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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hey guys first of all accept my apologies, I've been busy last week so couldn't update the story. This update is also quite short,😕 please spare me. 😆 I would like to share you that this FF was selected as the '' FF of the week'' by the Nautanki Times # 63 thread 😳

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/madhubala-ek-ishq-ek-junoon/3755911/nautanki-times-63-madhubala-the-rising-star

Thanks a lot for you all 🤗 Thanks for the nice feed backs 😃 Hope you enjoy reading this story 😳


INSEPARABLE HEARTS

CHAPTER 2

The school was over. Madhu & Rishabh were waiting for their drivers to come. Since both of their fathers were busy, drivers accompanied them to their homes. Madhu was sitting on a bench nearby, lost in her thoughts. Her cheerful mood has gone. Rishabh noticed her mood change, he was confused about his best friend's behavior. 'Maddy! What's wrong with you?'' 'Nothing..'' Madhu answered, not even looking at him. 'Don't lie men! What's bothering you? Tell me!'' Rishabh patted her back. 'Hmm.. Mommy. I miss her.'' It was quite sensitive. Rishabh could feel her, as both of them were suffering from the same problem, their moms. Rishabh's mom Radha, died right after she gave birth to the new born baby Rishabh, due to pregnancy complications. After Radha's death, Rishabh's dad Mohan was there for him , playing the both roles of mother & father. He was asked to get married once again on behalf of the baby, by his close relatives & friends but he refused & took care of his son as a protective father. He didn't let Rishabh to feel the absence of his mom.

'Maddy! I understand your feeling. I feel the same. ' ' What are we gonna do for mother's day Rishu?'' 'Others are making cards & preparing to celebrate it!'' Madhu looked down. 'uh.. ' Rishabh didn't know what to say, even he missed his mom so much but Madhu was in a different situation. Specially being a young teenage girl, she really missed her mom. 'Maddy, uh.. isn't it the time to ask again about your mom?'' 'Hmm.. yeah but how Rishu? I can't make my dad go through the pain again. I have told you nah earlier, when every time I asks about her he goes blank.'' 'I guess something serious has happened between them in the past. I didn't want to ask further as he told me that I was too small to understand them. But now, Rishu! I want to know what happened to my mom!''

Rishabh wiped her tears. Madhu was almost crying. ''Hey Maddy! Stop crying! please. Don't worry I'm with you! we will sort out the problem soon.'' ''& Miss. Madhubala Malik! You look so ugly when you are crying!'' Rishabh teased her. ''Shut up!'' Rishabh could bring a smile to her face. He consoled her. Madhu decided to ask about her mom again from her dad.

It was late night , Madhu was lost in her thoughts. She was near the window, staring at the night sky. 'Maa please come! I'm missing you. I missed you every day, for the past sixteen years, but today I really really felt the absence of you. Do you know how much I missed you when other classmates started planning nice surprises for their moms? I too want surprise you & be with you all day long on mothers' day! Please come to me from where ever you are staying! Don't you miss me?'' She kept staring at the moon. Tears kept rolling down her cheeks. She felt the loneliness deeply.

'Madhu..'' It was her dad behind. She quickly wiped her tears. 'Madhu what happened? ' 'Uh.. nothing daddy, I'm just..uh..'' Madhu couldn't collect the words. 'What should I do? Should I ask about mom? But how? Daddy just returned after a hectic day & how can I force him to tell about mom? But I need to solve this.'' Madhu was in a dilemma. 'Madhu, tell me what's wrong with you?'' 'Are you ok?'' 'Uh daddy.. I.. I have something to..I mean can I talk with you a bit?'' 'Why not? I'm your daddy & you can tell me anything. Tell me Madhu, what's bothering you?'' Malik was confused with Madhu's strange behavior.

"Um daddy.. I want to know about my mom! What really happened to her?'' Malik was shocked with her sudden inquiry about her mom. But he knew that someday he has to reveal the truth. He kept lying her daughter about her own mom for the last 16 yrs but not anymore. ''Please daddy! what happened to her? You are hiding something!'' ''Madhu! what happened to you suddenly? why are you asking about her? I have told you about...'' ''Daddy! Please just tell me the truth!'' Madhu interrupted. ''& it's not suddenly! do you know, I was going through this for the past 16 yrs!! I used to believe what you said about my mom! you just said that she has gone far away & won't return again. I don't know even she is alive or not!'' Tears kept flowing down from her cheeks. She raised her voice with anger & pain.

I miss my mom! I miss being pampered by her! I miss everything about her! She cried her heart out. Malik was staring at her, he was shocked about Madhu's behavior & was sorry about his little girl. But he was clueless, whether to tell her about the past or not. How will she react? how will she deal about it for the rest of her life?

''Please daddy! what went wrong in the past? why there is no single photograph of her in our house? Why? I have never seen her! I don't even know how my mom looks like! Malik couldn't speak a word. He can't lie anymore. He should reveal the truth. Finally he decided to reveal about the past painful story. He wiped the tears of Madhu. ''Madhu.. listen, I know you are not a kid anymore, you are mature & will be able to understand. I am sorry I should have told about your mom earlier, but I was afraid that how would you deal with it. How would you deal with the reality...'' .Malik started unfolding about the past.

To be continued...

Pre cap - ''Madhu!!!'' Malik screamed spotting Madhu with bleeding hands


Edited by VinuRox - 11 years ago
EarlyYoungTimes thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Awesome update Vinusis 👏 and Congo shongo! 🥳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update ...continue soon pls...😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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nice update.. by the way its not short 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanx for this nice story...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congo for ff of the week vinu , and awesome update
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Posted: 11 years ago
#97
Awesome update...but excited 4 next part...plzzz post soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#98
really awesome update vinu dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey i am so excited to knw about madhu's mom... lovely update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update... Thanks 4 d pm
cont soon

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