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Posted: 18 years ago
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hi guys

well todays epi was just fabolous

well it is not word2word written......................likin jitna yaad hai utna likh rahi hoon

nandini and kshitij take Maa jii to the registoror. The Shrvastav kids had called a doctor as they claimed that Maa jii is mentally unfit

the doc start questioning him

doc: app ka poora naam kia hai

all the Shrivastav kids look at her, while nandini place her hand on Kshitij hand in nervousness and kshitij look at her

Maa jii: (all the words on nandini repeats in her mind and on again asking she said) Prithiba Narinder Shrivastav (she said that in fragments)

then doc ask her a long list of questions and Maa ji gave all the answers right................Shrivastav kids face was worth looking

doc: ok prathiba jii, yeh mera akhiri sawal hai. app k patti ne apni sarri property kiss k naam ki

shrivastav kids look at her instantly while nandini was nervous

Maa ji: kissi k bhi nahin................

a dhamaka on shrivastav kids

Maa ji: balkay unhoon ne apni sarri 5000 karoor ki jaidad ki trusty Durgesh Nandini ko banaya hai

Nandini's and Kshitij's face light up while Shrivastav kids face.............šŸ˜•

doc: Prathiba jii app ne sare sawaloon k sahi jawab diye hain..............(to the registotor) mujhe lagta hai k yeh bhilkul theek hain

doc leaves and now the registorar

reg: Prathiba jii.............(giving her the papers) app iss pe sign kar dain

as Prathiba was about to take it..................amrit said to reg

amrit: mujhay lagta hai k Maa ko medicines day k kuch deer k liye normal kiya gaya hai......

reg: or mujhe lagta hai k app log galat hain...................prathiba jii bilkul theek hain...............or yeh doc bhi app hi ka bulaya howa tha..............kyoun Mr.assem

Assem nod in yes, helplessly

Maa jii signed the paper and then nandini too sign it and registaror take a leave saying that all the belonging of Mr.Shrivastav and all the rights are now in of Nandini.

Maa jii stand up and nandini said her that they win

amrit Maa jii pe haath uthanay lagta hai k nandini usay janwar kehte howay dhakay deti hai or kshitij maa jii ko galay laga leta hai

nandini: abh agar maa jii pe haath uthaya tau mujh se bura koi na ho ga.........kia samjhe

assem hold amrit and amrit said what should we do now

on the other hand maa ji was quite frightened and was trembling................assem look at her and said that he will file a case against "the Briya" and nandini and will take all the money back

the three bro sis smile and left while nandini and kshitij take maa ji to the doc

doc asked them to take her home as all she need is, love. Love is the only medicine for her which she can find in home

Nandini nod in yes and asked Maa ji to went home, this time.........for lifetime.

Nandini and Kshtij take Maa jii to home and all Shrivastav family look stunned. Nandini asked chandu to take Maa ji to the room and then said to Shrivastav Kids

Nandini: wahan pe bara bol rahay thay..............tab main chup rahi kyoun k mere pass tab jawab deyna ka waqt na tha.............jaoo jo karna hai karoo...........likin aik bar sun loo...................Maa jii k kamre k ass pass bhi mujhe koi nazar na aaye...............Or haan................truste honay k natay............tuhar mahinay ka kharach, gariyan, bank balance or office sab meri muthi(haathon) main hain....................

then she went towards the women and said................yahan khari khari kia kar rahi hoo...............jao ja k khana banaoo...................or haan aj se bahir se kahan nahin aaye ga...............khud apnay haathon se banao giii

all the women went to the kitchen, and start making food but no one had make anything perfect................while Bua was sitting down in the kitchen, making food on ANGITHI and said to the son-in-law of the family that they are only entertaining us as we are making food

while seeing the burn breads, the children make fun of it by saying half moon and Rakhsas but the women asked them that no one will stand up without eating................assem look at pulses but it was more water than pulses

he stand up and said that it is better to give yogurt rice from this..........as that can fill the stomach....................Nandini calls bacha party and feed them food make by Bua...................and then they went to maa jii room

Maaji get threatened on seeing some one having food as it remaind her of the day when assem came to her with food....................but then assem daughter asked her to eat some food.................firstly she trembeled but then she remember that these kids were nice to her and feed her when Shrivastav kids don't let her have anything to eat....................then she eat from her hand and called other children too

Nandini went to Shrivatav pic and said that ur children gave her hatred but ur grand-children gave her love......................now ur children have to pay for it

as all the Shrivastav kids went to sleep.............with empty stomach............DN along with all came while playing music(dhol, dafli etc)

Shrivastav kids ask her what is this...................DN said that there is now a new rule .................we will dance in night.......................until u guys don't participate in it too

All kids start dancing while bacha party and DN family make fun of them

All faint down and then DN said that now tell me, how is it feel to sleep with empty stomach...................i thought atleast till one day u all should sleep like that....................as u did the same with maa ji...................now u have to pay for it

and then DN asked Chandu to have an eye in maa jii's room and don't let anyone in

amrit asked assem what to do now(ah.................he always said that..........don't he have mind?"šŸ˜•

in the morning.................Shrivastav kids were disappear..............Dn went to Ma jii room and see that Chandu was sleeping...............on asking him he said that he was sleeping for just 2 min and Maa ji will be inside

DN went inside.........................but MAA JII was not there..........

ok guys
tell me whether u like my update or not
or if u want to give me some guide lines.......................then u r most welcome

tc

lolz
ana

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey ana the update was very nice.... keep up the good work :)
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks Ana...nice update...keep it up šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you so much! its was great 😃 šŸ‘
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thanks
the update was great
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u sooooo much for nice update!!!!!!!!!!! šŸ‘ i like ur style!! 😃 keep it up! šŸ‘šŸ¼ best of luck! 😊

dil se...................................................!šŸ˜‰

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanx for the update. The serialis predictable but interesting at this point.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank u guys
well i write any update 4 the 1st time althiugh i always wanted
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thank u 4 ur support

lolz
ana

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