afford it!

That doctor walked out leaving me in shock and pool of sorrows,

Just then I felt something on my hand.

I saw Maan holds my hand and he was looking at me.

He was conscious now. I called for the doctor and doctors checked him again and told me that he was out of danger.

Geet?

G?

I m sorry!

Sorry is not enough Maan.

I didn't realize...

I turned my face and he tighten his hold of my hand but he winced his right hands was broken but left also have some injuries I was about to call doctor again.

Don't geet!

I didn't say anything just remained UN moved.

Give me a chance?

Chance for what!? To cheat me again?

No to win you again I was a fool. I didn't realize what was I missing, In my ego and hatred.

I saw his eyes were wet.

I felt my heart was melting.

But his face full of injuries and his wet eyes were doing wonders.

Ok you want a chance Na?

Yes.

You will do any thing Na?

Yes anything

So you have to do one thing for me

I will do anything

Precap- what will geet tell him to do?

A big sorry for late update me holding my ears but it was eid and was busy in preparation and I also needed time for this part because It was really hard for me.

EID MUBARAK GUYS! May this eid brings lots of happiness in our lives

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This will be my gift for eid.

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Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

wow me first

lovely update
thank god maan is fine
eid mubarak dear
Edited by lehr - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update
Geet chose her heart instead of her mind
thank god maan is safe
liked that girl a lot who consoled geet
lets see what geet will ask from maan
eagerly waiting for the next part
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part .maan is in hospital and geet taking care of him ...
chaalo ab maan ko pata to chalega k sameera aur usme kitna farq he ...
i think geet maan ko sabse pehle kids ka din jeetne ko bolegi agar usk kids usko accept kar lenge dil se to geet bhi maanf kar degi ...
waiting for next long part soon ...
happy EID 🤗
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Posted: 11 years ago


wow lovely emotional update.. te way geet with te kids and te way her feelings was lovely .. te way my maan met with an accident and te way geet rushing, even thought she denys her heart will accept my maan tats my maaneet love.. te way geet ki pain and te way a small girl consoling her was lovely emotional heart touching.. te way my maan talking to geet and asking a chance and geet saying was lovely.. will geet ask him to help tat small girl? or ask him to move away from her..i love te update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
so geet is ready to give chance
but what is maan's condition?
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
i think geet will ask maan to give money to operate the girl

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