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Part- 23
All went to their respective rooms...
Nutz:- Dhurv, Pihu chalo aap dono mere saat room share karenge...
Dhruv:- Nahi..muje mummy ke paas sona hai...
Pihu:- muje bhi..
 
Priya:- Haan Nutz...Dhruv abhi teek hua hai..unhe hamare paas rehne de...
Nutz:- Bhabhi...aap iski chinta matt kariye...mein sambhal lungi..aur koi problem hui toh aapko bula dungi...
Nutzz then, turns towards Kids...
Nutz:- achha kisko aaj jungle ke raja ki kahaani sunni hai..
 
Dhruv and Pihu:- mujeee...Yayyy...
Pihu:- Mumma...kya mein bua ke saat so jao
Priya bend on her knees and kiss pihu on her forehead and said "Haan...lekin bua ko jyada tang matt karna aur Dhruv..sone se pehle Bathroom kar lena"
Nutz:- mein kara dungi...Bye..and Good night...
Saying this Nutz, kids and Shipra went to their room.
 
Vikram:- chal..raat bahut ho gayi hai..drive karke thak bhi gaye hai...kal subah milte hai...Good night
Neha:- Good Night and have fun and wink at Raya...
Ram gritting his teeth.
Raya entered the room
Ram without looking at Priya went to bathroom. Priya tries to stop him but he is not interested in talking.
When Ram came back, again she tried to speak with Ram.
 
Priya:- Ram...mein aapse kuch...
Before she completes her sentence..Ram stopped her
Ram:- Raat bahut ho gayi hai Priya...drive karke takk bhi gaya hoon. Kal subah jaldi bhi nikalna hai...issliye neend aa rahi hai..tum jao fresh ho jao..aur so jao..
 
Priya controls her tears to come out. She felt very bad...
After freshen up she saw Ram is laying awake in the bed.
Ram:- Sorry Priya...meine koshish ki thi ki alag sa room book kar lu..but room khali nahi tha...mere liye cough chotta padega tum chaho toh cough par so sakti ho.
 
Priya remembers yesterday's incidence. How everything is changed in one night. How her words hurts Ram this much. But she decided to sleep with ram and settled with him and switch off the lights. Ram is facing her back.
Both are in the same bed but still very far. Both wanted to end all this fights and come together. But their ego is not let them to solve this issue. Priya had enough of all this torture, and Ram wanted to take her away where nobody knows her. Both were trying to sleep but ended with sleepless night.
 
Next morning,
In Nutz Room,
Shipra stirred from her sleep. She saw pihu; her one leg around her and her hand over her chest. Shipra remember how Priya did the same when she was small. Whenever she opens her eyes, she saw priya kept her hand and leg around her and held her possessively.
Shipra smiles. First time Shipra felt something for Pihu. Something belongs to her.
Shipra thinks "Bilkul apne Maa par gayi hai...woh bhi issi tarah haat-pair mere par rakti thi...
All went to water splash...all kids are there in swimming suit. Ram in jeans and t-shirt so as Priya...She is not playing. She is disturbed. Ram is busy with kids, whereas Priya is settled in shack. Shipra came and sits beside her. Priya saw and suddenly wipe her tears.
Shipra:-Priya hum issi hafte wapas chale jaayenge...papa ka phone aaya tha..keh rahe the ki Rajat mein thoda improvement dikk raha hai...aur yeh bahut badi baat hai...agar eise hi chalta raha toh rajat bahut jald coma se wapas aa jaayega...
Priya looks at Shipra in shock.
Shipra continue...
Rajat ki maa aur sab keh rahe the ki yeh saara improvement tumhari wajah se ho raha hai...hame jald hi wapas jana hoga...
Priya again silent and looks down. Both were talking when Neha calls Priya.
Priya saw Neha waving her hand and telling her to come in the pool. Priya with her actions told her that she is not coming. But Neha continuously call her...
Here, Shipra continuously speaking with her "tu sun rhi hai na mein kya keh rahi hoon.."
Priya:- Maa..neha muje bula rahi hai..pata nahi kya kaam hai..mein milkar aati hoon.
 
