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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: anushruthi

Awesome SS

a lovely beginning
I m loving it ...
thanks for PM
Cont soon


thank you so much
i am glad that you liked it
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey.. Aneesha..
I am so so so so... happy...
A new story from you...
Manyata is a stubborn girl...
I pity her... that her father is so rude towards her as a daughter...
J seems really nice...
Uday made Manyata fall...
And Aakash saved her...
Not this indicates ki yaha par bhi it would be a love triangle...
Manyata introduced J as the Princess...
When in real its she who is the princess..
And Jaggat introduced himself as the prince...
When in real its Uday who is the real prince...
This story is really interesting...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM..
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: nityatandon

Hey.. Aneesha..

I am so so so so... happy...
A new story from you...
Manyata is a stubborn girl...
I pity her... that her father is so rude towards her as a daughter...
J seems really nice...
Uday made Manyata fall...
And Aakash saved her...
Not this indicates ki yaha par bhi it would be a love triangle...
Manyata introduced J as the Princess...
When in real its she who is the princess..
And Jaggat introduced himself as the prince...
When in real its Uday who is the real prince...
This story is really interesting...
Update soon...
And thanx for the PM..


hey
i m glad that you are so happy
but she too gives it to her father
veer made her fall
yes it is a love triangle
yes it will be a big confusion later
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: rockstar4eva55

Awesome as always! :)) :*


thank you dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#26

*****Chapter 2*****

The bright sun light filled the entire campus as they all strolled round the courtyard of the college. Jia and Jaggat were lost into each other presence, Veer was too busy in checking all the butterflies passing by him. Manya looked around the campus fascinated as she took notice of each detail, akash was too lost into her, her face, her smile, her nose, akash seems to be in a complete different world. A sharp bell was heard that indicated that it was time for their first lecture. Jaggat turned back and told them

I am going to leave Jia till her class and akash will take you to your class manya as he too is from the same class

She nodded in a yes by now she had known their name as she watched them all dispersed and veer said to akash

bro don't forget today sharp at 5 we have an audition for the singer

ok I will reach by five btw when our next concert is

I guess by the end of this week

This conversation grabbed manya attraction as without thinking much she popped in with her view

what concert? Are you all in some kind of band or what?

yes we have our own group Angel Eyes, every year we participate in the inter college fest and win but this year a new rule is applied that we need a female singer too so we have the audience for that

woa that is so cool can I take part too?

see baby girl we are professional here so we have no time to entertain any beginner ok so STAY AWAY

Saying this he bide akash bye and went away humming a tune to himself, manya boiled in anger and that could be visible by akash whole way to their class manyata kept throwing cruse at veer, as they sat together akash said to her

it is ok today in auditorium we have to audition give the audition and if you are good you will be chosen

She nodded her head and said with her nose going red with anger

but how can he say that to me why is he so rude? God know what he thinks of himself? How dare he talk to me in that way?

Akash gave a small laugh and said to her

so much of anger ... does not mind him. He is actually very good it's just a mask of coldness he wear once you get close to him, he will prove to be a very good person trust me

I would never go close to a jerk like him

Before they could extend their conversation, the professor eyes were glued on them as they looked back into their book. As the Prof Rudra gave them dozes of the nash equilibrium. The lunch bell seemed to be a perfect savior from the three hour lectures; she headed out with akash as all of them met in the canteen. Jia, Jaggat and Veer was already present as they joined them and Jia asked

how was your first class manya?

it was such a bore jiji

Before she could complete veer snapped a sharp insulting reply to her

obviously after all engineering is not for dumb heads

She looked at him munching his food, as her eyes went red with anger, she was ready to outburst at him any time but stopped by akash word

No veer it was really hard to understand even I was struggling a bit today

Manya was indeed a bit clam by his support as she went back to her lunch, as Veer announced

guys make a note to keep you free tomorrow as I am keeping a secret party for our beautiful, sweet, intelligent Jia and her sister

A smile was plastered to her face as except for manya he said so many things for jia and when it came to her just simply her sister. Since the very beginning he had been so harsh to him even during that time it was him making her fall. She just wanted to chop off his head but the she took out the anger on him he took out on her chicken fry. Akash chuckled at her behavior as for veer he enjoyed annoying her. He loved the angry affect he was having on her; she was like a toy for him whom he loved to play now. Time flew as they went back to their classes, after all their lecture as manya and jia was making their way to the car, manya stopped and said

jiji you are going I will come later

why manya? Where are you going?

I am going to give my audition for angel eyes

You mean jaggat group

yup ok bye take care

Saying this jia watched her vanishing through the crowd, she had no time to stop her as being dejected she had to wait till manya return. Here manya waited too but for her turn, the place was over crowded as many of them had just come to see their heart throb Veer. Finally after a long line she got her chance, as she entered the room she saw three different expression, jaggat was shocked , akash had a supporting smile while Veer rolled his eyes in irritation but she knew it was the only way she could fill her dreams. This was her last chance so she said

can I start

Jaggat nodded his head in a yes and smiled. She opened her mouth to sing but something spoiled her throat went dry; she started to shiver everything around her turned dark she felt herself sinking. As all of their faces watched her curiously. The first one to break the silence was Veer as he replied scornfully

I told you before also that we do not have time to entertain any beginner. What will you sing in the concert when you cannot even sing in front of us? We were bearing you just because of your sister. But now you lost that one chance go away that what I can say you

veer wait she is trying

but she is such a loser

Everything after that turned deaf to her ear, the last word rang in her ears, her dad often titled her by the same name, she was not ready to quit she was here to prove them wrong and win, as she did not care about them and started to sing. Her voice had a unknown sorrow that touched their hearts, the room had pin drop silence and even veer eyes were glued on her.


Ghunghat Mein Gori Kyun Jale...
Koyi Jaane Na Guiya Ghunghat Mein Gori Kyun Jale
Do Pag Bhi Kaise Woh Chale Haay Do Pag Bhi Kaise Woh Chale
Aa.Bedi Padi Hai Baiyaan, Ghunghat Mein Gori Kyun Jale
Koyi Jaane Na...

Mann Ki Batiya Mann Mein Liye Hai
Ghut Ghutake Yuun Gori Jiyein Hai...
Bolana Chaahe Bol Na Paaye, Bebas Nir Bahaaye
O Bebas Nir Bahaaye
Koyi Jaane Na...

Rito Ke Yeh Bojh Puraane Kab Tak Hai Gori Ko Uthaane...
Badalega Kab Isaka Jivan Kab Tutenge Bandhan
Yeh Kab Tutenge Bandhan
Koyi Jaane Na...

The entire time while singing she had an unknown sorrow in her eyes. As she said the last word her lump went dry and even one more word would bring tear to her eyes as she looked at them. The trio took five minutes to come away from the trance of the song as jaggat stood up and clapped

awesome manya I mean you were just so good! You have a beautiful voice then why were you so scared? From my side you are a part of our group

and I too want you to be with us and take part for the concert I am sure we will win if you are with us manyata

She looked at veer but instead of saying anything he just stormed out of the room angrily and before going. He said without even turning back

I will not tolerate it if she does not come for practice on time

She jumped out of excitement and after biding them all bye ran out of the room, Veer watched her as a smile plastered into his face and commented to him

she is so immature but how come her song sound so mature, why did it seem that she has so much pain in her eyes?

Thinking of all that to himself he made his way humming to himself with his hands in his jeans pocket.



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Edited by annabh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#27
He he.. 😆

Both Manveer made their attendants Prince and Princess... 😉

Nice start 👏

Continue..👍🏼
Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#28

*EDITED*

First of all.. Thank you Anni for updating sooo fast 😃

Lovely update, I loved many things of the chappy, very entertaining teen drama it is...


You are going goood 👏


Loved every character, I should have told these after reading the first chappy only but I comment it from my office so I could not give you a long comment then 😔

I will not tolerate it if she does not come for practice on time

ufff this dialogue took my heart away, only UV can have this attitude...oh Udayveer My jaan 😳
Edited by panchaali - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#29
Hi anii...
Hw ws u??
Awesum update anii...
manveer nok jok ws nice...
Uday angree on manyata bt in her heart lit concert about her presence feeling n sadness...
Uday like her sound, song bt didnt show her...
akash hav sme feeling toword manyata...
Thanks fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#30
hey!
awesome update, loved it
please do update next chappy soon
& thanks for the pm

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