holla guys...shocked..?? ya i know even i'm shocked again me writing..ah not again..?? right these are your reactions..?? ok anyways i'm here again with OS..this idea came into my mind while watching a TaaRey vm..and i hope you guys like it..and yeah Sharon and taani both have asthmas but only sharon's asthma is known by simmi , rey and swayam none knows about taani's asthma..
and this is again from d3 track ..
concept :most of you don't know that shivam came in st.louis for " ganpati mahotsav " organised by d3 team..but the some changes are that he was shown as a positive person this time and in mine OS he's a negative role but will be positive in the end..and taani hasn't left she's still there and is GS of the college but TaaRey have not patched up...as taani is not able to trust rey again whole heartedly and TaaRey are heartbroken...and everyone except rey is not dancing..even taani is a dancer..
so here it starts..
all were sitting in canteen...when swayam's phone rang..
swayam: i'll be back guys..
taani: guys aaj sab manage ho gaya nicely does not mean ki hum kal ki preparations granted le..ok..?? we have to work hard..
everyone: ya of course..right..
Vicky comes to taani gives her a side hug holding her shoulder from 1 hand and says..
Vicky: taani..vo tum na bilkul vo ho..
Taani: kya hun..??
Vicky: arre vo..kya kehte hain usse..umm..han vo typical hitler types GS hoti hai na..vo..
Taani s mouth curved a perfect " o " and she hit Vicky on his stomeach with her elbow playfully...
Vicky: haye maar dala..acting as if fainting..
All of them were giggling seeing the new bff bond when swayam came back with a worried face..
Swayam: guys..vo..actually..vo..
Taani: kya baat hai bhai..??
Swayam: taani ek naye college ka naam aaya hai for the event..
Taani: han to isme kya chinta ki baat hai..by the way konsa college..??
Swayam: KR college..
Everyone's smiles faded away..specially taani and sharon's ...
Everyone: what..?????
Taani fell down on the chair behind and her facial expressions showed clear tension and fear..even sharon's face showed the same..
Rey suspectfully asks : or GS kon hai..??
Swayam: vahi..shivam..
Taani closed her eyes to calm down..
Vicky: no way guys i cant tolerate him here..
Nilesh: exactly yaar..not again..
Bharat: uss kamine ki to me..
Sharon: guys shut up..this is a college fest we cant ruin because of that bloody shivam we have to concentrate on work rather than thinking who's coming and who's not..
Taani stood up as she had to control the gang first then she will handle herself..
Taani: Sharon is right guys..we have to focus on work..we have to make this fest successfull and not ruin it just because shivam is coming..
Rey looked at taani and could notice that she was saying it for gang but she herself was damn worried and scared..
Simmi: exactly guys..lets just focus on the fest..
Aashi: but yeh shivam kon types hai..??
Neha: bad guy he is..
Rinni: guys agar usne college vapas join kar liya to..
Everyone : enough rinni stop it..!!
Taani: guys lets move kal bohot kuch dekhna hai..
Everyone: yaa..
Taani , Sharon , rey and swayam were in college for the arrangements of the fest..
Rey and swayam were in the lobby keeping a eye on workers who were making some stalls..while TaaRon were in the locker room changing their clothes for work..
Taani comes out of changing room and sits in the locker room and starts talking to herself enough loud for Sharon to hear as she forgot that Sharon is also there..
Taani: ohh god..ab kya karun shivam ko bhi abhi aana tha jab mere or rey me ye sab chal raha hai..sab ko to keh diya that i can handle it but jab me abhi apne aap ko handle nahi kar paa rahi to shivam ke aane ke baad kese karungi..?? hey krishnaji meri maddad kijiye ki me ye kar sakun..
And starts to cry a lil while Sharon comes out of the locker room and sees taani crying..she was also having the same fear how will she handle it when swayam is also not with her..
Suddenly taani started to choke which increased by every second and pulled out Sharon from her trance diverting her concentration on taani..she went towards her and started patting her back so that choking stops..but it increased more..taani wasn't able to breathe properly..
Now taani got up and ran towards her locker and Sharon followed her to see what's she doing..taani opened her locker and started to throw her things on the ground finding something..
Sharon: taani kya dhoond rahi ho..??
Taani finally found it and inhaled from her pump 2 times..and closed her eyes..sharon was shocked no no rooted to her place..
Sharon's pov..