Neha:- wahan kya kar rahi hai...chal aa na thode der paani mein khelte hai...
Priya:- Nahi Neha ...muje interest nahi hai...
Neha:- what Priya..hum sab yahan enjoy karne ke liye aaye hai..aur tum ho ki yahan chup chap baithi ho..kam se kam apne bachho ke saat khel lo...dekho Ram aur bachhe kitna enjoy kar rahe hai...
 
Priya looks at ram and kids. She felt bad that she is missing from there...
Priya:- Nahi Neha...Ram bahut kush hai mein kam-ma-khaa wahan jaakar unhe pareshan nahi karna chahti...
Neha:- Kya hua Priya...mein kal se notice kar rahi hoon ki tum-dono bahut upset ho...kuch toh hua hai...koi jagda hua hai kya...
 
Priya eyes gets moisten.
Priya:-Mujse bahut badi galti ho gayi Neha...meine Ram ko bahut kuch suna diya jo muje nahi kehna chahiye tha...
Neha:- kya hua...tumne eisa usse kya kaha
 
Priya:- Neha tum janti ho Ram sab jante the ki meri family kahan hai...meri Rajat ke saat shaadi ho chuki hai...Aur ram ne mujse yeh baat chupayi
Neha(shockingly):- What?????
Priya:- isse se gussa hokar meine Ram se bahut kuch keh diya(Priya said whatever happen between them)
Neha:- Priya...yeh tumne kya kiya...Janti ho Ram ke Zindagi ka yeh sabse kadwa sach hai..jisse tumhe dobara saamne laya hai...ek baar uspar vishwas kar leti...arre jab Ram ke saamne tumhe aur apne parivaar kisi ek ko chunna tha...toh usne bina kuch soche tumhe chuna...kya eisa ek insan tumhare saat kabhi kuch galat kar sakta hai...
Priya:- Mein janti hoon Neha...mujse bahut badi galti ho gayi...mein maafi bhi maangna chahti hoon..lekin Ram hai ki mujse baat takk nahi kar rahe...baat kya meri taraf dekh takk nahi rahe...
 
Neha:- Priya ek baat batao...kya tum sach mein Ram se divorce chahti ho...Tumhe kya lagta hai Priya...Ram ko Divorce dene se kya Ram jee paayega...woh jeete ji marr  jayega Priya...woh tumse bahut pyar karta hai.
                                                                                 meine usse tuthe hue dekha hai jab tumne usse sign kiye hue divorce paper beja tha...uski halat dekkar meine khud usse sign karne ke liye kaha tha...Ek baar sochke dekho Priya...Kya Ram kabhi tumse jhoot bol sakta hai... ...Meine hi Vikram se kaha tha ki Ram ko kabhi bhi sachhayi ka pata nahi chalna chahiye...
 
Priya:- Matlab????
Neha:- Matlab yeh ki Priya...Ram ko tumhari zindagi ke baare mein kuch nahi pata tha...haan Priya...Vikrm ne tumhari tasweer uss missing list mein se dekh li thi...aur Ram ko yeh baat pata na chale iske liye missing list wahan se delete bhi kar di...sachaayi ka pata lagane Vikram tumhare ghar Pune bhi gaya tha...tumhare aur Rajat ke gharwalo se bhi mila tha...Vikram yahi chahta tha ki tumhe saari sachhayi ka pata chale...lekin meine hi Vikram ko batane ke liye mana kiya tha...
 
Priya:- Lekin kyun Neha???
Neha:- Aur kya karte hum...tumne suicide karne ki koshish ki thi..Ram paagalo ki tarah tumse pyar karta tha...kaise bata dete Priya hum ki tumhari shaadi ho chuki hai...
 
Priya:- Neha...meri shaadi ho chuki thi...do you know what it means????
Neha:- muje pata hai..kya matlab hai iska.  lekin ek baat batao... aaj tumhare zindagi mein Ram hai..tum dono ke do pyare se bachhe hai. agar tum apne purani zindagi mein laut jati toh shayad tumhare paas yeh sab nahi hota...
 
