VM - Beyond Control #2 (Epilogue/pg83)

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itsfate

@itsfate

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Posted: 12 years ago

#641

it was awesome story

really luved it

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Aysha

@aysha1989

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Posted: 12 years ago

#642

Hey girls... Thank you for all those wonderful comments... Happy to see comments even after so long...
Take care 😊

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Viratmanvifan31

@Viratmanvifan31

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Posted: 12 years ago

#643

wow jst finishd readin this.. is mindblowing story.

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nrithyao

@nrithyao

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Posted: 12 years ago

#644

read the whole story again
cant get over it
its wonderful

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NushIsh

@NushIsh

Voyager

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Posted: 12 years ago

#645

I don't have words to describe what an awesome writer you are, I may be a year too late to start this FF but what a journey it was for me. The way you showed the journey of Virat and manvi, Virat the angry young man who never believed in one, and Manvi the innocent girl. I loved everything about it.

The way Virat loves Manvi even with his insecurities that her love for him helped him overcome.

I have many of my favourite moments in this FF but I think the one that stood out for me the most is when Virat breaks down after his father's death and you wrote,

Love is not only about the cute moments but also about being there for the one you love in the sad moments too.

Amazing, from now on I will be stalking all your work, read second chance too, but can't comment on it because its closed, but that was a such a beautiful story as well,

Its always hard to fall in love with your best friend especially when she's with someone else, but its true what they say if you love some let them go, if you are meant to be with them they will come back to you, and this saying was depicted so truly in your story.

I can go on and on. but I think I'll stop for now,

Love ya Nush

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Aenna

@Aenna

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Posted: 12 years ago

#646

OMGGG finallyyy I hv finished reading dis
Gosh I stayed up whole nyt to read it..
Nd now I hv completed all d parts nd dey just amazinggg
I really loved it to core... all d parts were
Awwsum ... d way to expressed dere feelings wooow really hats off!!
Virman's character was really unique I loved d way virat
Used to get angry nd manvi use to manaofy him...
Superbbb storyyy... dere romance awww
Nd den finally dere baby sahil aww I really loved dat moment dat
Was truly magical... I no
D story is finished dont no y I cabt stop myself from
Reading it again nd again...
I wana tell u to contnu it but I no u wont lolzz but its ok
I no its done but u shud start season 2...
It will rock!! U r an amazing writer. .

-aenna