Taani has ASTHMA..?????????? from when..?? swayam ne to iske bare me kuch nahi bataya...?? but wait a second kya usse iske bare me pata hai..?? ohh god..!! ye kya ho raha hai..??
End of sharon's pov..
Taani turned and found Sharon shocked..taani's face had many sweat drops...
Sharon: taani ye..??
Taani: mujhe asthma hai Sharon..sahi dekha aapne..
Sharon: what..?? but ye kab se..??
Taani: break up ke baad..
Sharon: kya..?? or tumne bataya bhi nahi..
Taani: kya bataun..?? ye koi choti cheez nahi hai Sharon jo sabko batayi jaa sake..
Sharon laughed humourlessly and said : sahi kaha tumne..choti cheez nahi hai and i know that..
Taani: huh..??how do you know..??
Sharon: kyuki i'm going through the same phase...mujhe bhi asthma hai taani..
Taani: kya..??
Sharon: han isiliye i was adamant on not dancing..but hats off to you..you never stopped dancing why..??
Taani: dance mera bhi passion hai Sharon..ye sach hai ki apke jitna acha dance nahi kar sakti but its my passion...
Taani sighed and said lets go to bhai and rey and finish this work kal ke liye bhi tayyar hona hai abhi to..
Sharon: right..
TaaRon went to ReYam and helped them in comleting preparations while having eyelocks and some fights..
Next day..
Everyone was in college doing last moment preparations for the fest..supervising evertything..while Vicky and nilesh were practicing their dialogues for hosting the fest..
Each and everyone was having a walkey talkey in their hands..
Taani: bhai there..??
Swayam: han taani bolo..??
Taani: sab stalls lag gaye na bhai you checked it..??
Swayam: ya taani everything has been supervised by me don't worry..
Taani murmured tension to shivam ke aane ke baad shuru hogi..it was heard by swayam and even rey..
Swayam: oh god..hey bhagwan please sab theek se ho jaaye..
Fest started..vicky came in the centre..
Vicky: hello guys i'm your dost oh sorry i mean your host i hope you all are ready for the mind blowing dance performances by different collges..
Everyone was hooting a yes..
Vicky: ok..so our first college is st.georgia ..please a round of applause for them..
Performance of st.georgia over..
Vicky: so welcome our second college JWB college..
Performance of JWB college over..
Vicky: he saw the next college's name and grinned..said guys so welcome the most awaited performance of KR college..
Shivam and his team came on the stage..d3 team and shivam's team were giving tashan looks to each other..
After the performance of KR college..
Shivam came on stage and said..
Shivam: guys is it fair that jis college ne itna acha event organize kiya uski cultural team hi perform na kare..c'mon we can give them a chance right..??
Everyone was shouting a yes..while d3 team was shocked..
Bharat: abbe iski to..
Aashi: bharat control types kijiye..
Vicky: no way dude hum dance kese kar sakte hain..?? remember our promise not to dance guys..
Rey: guys are you ok vo hume seedhe seedhe challenge kar raha hai and your saying we wont dance not even for our college..??
Simmi: but hum dance kese kar sakte hain..??
Nilesh: guys ab kya kare..??
Shivam: guys the national champions of NDC are scared of dancing huh..?? of course they dint compete to us in NDC varna champions to hum hote..
everyone started laughing..
Sharon: oh god ab kya kare..??
Taani: guys college ka sawal hai kya kare..??
Neha: dance to do or not..??
Swayam: guys hum dance karenge..humne dance sirf meri or rey ki fight ki vajah se choda tha and its solved now so we will dance ..whatsay..?? he put his hand infront..
Everyone looked at eachother and kept their hands on swayams hand...
Taani moving forward..
Taani: you know what lets see who wins..??
Shivam: whispering in her ears..
Shivam: of course darling..
Rey tightened is fists and swayam held his hand gritting his teeth..
Taani looking at shivam lets see..guys c'mon..lets have a face off..
In the face off d3 team won..which was not to the expectation of shivam so he said..
Shivam : ok so you guys won but don't you guys think that we should have a duet by the GS and AGS of the college..?? whatsay people..??
It was again a yes by the crowd...
TaaRey were damn shocked to respond..
Taani's pov..
What..?? duet by me and rey no..!! i'm already controlling myself from being attracted towards him and this shivam ugh i hate him how could he even think about it..?? ab kya karu college ka sawal hai karna to padega..but rey ke sath kese apni feelings ko control karungi..hey krishnaji..
End of taani's pov..
Rey's pov..