Priya:- pata hai Neha...yeh baat chupakar tumne bahut badi galti ki hai...aur meine bina kuch jaane Ram ko itna kuch suna diya. Kya kya kaha meine Ram se
Neha:- Priya...I am sorry...jo bhi kuch hua sab hamare wajah se hua...lekin hum tum dono ko bichadte hue nahi dekh sakte the...
 
Priya:- neha...meine bahut badi galti kar di...mein Ram ke saat eisa kaise kar sakti hoon...bina kuch soche samje meine divorce paper par sign kar diya...(Priya crying bitterly)
Priya continue...
Muje mera ram wapas chahiye Neha...mein unke bagair nahi reh sakti...mujse yeh sab aur nahi hoga neha...and she again starts crying..
Neha:- arre kuch nahi hoga Priya..dekho hum hai na...hum kuch nahi hone denge...
Priya hugs neha tightly and crying whereas Neha pats her head gently...
After doing lots of masti everybody returns from the water splash. In the evening all went to park. Kids are very excited. Here also ram tries to avoid Priya. Natasha is taking care of Nevik and raya kids...whereas Ram and Vikram were walking and discussing about business work...
Neha made a plan...she called Vikram...
Neha:- Vikram yeh sab kya hai...
Vikram:- arre humne kya kiya...
 
Neha:- tum dono shayad bhool rahe ho ki hum yahan ek saat picnic par aaye hai..aur tum dono hai ki akele akele hi ghume jaa rahe ho...yahi karna that toh ghar se itni dur kyun aaye hai...
Vikram:- achha..Sorry..lekin abb tum kya chahti ho...
Neha:- Mein chahti hoon ki tum mere saat chalo aur Ram ko Priya ke paas chod do...saying this she drag Vikram from there
Neha:- Priya...Ram ko pakde rakko kahi jaane matt dena
 
Raya gets embarrassed.
Ram:- Mein bachho ko dekhkar aata hoon...
Priya could say or stop him he left...Priya felt very bad...

 

At  night,
In Raya room,
Ram is packing his clothes.
Priya:- Aap kahi jaa rahe hai...
Ram:- Haan...woh neeche first floor par ek kamra khali hua hai ...toh socha wahan shift ho jau...
Priya is broken...She said nothing and Ram shift from there.
 
Ram forgets to take his purse from Priya's room. So he goes back. Ram knocks the door twice..but there is no response. Then he noticed that door is closed but not locked. He opens the door and takes his purse and looks around...Priya is nowhere
 
Ram:- Yeh Priya itni raat ko darwaza band kiye bagair kahan chali gayi...kahi washroom mein tho ahi...
Ram goes near washroom and calls her..but no response...Ram raise his voice this time and calls her...but again there is no response. Priya is not in washroom...Ram gets worried...
Ram search her in the balcony but she is not there also. Ram came out from the room and searches her in the corridor. But there is no glimpse of Priya.
Ram gets worried and angry too of her carelessness. Ram knocks Nutz room. Nutz open the door.
Nutz:- Kya hua bhaiyya...aap bahut pareshan lag rahe ho...bhabhi teek toh hai na...
Ram understands Priya is not there.
Nutz:- Bhai...kya hua...
Ram came back from his sense

 

Ram:- Nahi chotti..kuch nahi bachhe so gaye na.
Nutz:- Haan bhai...woh toh aate waqt hi so gaye the..aap hi ne toh unhe yahan sulakar gaye...
Ram:- Sorry...woh Dhruv abhi bhukar se utha hai na..aur aaj bahut der paani mein bhi khela toh thoda darr gaya tha...issliye dekhne aa gaya..
Nutz:- Relax bhai..Dhurv aaram se so raha hai...app hi jaakar aaram se so jaayiye
Ram gets worried.
Ram:- kahan chali gayi ho Priya...kitna bhi koshish karu tumse dur jane ki mein uthna hi tumhare paas aane ke liye tadapta hoon
At last Ram knocks Vikram room.
Vikram:- Ram...itni raat ko tu kar kya raha hai...
Ram:- Priya kahi chali gayi hai..mein sab jagha doond chukka hoon...kahi dikk nahi rahi...
Vikram:- Priya eise kaise jaa sakti hai...tumhare beech kuch hua toh nahi na...
Ram said what he did...
Vikram:- y eh tune kya kar diyaRam...alag sa room book karne ki kya zaroorat thi
Neha:- (Angrily) Pagal ho gaye ho kya tu..
Ram:- tum janti nahi ho meine eise kyun kiya
 
