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Posted: 11 years ago


🤗 pehli bar kisi ne mera naam liya forum mein ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: smileysmi


u r a lie er i also u caled by ur name😆 di is not 1st time
🤗 pehli bar kisi ne mera naam liya forum mein ..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Oh sorry...
Muje yaad nahi thi...
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Posted: 11 years ago
loved last 2 parts.. it was awesome.. loved d bond between daughters n dads.. loved d way they asked permission to drink .. its true no1 asks permission... loved d way rey n kria r in ease n d way parents n girls were teasing n having eye on kria.. loved d way rey n kria love each others presence n rey being impressed by kria.. even i was shocked like rey wen dads said abt girls permission to drink..

waiting for next part...
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Posted: 11 years ago
Clarification :

hey guys...how are you doing???...so itz a time to clarify one important thing i covered in my last update..and that is "all parents giving permission to kriya and gang to drink"..yes...i thought many of you will disagree with this point but only few disagreement i saw in their comments...that's okay..may be you guys just took it as a story and read it..but in reality it'z just not a story..actually initially i had planned the whole track as "girls trying to have drink without letting know their parents..with the help of rey"...you know all masti type...but then something strike in my mind so i changed it..the fact is, when i joined MBA in Bangalore, i had a girl in my batch..she was also a south indian girl...she told me one day(next day after some party) that she miss partying with her mom and dad(she used to stay in hostel) and in drinks, her dad's and her fav is same...they always take the same drink..i was shocked that day..i asked her "doesn't he have any objection?" .. so she coolly replied "no..she and her parents are like friends...they all together take drinks when they party..."...i was not convinced actually😉...but then later i found couple of more friends who share the same relationship with their parents...and one girl, her father used to work in Dubai and he used to bring classy drinks for her and for her brother..so yes...few parents share this friendly relationship with their kids as they grow up..this was the main reason i changed the whole track...whatever i wrote is not just for a story sake but in reality there are some girls who tells their parents regarding their habit of taking drinks in parties...😊




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Posted: 11 years ago
hello guys...here i am with the next part...hope you guys will like it...and thank a lot for wonderful comments...i read all of them...thank you so much...

Part 11...

Party went really well...girls danced on their favorite song "uff teri ada" with their dads and rey...and when rey came to know that all ladies(moms) also love to dance but they are shy today because of rey's presence...rey told girls to play the song "aunty ji (movie- ek mein aur ek tu)" and dances with all the moms...girls and dads cheer for them..all enjoys rey;s company and rey too likes this new found family...kriya feels happy to see rey adjusting and enjoying the company of her family...

it was around 11 pm, finally party ends...they forcefully ends it because rey has to get up early in the morning...all return to their houses saying good nights..kriya says good night to rey when they reach rey's room and goes to her room which is next to his...after 15 mins, kriya was sitting on her bed and seeing pics of the party in her laptop...she hears knock on her door which was open anyway...it didn't take time for her to guess who's the person...it was rey only..he had changed his cloths and came to kriya;s room...

"come in rey..you dont have to knock on my room door if it's open and i am sitting in front of you.." says kriya smiling...

"oh i thought girl's room...you know it's better to knock on the door before entering" says rey in a casual tone...

he goes and sits next to her on her bed.." oh itni jaldi pics transfer kardi laptop mein?" asks rey looking at her laptop...

"no no...i was just looking..abhi karni hai transfer..tumhe neend nahi aarahi hai?? you should go to sleep rey...you have to get up early and you said that you will directly go to office when you reach mumbai..should get some rest" says kriya in a concerned tone...

"arre that's okay..wo sab tho chalta rehta hai...waise tum har waqt sab ko leke aise hi pareshaan rehti ho?? yaar i just came here to sit with you for some time..and tum ho ki har waqt bhaghate rehte ho.." says rey in a teasing tone...

"oh hello main koi pareshaan nahi hoon..and agar tumhe bhagaana hi hota tho tumhe ek aur din rukne ke lie manaati nahi okay?" replies kriya with equally irritated tone..

"okay okay..calm down..i just came here to say thanks to you..for everything..these 2 days i enjoyed a lot here...most memorable days...and your family is way too cool...i liked all of them..thanks"

both just stares at each other for a minute...these words meant a lot to kriya..and rey knew that..because when rey was dancing and enjoying with everyone in the party kriya was standing in a corner and smiling looking at the scene..her eyes were sparkling with tears in them...rey has observed that...that;s why he went to kriya so that he can confirm that he really liked her family...

kriya breaking the eye lock, looks away and says " thanks."..rey waits for her to look at him but she just avoids looking at him just to hide her tears in her eyes...but rey had already seen them in party so he knew exactly how she is feeling right now...he cups her face with his hands and says "dont worry sab teek hi hoga...hum dono kuch bhi galat hone nahi denge...we both are equally strong people..hum dono ki family ko aise hi happy happy rakhenge dono milke"...kriya just shuts her eyes to let the tears flow and seeing her tears, rey hugs her..he comforts her by caressing her back for some time...

kriya pulls out from the hug slowly.. "you okay?" asks rey just not to create a awkward situation because of hug and to make her normal...kriya just nods her head.. "rey you should really go to bed now..it's too late...better get some sleep" says kriya coming back to her concern mode...

"okay i will but only after you reply to my question...honestly okay" replies rey giving his one of the mischievous smile...

kriya smiles shaking her head slightly because now she has understood that rey is too good in teasing and she knew now he is definitely gonna ask something which kriya will not be able to reply..."okay...if i dont want to answer your question?" asks kriya raising her brow..

rey smiles "smart girl...if you dont answer then i will think that whatever answer i expected from you will be the same you wanted answer as well" replies smartly...

kriya laughs at this slightly..."very smart haan?? accha tarika hai jo tum chahte ho wo bulwane ka logo se" says kriya...

rey sits on his knees on the bed and says "oye tumhe kya lagta hai main har kisi ke sath aise sweet games khelta rehta hoon? no way madam...bas tum ho iss lie bol dia...accha chodo ye sab tell me are you ready?" asks rey eagerly...

"yeah yeah...ready..pucho ?" asks kriya biting her nails...

"okay...pehle ye hathao(removing her hand in front of her mouth and stopping her from biting her nails )..itz not a good habit...and the question is "do really want me to..."(stops there looking at her eager expression "

kriya - "want you to...???"

rey - "do you really want me to go from here right now?" asks rey hiding his smile...

kriya was blank for a moment because yes she was really liking talking to him but she was telling him to go to bed because he had to wake up early...after few seconds,

rey gets up from her bed and says good night to her and turns to leave..."rey answer nahi chahie?" asks kriya slowly still confused how to answer...

rey putting his hands in his pockets "nope...i asked that question just to see your reaction...answer tho muje pata tha..."(winks at her) and leaves her room silently smiling...

kriya for the first time blushes in her life and lay back on bed closing her face with the pillow..unable to control the blush...


morning at 5.30...

smriti, gautam and kriya goes to airport to send off rey...smriti and gautam say him bye out side the airport(parking lot) and sends kriya with rey into the airport...they give privacy to rey and kriya...

it was still 30 mins to his flight...they were sitting in the airport silently...

rey - "kab aarahi ho mumbai?"

kriya - "3 days baad.."

rey puts his hand on hers...she clutches his fingers slightly..because she too wanted to hold his hand but was not understanding how to...rey makes a first move..they sit like that for few minutes..absorbing the new feeling...the feeling of being with some one and knowing that the other person is the only one who will be the partner for rest of your life..and the amazing fact about that new feeling was "that you have already accepted the other as your partner forver"...

finally they hear the announcement...both looks at each other...before leaving rey hugs her...kriya whispers "take care of yourself rey"...rey pulls back from the hug smiling, cups her cheek and says "you too"



done 😳...okay two things now...first, please check the previous post of mine, (go to previous pg, last post)...second, i know itz not that lengthy update but now a days i am able to give this length updates only...i really dont know why...but will try and give long one next time...shorryy...
Edited by smileysmi - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
RES
UNRES

beautifully written
so amazing
i mean everything was perfect..
scene, dialogue etc.. 😛

loved the chapter..
waiting for more eagerly.. 😳😳

thanks for the PM
i really appreciate it
please update soon and PM me

PS. Me first 😃
victory dance
lets party 🥳
Edited by -spongy- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing Update ... !!!
loved kria and rey's new bonding <3 <3
that question ... bechari kria .. :-D :-D
the airport scene was cute :-)
in all i totally loved the whole update ^_^
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome...pls jaldi kriya ko mumbai leke jao...
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing
m loving this
kriyaansh is really very cute like always
keep it up
update soon
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