What..?? really yess iss shivam ne pehli baar mere matlab ki baat kari hai..yipee taani ke sath duet karna hai or taani nab hi nahi keh sakti college ka sawal hai thankyou taani ke krishnaji..
End of rey's pov..
Rey: so taani lets go..and put his hand forward ..taani gave him her hand giving him tashan looks..
Song starts..( sorry if don't like song explanation with dance..trying it for the first time..)the song is sadka kiya from i hate love story..
They go to change dresses..
Taani's dress..
Kuch khwab dekhe hain..kuch rang soche hain..
Ab maine kal apne tere tere sang soche hai..
Is raah me jab bhi tu sath hoti hai...kisso ke panno si har baat hoti hai..
Roor jo hui meri fida to pal me uthi koi sada to dil se hua jida juda toota me iss tarah..
Sadka kiyaaa yun ishq kaaa..phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..
Sadka kiya yun ishq kaa phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..
Taarey were standing on the opposite corners of the stage..facing each others back..when rey sings actually song plays and rey also sings in low voice..he depicts with his action the first lines turning to taani pointing his finger at her..taani also slowly turns towards rey and they both start walking towards the center doing simple steps..when they come close to each other taani hold rey's hand and bends backwards and slowly comes up..now rey keeps his hand on her cheeks and sings next lines..and taani tilts her head opposite to rey's hand..rey keeps his hand under her chin and lift her head up and taani again tilts her head towards other side..all this while taani closed her eyes now she opens it and rey turns to crowd spreading his hands and taani quickly moves to rey's back keeps her hand on his chest hugging him from behind and rey holds her hands looks back in taani's eyes and were swaying to left and right..now rey turns towards taani and sits on his one knee holding her one hand and looks towards ground depicting phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..
Tune starts..
They both moved in oppostite directions doing hand and leg movements in sync..and giving perfect expressions..
Female..: Tere mudne se suraj mud gaya..teri roshni ke saye me mein dhooop si khili..
Mera aasman bhi chota pad gaya mujhe jab se hain bahon me tere panah mili..
Male: uthi hai teri ada ada ke jhuk nhi gaya mera khuda...to mujhpe hai ye asar hua toota mein iss tarah..
Sadka kiyaa..yun ishq kaa..phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..(2)
They both were again in opposite corners taani slowly turned towards rey pointing him tere mudne se..and in teri roshi line they both moved in center rey behind taani his hands on her belly and taani's one hand on his cheek while closed eyes and swaying left to right..now taani turned and hugged him depicting teri bahon me..now rey lifted her from her waist not breaking the hug and was taking slow cirles while his hands were on taani's back lifting her and put her down in toota mein iss tarah and taani broke the hug and ran towards right corner of the stage..in sadka kiya rey again spread his hands taani ran to rey hugged him from behind and were swaying left to right..
Background : kuch khwab dekhe..
Taani came in front of rey and they did few lifts..
Tune..
Female : Teri khushboo me bheege khat mile teri rang ki syahi me likhe , padhe , sune..
Teri baton ke wo saare silsile meri dil ki kahani se sune , kahe , bune..
Male: Me kar na sakun bayan bayan ke chup si hui meri zubaan ye dil mehman hua hua toota me iss tarah..
Sadka kiyaa..yun ishq kaa phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..(2)
Taani was depicting teri khushboo me bhige khat mile while holding a paper in her hand and acting as padhe , likhe and sune..rey ran to her and stood in front of her ..taani held his hand kept it on her heart sliding her one leg between rey's legs and beding back and rey kept his another hand encircling her waist..slowly taani got up and ran to the corner and rey did some painful steps depicting me kar na sakun bayan...in sadka kiya taani again ran hugged rey from behind and they were swaying..rey again turned sat on one leg holding taani's hand bending his head..
Kuch khwab dekhe hain ...kuch rang soche hain ..Ab maine kal apne tere tere sang soche hai..
Is raah me jab bhi tu sath hoti hai...kisso ke panno si har baat hoti hai..
Roor jo hui meri fida to pal me uthi koi sada to dil se hua jida juda toota me iss tarah..
Sadka kiyaaa yun ishq kaaa..phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..
Sadka kiya yun ishq kaa phir sar jhuka jahan deedar hua..
Taani was going away but rey held her hand and stopped her stood up and went behind her slided his hand from taani's left front shoulder to right and taani moved her head where rey's hands were sliding i.e left to right..and they did some couple steps and lifts very nicely..and ended in a postion when rey is holding taani's waist giving her a dip and are looking in each others eyes intensely..
