Arhi SS: The Courtship of two doctors: Pt2 on Pg9 (24th Nov)

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The Courtship of two doctors.


Okay this story of mine is specially dedicated to Mahima Di, its her birthday today and she had asked me to write something where Arnav and Khushi are doctors, after almost 3 months of thinking, I could finally come up with something.šŸ˜›

This story is mine, yes, but I have taken the basic story line from a book I have never read. The name of the book is "The courtship of 2 doctors." I have read a synopsis of the book and tried to make it a little different from what the book has.

This is something totally different. A love story set in the 1930's. I am so excited about it because in today's world, a kiss and a hug is so normal, saying "I love you", I think we say it to every second person, making the real essence of it finish completely while in that time, all of this were huge things, making my work double, making me have to become more aware of what I am writing.


I have planned on making this a 2 or 3 part story as there are alot of things I want to write and I dont want it to look abrupt. Please bear with me and I promise no sad ending.😊

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Part 1

January 1930.

She walked down the lobby leading to her graduation hall. Wearing a red and white stripped gown which reached to her ankle, she looked nothing less than a princess. Her hair was finely done into a Chignon.

She walked into the graduation hall and the only thought that crossed her mind was the importance this place held for her. This was that place where she had lived the most important chunk of her life. This was that place which had paved the way to her future. A future she had always dreamed of was finally coming to life.

Today, she had finally become Dr. Khushi Gupta. She had finally gotten the identity she had worked for.

Walking into the hall, she looked around at the people who had played a very important role in making her what she was today. Her educators, her friends and most importantly, that one person who had been her pillar of strength through thick and thin.

She looked at him standing with a group of friends who were laughing at something he said, maybe a joke. Her best friend. She has known him since their diaper days.

They were both from rich families, their parents being extremely good friends since their college days. They were bound to know each other. They had grown up together, going to the same school, sharing the same likes and dislikes and having the same goal in life, they had gelled off pretty well.

They knew each other inside out. There was nothing in this world that they have ever hidden from each other.

Their friendship, however, was not taken very well by the society. A boy and a girl in today's world could not be just friends. It was nothing less than a crime in the eyes of the people.

However, they had been blind towards the dirty stares they received everytime they would walk down on the road. They knew what they shared and believed that it was only for them to know how much they meant to each other.

They didn't find it important to justify themselves because they knew that what they did and shared was very pure and by explaining themselves, they would only fall in their own eyes.

Now, they were only looking forward to know where their placements were. They had kept their fingers crossed, hoping for it to be together. They didn't want to be separated at any cost.

It was finally time for them to know about their placements. She felt her heart suddenly beat faster in anticipation. She was feeling excited but at the same time she was nervous. What if they don't get a job in the same place? What if they would have to change cities? How would they meet then?

Everyone was asked to take their seats and wait for the Dean to announce about their futures.

2 minutes after she had taken a seat, she felt a hand on her hand. She looked up to see the greek demi god looking at her with soft expressions. He was dressed up in a black suit with a white shirt and a bow tie. He had used a lot of cream to set his hair.

He knew she had been extremely jittery all week about their work place. She hated the thought of being separated from her best friend.

"Khushi, calm down. Its going to be okay." He said in an extremely soothing voice.

"I hope so too, Arnav. You're my only friend, I don't want to be separated from you." she replied back with moist eyes.

"We will never be separated. No one can do that." He calmed her just as they heard the Dean speak.

"A very warm welcome to all the students. It has been a wonderful journey having all of you with us these last few years. Today, I have come here to tell you all about your placements so without further delay, let me begin."

After a few names, came the name the two best friends had been waiting for. It was their chance.

"Now, Dr. Khushi Gupta has been allotted to Massachusetts General Hospital, Boston and Dr. Arnav Singh Raizada has been allotted to Johns Hopkins Hospital, Baltimore."

Everyone clapped, happy with what they had gotten and how they had succeeded.

But in between all this banter was one person who sat still, numb. This is exactly what she feared. She, for the first time in her life was being moved away from her best friend. Her only friend, her strength, her weakness, her lover.

Ofcourse she loved him. He was her first and last love. He was the person she has loved since the day she got to know what love meant. He was her prince in the shining armor. He was the king of her heart, the face she always saw when she closed her eyes, the person she always thought about while reading her romantic novels.

She didn't know how things would work out for them anymore, she wasn't sure if he would remember her after they parted ways.

A small drop of tear left her eye just as she felt a warm hand moving on her cheek.


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Part 1: Above

Part 2: Pg 9


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MahimaMV thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Atlast My doctor Os is here and thank u so much for dedicating this to me Kiddo...

I actually dreamed to become a doc, bt it didn't happen and i always love doc stories... So i requested u to write a story on Arshi where they will be doctors

Wat shud I say ANNUUU!!!!!!
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U completely Nailed it
Wat u said is absolutely right... In early days small small gestures were having a deep meaning...
I dont say that today it doesn't exist at all... bt this is just the generation which are making everything in a cool way and they fail to understand this special feeling...
Small gestures always makes a person to be the happiest man on this earth...

I am in love with this beautiful concept dear...



Coming to the story...

Arshi are childhood friends[I loved this ā¤ļøā¤ļø

I loved the way u described their friendship and Khushi's POV

Poor Khuhsi, her nightmare became true... Nw they are gng to get separated bt this is gng to bring a twist in their friendship which leads to love, I thinkšŸ˜›

I loved it so so so so so so so much Kiddooo


I wish, this wud have been a SS or FF

I am so proud to be ur reader Kiddooo



Thank u so much for writing this story



Edited by MahimaMV - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Haww i forgot i res'd it šŸ˜†
Edited by Aasmaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Unres~~~~~~

Ahhh... Childhood friends love sort!! I am already in for it.

The fact that story goes back to the times of 1930 makes it even more stimulating and exciting. She loves him and though up till now it isn't clear he reciprocates it or not, Arnav still sounds such a sweetheart. Wiping away her tears and holding her hand.

Aspirations and dreams are something we wish and wish for them to happen, but when they finally do happen, we curl back from changes it will bring along. I see Khushi going through the same. She wants to live what she has achieved but at the same time doesn't want to lose Arnav. As much as it is sad, it is now seems the truth of her life.

Let's see how they overcome the distance generated by destiny. I am so looking forward to read this !

And of course, you skills have improved and this seems really a very awesome piece from you😊

Keep it upšŸ‘šŸ¼

Edited by camlin - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Finally intezaar khtam hua..

Bang on start..

Kushi loves arnav..


But wat bout arnav???


Proud of u bachha,,


loved it..


Continue soon
Edited by HUMII10592 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ananya šŸ¤—

baby ... that was awesome ... freaking awesome !! ā¤ļø

I know what u are saying ... in the olden days every simple gesture held a meaning !! 😊 those days are gone now and recreating it is quite a task !!

am loving the start of this ... the fear of separation ... distance makes u realise how much a person means to u !!

cant wait to read more baby .. update soon !!
Edited by Jyo.Arshi.IPK - 11 years ago
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Loved d start
can't wait to read more 😊
pls update soon 😊
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Hi everyone. I had planned on giving the os today itself but had gone away on a small holiday. Right now I am in the car, on my way back home. My laptop is on my lap with the word document of the story open, waiting for me. I am feeling very ill and my head isn't working so I am not being able to write.
I will give the story tomorrow. I promise.
Please bear with me. I'm sorry for the delay.

Thank you and I love you all.😳
Edited by cherrybloom1 - 11 years ago
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Get well soon dear...
Take your time...
We are waiting
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Any chances of updating it???

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