FF raya jrny of love. *New* update 48, Pg 28. 7-7 14 - Page 9

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Posted: 12 years ago
#81
after a long time u update this FF, very nice & romantic update, now Priya is pregnant, waiting 4 nxt part pls continue soon, thx 4 PM
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
They knew eachother very well ]
romantic too😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Nice😳☺️ and interesting update...keep it up...👏😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
first of all a big thank you for updating it, I was waiting for it, this one is a refreshing romance of RaYa, its sooo gud, each and every thing is just perfect, its was a RaYalicious part, plz continue ASAP, and plz next time do PM me
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
last Part 1

weverything is on correct place RaYa gonna be the best presnts for sure... love the teasing of Nuts & NeVi they r best buddies awww Nuts even is to pregnant too gud... i m so enjoying this last part of RaYa's this FF journy awesome too gud waiting for more Aubline
do post them soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
thanku so much for all u guys support



Update 47 ...

Pleasant night sang lullaby to the lovers, star's and moon witnessed another hottest love math of would be parents, for a moment they were off the thoughts they have someone else along. Probably the baby might have slept. They lie cuddled to each other, in the silky white sheets which covered their nakedness. She felt restless,her sleep is disturbed. She felt jealous of his sugary sleep. He is snoring to his glory. Somewhere in another part of mumbai,neha is constantly asking vikram to check for ram n priya as she is trying for her but both their cells are not reachable. In a verge, unable to tolerate neha n her banter anymore yup vikram has to admit. Yup they r alone somewhere but safe. Her reaction is... so damn predictable

"omg ... raaam, i mean fatty alone with priya! Remember ram used to scold us in college.. see how has changed today... sab kuch is priya's criedt. Seriously bechari ne bohot tak gayi hogi, ram n leaving office stuff is alone with her.. thank god vikram." Their friends felt happy.

Ram lazily opened his eyes found his lady, sitting beside him, covering femininity in the sheets carefully with a tight clasp so as she can secure herself. He smiled at her, she looked ravishing, with her tousled hair, fair skin turned pink as she is blushing those sheets covering her from her bosom to toe, her smooth bony shoulder n her long tender neck n many red spots near her neck n shoulder yup those old n new love bites his lady looks devilishly seductive. His lips curled to a naughty grin, thinking- priya bhi,what is there which i have not explored, sometimes she is very bold, but after math she blush so much n shy. NO now it is not shy, she is upto something. He sat in bed resting on bed rest. She moved to his side,cuddled to his side resting her head on his shoulder while his arm circled around her shoulder.

what happened priya? Are u fine? Kahi baby ko..' she stopped him

no baby is fine.. u only care for the baby not me! Ur a father , but only after beingmy husband remember'

hahaha, yes i would love to remain as ur husband for ever.' He grined.

hmmm...'

u alright baby'

woh ... i... am hungry!'

what..! we had our dinner n now?'

haan what can i do, jr,kapoor hai, ander'

y dint u check the kitchen? Did u'

no .. i don't want to cook now, and its ok don't need to bother me n my baby will sleep like this u too sleep' she pouted

priyaaa.. no i just asked u, i will check if i can do anything,' smile curled on her lips, he walked out of bed with no shyness, after all she knows him. pulled a robe from wardrobe wearing it he moved to the kitchen.

She collected the scattered clothes from the floor,took a shower,came to him who is still in the messy sexy attire.she coyly bit her lower lip and tasted brushes on her lip.who else will that be- her ram alone. By the time she composed herself to help him he made arrangements for their dinner. He arranged the living area beautiful. With hanging lanthers, a table for two, with delicious food. Her fav alone. He asked her to switch off the lights n increase the flame of the lighted lanthers.

Fortunate he was to have her in

He turned up to the dinner setup. She stood,near the window feeling the zephyr. His happiness is un explainable, he is in zenith, the thing which he thought would never be possible is happening,he could not thank her enough.he hugged the ethereal beauty from behind,whispered I LOVE U.. she simply said HMMM! They stood from some time he slowly moved her hand on her waist to stomach, who know her stomach growling warned him,that she is hungry. He pulled her to dine. She always love to spend dinner along with him. they relished the food. He took her hand,she slide beside him in bed. Ram said her how fortunate he is to have her. she drifted to deep slumber in his arms. he dimmed the lights n slept with no tension of what is happening in their lifes.

