FF:-The Enchanted Beast (Ashlok)[Prt:-03/Pg:15]

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Hey all :)
This not my First FF, still would like to tell u all ..this is story of two person opposite to each other(nothing surprising 😆)..how they come face to face and fall for each other (again nothing different😆) but can just promise is this story is little different frm regular love-hate relation



He looked at the Red rose ,admiring its deadly beauty. There fragile petals were gilstening rain drop frm the early morning shower.the stem was covered with the pricks as the rose was glowing with pride, still being attached to the stem. It was proud of thyself even though it was covered with threats, its beauty still allured the eye of the beholder. He took the chance of getting pricked nd ripped the rose frm the stem,its home.He groaned as his blood, the color of rose glided down his finger. He closed his eyes nd smelled the piece of gods art ,letting the small delicate petal touch his face as he inhaled the sweet aroma. One must go through the pain before achieving anything ..rose in his case he thought. He laughed at his poetic thought. He looked at the beautiful rose with admiration in his eyes before squishing the flower, crumpling its petals ,breaking the stem and throwing it on the ground ...he laughed evily looking at the wound on his palm nd dug his nails deeper in the wound.
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She smiled looking at the single red rose which stood proud a day before was dull today, she took the rose out of the vase nd tied it up side down to the window sill
"kyun bandti to phoolon ko is tarah " asked another girl
"aise baandhne se pholon ki zindagi bad jati hai, Kuch aur waqt miljayega in phoolon ko jeene k liye"the girl replied smiling at another girl
"tu aur teri baatein..now hurry up" anothe girl said
She stared at the rose
"it is said wen u have a reason to live, u die slow. same applies to flowers wen they get fresh air to breath, the dry slow"she said
,nd smiled looking at the dried rose petals adorning the little glass pot.


She Dared To Fall For a Beast...He was Attracted towards an unreachable Enigmatic Glow

DO let me know ur response


~shab😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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PART:-1
Edited by sweetshab - 11 years ago
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Sounds interesting, can't wait to read it
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👏 Spectacular start!!! Would definitely like to read more!!! 😉 PM me whenever you update.😊
Edited by ..-AsYa-.. - 11 years ago
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NICE ONE...CONTINUE SOON...👏
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continue continue continue 😊
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Awesome start dear shab!!!U r really great in writtng!!Especially the comparision btwn flower and life!!!Plzz do continue soon!!!And if ur thinking to pm then plzz include in ur pm list..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rbb1

Sounds interesting, can't wait to read it



thnks..will cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: ..-AsYa-..

👏
Spectacular start!!! Would definitely like to read more!!! 😉 PM me whenever you update.😊




thnkss
will do :-)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: meerab147

<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">NICE ONE...CONTINUE SOON...👏</font>



thnks ...will do soon

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