Neha:- mein sab kuch janti hoon..aaj Priya ne muje sab kuch bata diya. Manti hoon ki Priya ne bahut badi galti ki...usse woh sab kuch tumse nahi kehna chahiye tha...aur yeh baat Priya bhi janti hai ki usne jo kiya galat kiya. Woh tumse maafi bhi maangna chahti thi...lekin tum usse baat toh kya..Priya ka moo tak nahi dekh rahe the...eisa konsa problem hai jo tum dono baithkar sulja nahi sakte...aur upar se yeh..alag sa room book karna..iski kya zaroorat thi...Priya chali bhi gayi toh kuch galat nahi kiya...
Vikram:- Neha..Relax...Priya ko kuch nahi hua hoga..yahi kahi hogi..
 
Ram:- please guys...mujse jo kehna hai keh do...lekin baad mein. Mein manta hoon..mujse galti ho gayi..lekin abb yeh baat zaroori hai ki abhi hum pehle Priya ko dunde..itni raat ko pata nahi kahan gayi hogi..
 
Neha:- usko phone toh karo...
Ram:- tum hamesha uske saat rehti ho na...please kabhi usse samja do ki kahi jaaye toh apna phone apne saat rake...uska phone kamre mein hi hai...
 
Vikram:- Nutz aur shipraji ke kamre mein dekha...
Ram:- Nahi Priya wahan nahi hai aur meine abhi takk unhe bataya nahi  ... ...kaam-ma-khaa. Mummyji shuru ho jaayegi
Vikram:- chal abhi reception mein poochte hai ki kahi Priya bahar toh nahi gayi..
 
In reception,
Girl:- Sir...aapki wife ko abhi thodi der pehle bahar jaate hua dekha hai...
Vikram:- aap bata sakte hai ki kahan gayi hai...
Girl:- haan shayad lawn mein gayi hai...
Ram:- (angrily) aap log itni raat ko kisi ko lawn mein jaane kaise de sakte hai...
Vikram:- tu uspar kyun gussa ho raha hai...chal dundte hai...

 

In the lawn...Ram, Vikram and Neha searching for Priya...Ram is worried and fully sweated...
Ram murmers "Please priya aa jao..mein wada karta hoon tumhe chodkar mein kahi nahi jaaunga"

 

 

Precap:- Rajat is back...he came out from coma

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn


</div><font color="#9900ff">haan abb ram maanne ko taiyaar nahi toh Priya bhi naraz rahegi na...</font>
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<font color="#9900ff">Ram room se bahar chala gaya issliye Priya bhi chali gayi😆</font>


Yaha kya tit for tat chal raha hai.. 😆 😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
Arre update bhi aagaya..
dhanywad😊

Thx for the PM.

Priya madam itna pyar karti ho to , ab jatavo bhi , aise hide and seek kyon kar rahi ho??
Nicely penend down Neha n Priya's talk, priya's guilt, neha's sorry n the fact also her asking and advising priya. Kabhi soch mein padh jaati hoon itni easily kaise likh leti ho?..
Yaar tumne dhruv ko Nutz k paas bheja accha nhi laga mujhe, I know Raya needs space par , kabhi kabhi bacchoan ko bhi sunni chahiye unko bhi parents k saath rehna accha lagta , aise jab unki mom bahot din door rahi ho.

