new ss'THE GAME OF LIFE' chapter 4 pg 16 - Page 9

Originally posted by: serat

really good updateee👍🏼

Originally posted by: MAHI1198

wow lovely andy
read all parts in one go..
update soon

Originally posted by: anjuroopak

hai andy... 😃 hi anju😛

update was awesome😊.loved it a lot.👏 thanks so much

i have a doubt andy.y u always make uday a criminal. 😈he is not a criminal in my one ss

poor uday 😆 .and here manyata is a police officer

assigned to catch him.wat a jodi😆.police and thief. just like beauty and the beast😆

converstion between manveer was beautifully written. thanks i had doubts whether the convo would make any sense

loved it.👏 thanks

all in all chappy was fabulose.👏but it was short.next

time try to give a long one.😊

try to update as soon as possible.cant wait
i will try to give a long update next time😃
😃

Originally posted by: aathiraa

nice 😃

Originally posted by: anushruthi

Great update

continue soon

thanks for the PM

Originally posted by: Jarin04

omg uday got to know about manyata that's scary

Originally posted by: ...navina...

Awesome update , really interesting.thanks navi darling😆, i though you left this ss Seems like there might be a snitch in Manyata's department ... that's how Uday came to know about her part in his loss!there could be. but whom??😆😆😆😆😆any guess? The last bit of dialogue between Manveer was firey😳!!!! It was brilliant👏. honestly i thought that part did not make any sense😕 Continue soon, thanks for the PM😊. pm sectiom working?? Sorry about the late reply ...i actually thanking you, i am just relieved for the reason stated above ... I got ton's of reading to catch up on. best of luck😃