Vikram is constantly calling ram, no use ram switched off his mobile. This time it is serious. Ram woke up with dog barking. Those ferocious dog is obstructing some one to reach their master. After a while it abated. She woke up, the first rays of sun fall on her face made her look like an angel. Wishing him a lazy good morning, she woke up . he went near her kissed her fore head and wished her back. he carried her to washroom,though she protest initially she gave up they had their part of morning romance in their washroom. Teasing each other. Who knows something worst is there at their feet in few hours.

Doc: her condition is criticle, there is lot of blood loss. Arrange for B-ve blood soon.

Helpless vikram who took the place of ram, is one way happy that his friend escaped wishing for his saftey. Neha is with nuts, doc said he will operate her soon as she is in her 8 month, it is going to be complicated. Nuts wished priya to be on he side. Same kind of thoughts shared here too they wished for raya's saftey. Jayesh gave bail to sid alone, knowing about his sister's condition sid rushed to hospital seeing all that he was shattered. Jayeesh donated blood. He got his son back and he is not among those who cant feel the pain of humanity. Somewhere sid this genes of jayeesh aroused sid to protect ram n priya. Vikram never expected sid would do so, sid is being vikram's support now. He went to nuts though she insulted, he wished her a healthy baby girl. Nuts is moved becoz of sids behavior, it was sid neha he is speaking so gentle. Ayesha who is scared to meet sid after the arrest heard it, there is a change in his behavior. Sid saw ayesha running away from him. jayesha took sid to vikram, while rishab is busy with elders care taking.

Two lovers having a blissful morning in the same bath tub. He is wiping her tender skin with the aromatic cleansing gel, she said she is feeling uneasy since morning, she asked him to go back. there is some unknown tension darting her. he is even having similar feelings something is not right his 6 th sense warned him. he quickly finished bath, both decided they will leave to home soon. He made priya eat fruits n had their cofee. Called the caretaker. Has to wait till he come, to handover the house keys. Sid jayesh n vikram were guessing where ram can be. Yes, sid has a rough idea. Bhai has some property in the name of priya alone that is a secluded place. Maa once told me abt the land in the name of ram, she wants to build a resort there and bahi made it in name of priya. I once went there without anyone concern it has a lavish house, beautiful garden but to the public from road it is a waste land which belongs to kapoors. Vikram asked r u sure we can find ram there. Not wasting a moment they ignited their car toward the love nest of raya.

Priya hold ram's hand walking silently in the garden lawn, she never saw how that place wasmade. They were enjoying the beauty of the place. She sat near the stream,kept her feet in the cold water. She insist ram to sit and enjoy the feel of cold flowing water on the feet.its relaxing. For a min he thought if she is by his side he can actually live. He prayed keep her happy always. They were surprised to see a black colored honda city screeched the break. He never gave the address to anyone who the hell came to his private land, ram is very angry n turned back,to their surprise it was no other than sid running towards them. Priya caught hold of ram in fear,seeing the sight made ferocious. Ram shouted who made to free u bas***d, i will sue u.. ram saw viram running towards him. he doubted vikram with sid n jayesh sir.?? What is wrong with vikram? Those unimaginable rousted thoughts made his mind clumsy..

"i am not leaving u ...u spoiled my life priya ... they heard a female voice echo the place. Before ram priya realize wat happend they heard a gun shot..n a scream of pain, ram turned around to see he saw the stream painted red. And another bullet is fired...



to be continued ...

i dont like this silence of my readers, i dont reply it dosen't mean i dont care for the readers. i do look after who are interested and who r not. as the readers response in naive this ff is ending but i want to give a clean ending too. after this i will only have to write SB. which will be soon cleared off as my readers are naive i will leave writing though there r two good stories i thought of..

serious not to those who do not reply to my PM about my ff's ..{ Only one r two } i know am rude but i have to say, i hate Hippocrates back stabbing.

my dear silent readers PRESS LIKE AT LEAST>>.

looking forward for ur response guys


Edited by luvbalh - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
romantic update
full of raya moments😳
even Sid also turn positive. but who fire bullets and to whom😲
actually I am not ready for the next part because I know it's going to be painful 😭
please update soon and thanks for PM😊
Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Fab update...
Raya are engrossed in their private moment...
Sid became.a good person !!!!!
Wht happend in last para 😲
Update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
the update was a fab their is romance of raya
sid is also changed
but now wat happened their is bullet fire
hope so that raya are fine with vikram
continue soon thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Omg gun shot...!!
Update d nxt one soon ..

Nice romantic update dis was d sid a changed man... good... 😊

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