Ye mumma shipra remembering  priya by pihu's gesture was good progression soem connecting chord developing. ships ko Rajjo aur family ki bahot padi hai, beti ko pressurise karte jaa rahi hai, but not understandig her dilemma so bad. Neha the saviour always their for Ram n Priya. Good 
Ab mission Priya dhoondo rambabu, biwi nhi mili toh poori hotel ke staff ko jail bhijwadenge😆 aise kaise unki biwi ko kisi  ko bhi raat mein lawn mein ghumane bhej sakte hai hotelwale😆
posessiveness n care shown in ram's tone...
awesome writing..
Preview mein arre rajjo uthne wala hai-😆 chalo dekhte hai.


Edited by bpatil3 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very intrsting nd forwrd to see wht stores for dem?
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Posted: 10 years ago
 Nice update... Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update...
abhi tk ram ji angry bird bane hue haii...
are priya to ro ro kr ganga jamuna baha rhi hai...
ab sach pata chal gya to...
raya ko kyun alag alag room mein rakh rhi ho...
priya ji kaha chali gyi...
ab ram ji door nhi jaane denge priya ko 😆
Matlb aur paas aa jaayenge 😉
are ab ye rajjjo coma se aakr kya krega !!!!
continue soon !!!
thanks for the pm🤗Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
very intrestng update...!!!
akhir ram and priya  realised their mistakes...!!!

rajat out of coma???
ab kyahoga??

contn soon...
thnx fr the pm...!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update..
Both re hurt nd realised their mistake..good
Priya's guilt, sorry feeling nd her convo with Neha..very well written
Neha nd Vik re always there to clear their MU nd help them realise their mistakes..true frnds they re.. 👍🏼
Shipra ko Pihu mein Priya ki jhalak dikhi or pehli bar kuch mehsoos kiya unhone bachon ke liye..but i think she ignored this bcoz in next scene she was after Priya again..unhe toh apni beti ka dhukh bhi nhi dikhta.. 😔
Ram nd kids re playing while Priya felt left out.. 😒
Ram ji toh dusre room mein shift hue the par yeh Priya kaha chali gyi..nhi mili toh sabki shamat hai..Ram nhi chodega sabko.. 😆 jiski ek jhalak dikh gyi abhi..angry man ban gaye hai Ram ji😛
Good job..👏
Precap seems interesting..looking forward to it
Thanx for pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
it was nice priya has also realise her mistake and want to apologies to ram but he is avoiding her hoping for the best will come soon and thanx for the pm waiting for next part update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: bpatil3

Arre update bhi aagaya..

dhanywad😊

Thx for the PM.

Priya madam itna pyar karti ho to , ab jatavo bhi , aise hide and seek kyon kar rahi ho??
Nicely penend down Neha n Priya's talk, priya's guilt, neha's sorry n the fact also her asking and advising priya. Kabhi soch mein padh jaati hoon itni easily kaise likh leti ho?..
Yaar tumne dhruv ko Nutz k paas bheja accha nhi laga mujhe, I know Raya needs space par , kabhi kabhi bacchoan ko bhi sunni chahiye unko bhi parents k saath rehna accha lagta , aise jab unki mom bahot din door rahi ho.

Ye mumma shipra remembering  priya by pihu's gesture was good progression soem connecting chord developing. ships ko Rajjo aur family ki bahot padi hai, beti ko pressurise karte jaa rahi hai, but not understandig her dilemma so bad. Neha the saviour always their for Ram n Priya. Good 
Ab mission Priya dhoondo rambabu, biwi nhi mili toh poori hotel ke staff ko jail bhijwadenge😆 aise kaise unki biwi ko kisi  ko bhi raat mein lawn mein ghumane bhej sakte hai hotelwale😆
posessiveness n care shown in ram's tone...
awesome writing..
Preview mein arre rajjo uthne wala hai-😆 chalo dekhte hai.


arre who kya hai na...agar meine Dhruv ko Priya ke saat sula diya...toh Priya karma chodkar nahi jaati...tabb Ram ko tension bhi nahi hoti...abb at least ram Priya ke liye desperate toh ho raha hai na...😛...arre aage aur bhi raate aayegi jab dhruv apne parents ke saat soyega...uske liye zaroori hai na pehle Raya apne differences dur kare...
thanks for comments🤗...will continue soon with Rajat's entry😉
Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago