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Few moree minutes... n tum.. muh band...😡



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okay..mera muh band..
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#90

SwaRon version

That was a love story of 1980, after that incident Sharon could not survive for much time maybe to fulfill Swayam's last words, "So what if not in this one, In the next life we'll be together."

2013

" It's Beautiful" was the word the word all I could say after seeing the palace [Pic], I was here in Daman for the first time for my best buddy Karan as it was the most memorable moment for him, His Wedding to his love Perneet and she was really pretty.

"Welcome brother, I'd thought you won't be able to make it" Karan said.

"Hmm, You know Swayam he's waiting for your arrival only agar tum nahi aate to might be he won't even marry." Perneet joined. We walked inside the palace, it was their ancestral palace "Swayam, You can go and change, We'll see you at night for the function. Ajju(helper) will take you to your room" Janvi di[pic] said, Karan's elder sister.

I walked behind Ajju through the palace, a faint sound of ghungroo's was coming as if someone was dancing. Leaving ajju ahead I followed the sound of ghungroo's which took me to a room, the door was slightly open. I went inside, a girl dressed in perfect Kathak attire[look] was dancing, it would not be wrong to say she was dancing with the rhythm.

I smiled seeing her dance, she stood with her head bent in front of the mirror hugging herself. Swinging her hands back, she lifted her head, slightly moving her left leg back. I moved the the middle of the room, she did some kathak mudras taking flawless chakra's around me.

I tried to see her face, but she herself landed in my arms due to imbalance. Her face was covered with her hair, I moved my hand and removed her hair from her face. She was really beautiful, my eyes were glued on her's I don't know why her twinkling said I've seen her before knowing the fact I haven't met her before.

I lifted her up and took her in my arms, though she was a stranger but I felt like doing it. She also didn't protest, I held her as close as I could. "Swayam, Where are you?" some one called I guess Janvi di, before I could move out Janvi di entered, "Oh tum yahan ho, I and Ajju were searching for you only"

"Wo.. di I was lost. Your palace is so large, I was walking behind Ajju and..."

"Its ok... by d way sorry for not introducing you both, She's Sharon our youngest sibling and Sharon He's Swayam."

"Hii" I forwarded my hand, she shook her hand with mine with a nervous smile. Ajju took me to my room, he placed the suitcase near the bed, "Sir you get ready soon, ceremony will begin by eight." I went to washroom and washed my face.

When I returned from the washroom, I lifted up my suitcase to change the clothes. It was so light as if it's empty, I opened it and it was really empty, "Where's my stuff?" I looked around, my accessories were placed on the table infront of the mirror, clothes were arranged in almira and shoes in shoe rack.

"Can I come In?" Sharon stood at the door with the almond milk, "Yup" She had changed from that kathak attire in to a saree[pic]. "You did that?" I asked raising my eyebrow, "Sorry! I thought of helping, I'll arrange them again the way you want."

"No... dats fine"

"Wo.. I.." she stammered, may be wanting to say something "Come on.. Speak up" I said. "ah I wanted to say that what you did in the dance room, I didn't like it. You're my brother's best friend not mine so I guess we should maintain some distance"

In Mumbai it was common to hug a girl, maybe here it was little different so I thought of teasing her. I Stood behind her and spoke near her left ear, "As if you didn't hug me back?" Her eyes shot up with nose red in anger. I laughed at her condition, sliding my fingers on her hand. She handed me the glass "Get ready soon, we'll be waiting for you" she said and left letting out some curses.

________________

We all were were inner porch for the family get together ceremony, I stood with Janvi di and that stupid Swayam[pic] was with Perneet bhabi and Bhai giggling. No one has ever dared to tease me and that stupid was flirting with me and making fun of me at the same time, I had to teach him a lesson.

An idea struck my head, "Sharon what's going on in your head?" I asked, "Nothing much, a small revenge. He dared to tease me Now I'll show him Sharon's Diva effect" He winked at me and I gave a fake smile, "Sharon. No" di said. "When you know I'm not gonna listen di den why are you trying di, I'll see you in 10 minutes"

He sat on a bench with bhabi and Maa, I quietly went behind him and tied a chain of crackers behind him. I lit the crackers with a matchstick and ran, he jumped around as the crackers began to burn, having a great time I stood in a corner. He ran here and there.

"What's happening here? Who did that" My dad asked, He glared at me "Nothing Uncle, I guess someone my mistake did this"

Dad saw his hand, "Son, go to your room. I'll send someone for first aid." His hand got burned, and he knew I did this but why didn't he take my name I wondered. "Sharon, what you did wasn't funny at all, he got hurt." Di said, "Haan di, yeh kuch zada hi ho gaya"

I went to his room, he was blowing air on his hand. "Finally you are aware of the consequences of taking the panga with me." I said, but he was still giving his idiotic smile. "Why are you giving that look, if you think I'm here to say sorry den forget it. Im here just because dad told me to get this first aid box"

I kept the box on the table, "Apply the ointment" He took the medicine and tried to open with his mouth but wasn't able to, "Can you help me please?"

"Tumse se nahi hoga na, Yeh bhi mujhe hi karna padega"

I took his hand to apply ointment, "Is it hurting?" I was sure it was but still asked, "Haan... bahut zaada" I tied the bandage, "So next time before opening your mouth think twice, aisa maza main dubara bhi chakha sakti hoon tumhe."

"Oh really, Den I'll go out and tell your dad ki unke ghar main unki beti unke mehmaan ke saath kaisa behave kar rahi hai. I should do this infact I'll do this" I pressed his hand tight while tying bandage, "Aaah its hurting, What are you doing?" He held my hand, "I've tied the bandage, Now leave my hand." He gave his stupid smile, "I said leave my hand"

He loosened his hold on my hand, "OMG.. I held your hand and I myself wasn't aware strange right.." I slapped lightly on his hand, "Don't act over smart" and moved out of his room. Whole night I thought I was rude to him, firstly I burned his hand then didn't even apologize, he at least deserves am sorry for me. I thought of going to his room and saying sorry in the morning.

In the morning I[pic] saw Janvi di coming out of his room, "Good morning dee, Swayam Kahaan hai?" Di told he was sleeping, "Di sleeping at this time?"

"He must me tired after the long journey simple, now don't disturb him"

"Ok di..." she went to her work and I went to his room, where he was in deep sleep snoring like a wild animal, "Aye, hello.. utho" I tapped his finger but he didn't got up. He turned in his sleep and throwing the blanket away and I saw he was sleeping in only his shorts. I closed my eyes, "Ah Kya hai yeh?"

I took off my sandal, and kept it near his nose, "Aye utho.. will you sleep whole year. Nahin utha, now only one thing can wake him up" I took the glass of water and threw it on his face, "Its raining.. Its raining.. baarish" he jumped on his bed, "Tum.. What the hell are you doing here and yeh kya tarika hai? This is my room."

"Hello.. bhai invited you for his wedding and tum to kabza kar ke baith gye. Listen you are a guest so behave like one, This is my house.. main kahin bhi aah sakti hoon aur kisi ko bhaaga bhi sakte hoon.. got it." He covered himself with the blanket, "Oye.. and jab mann kiya kisi sote hue ko aise nehla bhi sakte hain. very nyc"

"Why not.. if a person is sleeping like a wild animal, half naked. This not Mumbai... but how can you understand Wild animal."

"Chup.. bus bilkul chup ab" He got down from his bed, "Im not saying anything to kuch bhi boli chali jaa rahi hai. What do you think of yourself this room is given to me... so its my wish how I want to live here" He lifted up his arms, and his blanket fell on the floor, I closed my eyes.

He lifted up the blanket, "Sorry, And you badtameez... kisi ke bhi room mai yunhi ghus aati ho? Mannerless" My jaw dropped, "Manner less"

"Yup"

"I'm manner less"

"Yup"

"And you sleeping half naked that's alright? I was here to say sorry for yesterday night, but you dont deserve my apololgy." I pushed him aside,"Hey listen, atleast say for what you here.. maafi to maang lo" He pulled me back with my wrist and we both fell on his bed, "Leave me" I said.

"Noop! Pehle say sorry" he gave his condition to leave me, "I'll Not." He pinned my hair behind my ears, "So you'll not say sorry" I moved my eyes in negation, He slid his hand on my waist. I gasped, His breath moved down from my lips to my nape making a contact with with the skin.

His lips lingered on my skin on nape, nuzzling on it. "Sharon.. " my eyes were tightly shut when Di called. "Di is calling me." He move aside, I ran out of his room. When I reached the door, I turned "Main sorry nahi bolungi."


KriYaansh Version


That was a love story of 1980, after that incident Kria could not survive for much time maybe to fulfill Rey's last words, "So what if not in this one, In the next life we'll be together."

2013

" It's Beautiful" was the word the word all I could say after seeing the palace [Pic], I was here in Daman for the first time for my best buddy Karan as it was the most memorable moment for him, His Wedding to his love Perneet and she was really pretty.

"Welcome brother, I'd thought you won't be able to make it" Karan said.

"Hmm, You know Reyaansh he's waiting for your arrival only agar tum nahi aate to might be he won't even marry." Perneet joined. We walked inside the palace, it was their ancestral palace "Reyaansh, You can go and change, We'll see you at night for the function. Ajju(helper) will take you to your room" Janvi di[pic] said, Karan's elder sister.

I walked behind Ajju through the palace, a faint sound of ghungroo's was coming as if someone was dancing. Leaving ajju ahead I followed the sound of ghungroo's which took me to a room, the door was slightly open. I went inside, a girl dressed in perfect Kathak attire[look] was dancing, it would not be wrong to say she was dancing with the rhythm.

I smiled seeing her dance, she stood with her head bent in front of the mirror hugging herself. Swinging her hands back, she lifted her head, slightly moving her left leg back. I moved the the middle of the room, she did some kathak mudras taking flawless chakra's around me.

I tried to see her face, but she herself landed in my arms due to imbalance. Her face was covered with her hair, I moved my hand and removed her hair from her face. She was really beautiful, my eyes were glued on her's I don't know why her twinkling said I've seen her before knowing the fact I haven't met her before.

I lifted her up and took her in my arms, though she was a stranger but I felt like doing it. She also didn't protest, I held her as close as I could. "Reyaansh, Where are you?" some one called I guess Janvi di, before I ould move out Janvi di entered, "Oh tum yahan ho, I and Ajju were searching for you only"

"Wo.. di I was lost. Your palace is so large, I was walking behind Ajju and..."

"Its ok... by d way sorry for not introducing you both, She's Kria our youngest sibling and Kria He's Reyaansh."

"Hii" I forwarded my hand, she shook her hand with mine with a nervous smile. Ajju took me to my room, he placed the suitcase near the bed, "Sir you get ready soon, ceremony will begin by eight." I went to washroom and washed my face.

When I returned from the washroom, I lifted up my suitcase to change the clothes. It was so light as if it's empty, I opened it and it was really empty, "Where's my stuff?" I looked around, my accessories were placed on the table infront of the mirror, clothes were arranged in almira and shoes in shoe rack.

"Can I come In?" Kria stood at the door with the almond milk, "Yup" She had changed from that kathak attire in to a saree[pic]. "You did that?" I asked raising my eyebrow, "Sorry! I thought of helping, I'll arrange them again the way you want."

"No... dats fine"

"Wo.. I.." she stammered, may be wanting to say something "Come on.. Speak up" I said. "ah I wanted to say that what you did in the dance room, I didn't like it. You're my brother's best friend not mine so I guess we should maintain some distance"

In Mumbai it was common to hug a girl, maybe here it was little different so I thought of teasing her. I Stood behind her and spoke near her left ear, "As if you didn't hug me back?" Her eyes shot up with nose red in anger. I laughed at her condition, sliding my fingers on her hand. She handed me the glass "Get ready soon, we'll be waiting for you" she said and left letting out some curses.

________________

We all were were inner porch for the family get together ceremony, I stood with Janvi di and that stupid Reyaansh[pic] was with Perneet bhabi and Bhai giggling. No one has ever dared to tease me and that stupid was flirting with me and making fun of me at the same time, I had to teach him a lesson.

An idea struck my head, "Kria what's going on in your head?" I asked, "Nothing much, a small revenge. He dared to tease me Now I'll show him Kria's K effect" He winked at me and I gave a fake smile, "Kria.. No" di said. "When you know I'm not gonna listen di den why are you trying di, I'll see you in 10 minutes"

He sat on a bench with bhabi and Maa, I quietly went behind him and tied a chain of crackers behind him. I lit the crackers with a matchstick and ran, he jumped around as the crackers began to burn, having a great time I stood in a corner. He ran here and there.

"What's happening here? Who did that" My dad asked, He glared at me "Nothing Uncle, I guess someone my mistake did this"

Dad saw his hand, "Son, go to your room. I'll send someone for first aid." His hand got burned, and he knew I did this but why didn't he take my name I wondered. "Kria, what you did wasn't funny at all, he got hurt." Di said, "Haan di, yeh kuch zada hi ho gaya"

I went to his room, he was blowing air on his hand. "Finally you are aware of the consequences of taking the panga with me." I said, but he was still giving his idiotic smile. "Why are you giving that look, if you think I'm here to say sorry den forget it. Im here just because dad told me to get this first aid box"

I kept the box on the table, "Apply the ointment" He took the medicine and tried to open with his mouth but wasn't able to, "Can you help me please?"

"Tumse se nahi hoga na, Yeh bhi mujhe hi karna padega"

I took his hand to apply ointment, "Is it hurting?" I was sure it was but still asked, "Haan... bahut zaada" I tied the bandage, "So next time before opening your mouth think twice, aisa maza main dubara bhi chakha sakti hoon tumhe."

"Oh really, Den I'll go out and tell your dad ki unke ghar main unki beti unke mehmaan ke saath kaisa behave kar rahi hai. I should do this infact I'll do this" I pressed his hand tight while tying bandage, "Aaah its hurting, What are you doing?" He held my hand, "I've tied the bandage, Now leave my hand." He gave his stupid smile, "I said leave my hand"

He loosened his hold on my hand, "OMG.. I held your hand and I myself wasn't aware strange right.." I slapped lightly on his hand, "Don't act oversmart' and moved out of his room. Whole night I thought I was rude to him, firstly I burned his hand then didn't even apologize, he at least deserves a sorry form me. I thought of going to his room and saying sorry in the morning.

In the morning I[pic] saw Janvi di coming out of his room, "Good morning dee, Reyaansh Kahaan hai?" Di told he was sleeping, "Di sleeping at this time?"

"He must me tired after the long journey simple, now don't distub him"

"Ok di..." she went to her work and I went to his room, where he was in deep sleep snoring like a wild animal, "Aye, hello.. utho" I tapped his finger but he didn't got up. He turned in his sleep and throwing the blanket away and I saw he was sleeping in only his shorts. I closed my eyes, "Ah Kya hai yeh?"

I took off my sandal, and kept it near his nose, "Aye utho.. will you sleep whole year. Nahin utha, now only one thing can wake him up" I took the glass of water and threw it on his face, "Its raining.. Its raining.. baarish" he jumped on his bed, "Tum.. What the hell are you doing here and yeh kya tarika hai? This is my room."

"Hello.. bhai invited you for his marrige and tum to kabza kar ke baith gye. Listen you are a guest so behave like one, This is my house.. main kahin bhi aah sakti hoon aur kisi ko bhaaga bhi sakte hoon.. got it." He covered himself with the blanket, "Oye.. and jab mann kiya kisi sote hue ko aise nehla bhi sakte hain. very nyc"

"Why not.. if a person is sleeping like a wild animal, half naked. This not Mumbai... but how can you understand Wild animal."

"Chup.. bus bilkul chup ab" He got down from his bed, "Im not saying anything to kuch bhi boli chali jaa rahi hai. What do you think of yourself this room is given to me... so its my wish how I want to live here" He lifted up his arms, and his blanket fell on the floor, I closed my eyes.

He lifted up the blanket, "Sorry, And you badtameez... kisi ke bhi room mai yunhi ghus aati ho? Mannerless" My jaw dropped, "Manner less"

"Yup"

"I'm manner less"

"Yup"

"And you sleeping half naked that's alright? I was here to say sorry for yesterday night, but you dont deserve my apololgy." I pushed him aside,"Hey listen, atleast say for what you here.. maafi to maang lo" He pulled me back with my wrist and we both fell on his bed, "Leave me" I said.

"Noop! Pehle say sorry" he gave his condition to leave me, "I'll Not." He pinned my hair behind my ears, "So you'll not say sorry" I moved my eyes in negation, He slid his hand on my waist. I gasped, His breath moved down from my lips to my nape making a contact with with the skin.

His lips lingered on my skin on nape, nuzzling on it. "Kria.. " my eyes were tightly shut when di called. "Di is calling me." He move aside, I ran out of his room. When I reached the door, I turned "Main sorry nahi bolungi."


On a req... im continuing it...Sooo Hww wass the update...do tell by ur lykes n comments...


Edited by Dewdrops.ShaKun - 11 years ago

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