But the sound of claps brought them back to the reality taani stood up they left each other and taani turned towards croown looking them blankly and ran from there...
Rey also looked at audience and went to the gang they all were looking at him with shocked expression..
Rey: what..?
Vicky: dude you guys were awesome man i never saw such a dance with true expressions and damn good synchronization ..
Nilesh: seriously man hats off..
Everyone was just praising TaaRey..
Shivam came to the stage and said..
Shivam: awesome guys you rocked it..so it is cleares st.louis dance team is far better than KR...smiled and went to his team..
D3 team was shocked hearing this..but Vicky hosted the show further as it was the end everyone went back..
After everyone went..
D3 team was sitting on the stairs..except taani none of them noticed that she wasn't there everyone was too busy relaxing..
Vicky: guys we rocked it yaar..
Neha: right saying babu is..
Swayam: seriously guys back to dance...
Rey: i know dude..feeling so alive..
Sharon: right so now we are back to our passions..
While these discussions were on..shivam dint left he was searching for taani..and finally he found her on the terrace talking to herself while crying..
Taani: ye kya ho gaya..?? what happened to me how can i be so lost in that dance..while dancing i just forgot that rey and i have had a break up...how could i forget that and why..??just then she heard a voice from back..
Voice: because you love him..
Taani turned and found shivam there..
Taani: tum..??
Shivam while moving towards taani : han mein..
Taani: tum yahan kya kar rahe ho..?? how dare you challenge me han..??
Shivam : chill taani..tumse kuch kehna tha..
Taani: par mujhe kuc nahi sunna hai so you better get lost..!!
Shivam: please taani ek akhri baar meri baat sunlo..
Taani: fine bolo..kya hai..??
Shivam: rey ko maaf kardo taani...
Taani: oh to tum yahan rey ki side lene aaye ho..han..??
Shivam: nahi taani aaya to me yahan sirf tum logo ko trap karne ke liye tha , to challenge you guys when i got to know that you all aren't dancing anymore..but tum logon ki team spirit , togetherness ne meri soch badal di..
Taani: what do you mean..??
Shivam: tum rey se or rey tumse bohot pyaar karte ho to why all this i know everything that happened but believe me taani you guys are meant to be together while you were dancing there was real expressions on your faces anyone could say you guys loved each other..please forgive rey taani you wont get anyone better than him..trust me..and he took steps backwards and went away..leaving taani..
Taani: ye shivam ki baat maanu ya nahi..?? ye sach mujhe rey se acha insaan nahi milega par kya me unpe phir trust kar paungi..??? ye janne ka sirf ek way hai..she closed her eyes kept her hand on her heart..and after a min opened her eyes and ran very fast..
Taani was running and she collided with a hard chest..
Here rey went to search taani and was in corridor when he collided with taani and held her from waist to prevent her from falling..
Taani closed her eyes thinking she'll be soon on ground when she felt a similar touch..and opened her eyes and TaaRey were caught in a long lasting eyelock..
Taani: ab mujhe chodengey ya nahi..?
Rey: oh sorry and he made her stand..but taani's lips curved in a " o" ..
Taani: chod diya..???
Rey: huh..?? kya..? tumhi ne to kaha chod do..
Taani:mene kaha means you will leave me..??
Rey: kya bol rahi ho..??
Taani: kuch nahi chodo..!!
Rey: sorry taani vo actually college and shivam ki vajah se dance karna pada..
Taani: what..?? apne sirf isiliye dance kara..??
Rey: han..
Taani: matlab you dint wanted to dance with me..??
Rey: nahi matlab karna chahta tha but with your permission..
Taani: agar me kahoon ki mujhe abhi dance karna hai..??
Rey: mere sath..??
Taani: nahi puppy ke sath..!! idiot..!! and turned around to leave rey held her hand and pulled her towards him and hugged her tightly and whispered i love you in her ears..taani smiled widely and said i love you too..you know when i closed my eyes i only saw your face..i love you rey..
Rey: i love you too sweetheart..and slightly kissed her ears..and they closed their eyes feeling wach other after so long..!!
So here i end..how's it guys..?? i hope you like it..
And please i know dance part was full on BAKWAS , CRAP , BLOODY HELL.. but forgive me first try hai..sorry..!!
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Mrs.Malik..
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