~One-Shot~ Satya's entry.

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Posted: 11 years ago
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hey guys! I am very excited about tonight's show as Akshay Dogra will make his entry. So here's my take on his entry though it's same. I hope you all like it and please leave your precious comments and don't forget to like.

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The whole basti was decorated beautifully with lights, flowers and curtains. It surely looked vibrant and suited the basti after all it was dahi handi that too in Raghu's basti so it had to look the best. It was Antara and Raghu's first ever Dahi Handi. Both were very much happy after realizing their new found feelings for each other yet they couldn't express it as they both didn't know how the other would react.

It was early in the morning and everyone was waiting for the handi to break. There were 2 teams one led by Raghu and the other team's leader wasn't there yet. Daya Mai came out accompanied by Rasika, Manohar, Raghu and MachMach. At Antara's house, Antara wore a beautiful light blue anarkali and her ears were adorned with white earrings. Her long black, silky hair was shifted on the right side. On the other hand, Raghu was waiting for Antara's arrival. Raghu was wearing a blue shirt and inside a grey T-shirt. Time has arrived for breaking the pot and Antara came out of her room and stood in her balcony with Ishaan beside her. Raghu smiled and he started to climb over people to reach the handi. Due to some reason Raghu slipped and he fell down. Antara screamed, "Raghu!" A painful moan escaped through Raghu's mouth.

Everyone reached towards Raghu. Daya Mai stood up while Rasika said, "Raghu fell down...more or less" Antara rushed down and helped him to get up and that wasn't liked by Rasika and Daya Mai. Everyone was worried for Raghu but soon their concentration was distrated by the horn of a black BMW which entered their basti.

A tall, handsome guy who was in his late 20s came out of the car. He took off his coat and shades and made his way towards the opposition team. While he walked everyone bowed there heads down and moved away from his way. It seemed like a King was walking and all his subjects moved away. They treated him just like a prince and his attitude was like one. Everyone stared at him. Antara didn't recognise him while Raghu had a smile on his face. All the Naik residents his face smile on their face. He climbed swiftly and broke the handi. His face wasn't visible to Antara much as everyone was spreading red colour. But her face was visible to him. He climbed down and stared at her angelic face. Both Antara and Raghu were unaware of that person's thoughts.

"Are you ok, Raghu?" Antara asked tensed. "I am absolutely fine, Miss Kaul." Raghu said with a small smile as he tried to hide his pain from her. "But you .." Antara kept on asking questions when Raghu interrupted her, "One more question and you will regret it, I swear." Raghu said making her stop from her train of questions. "Fine, one last question. Who's that guy who broke the pot?" Antara asked curiously. Raghu was about answer when a deep husky voice came from her behind and said, "Satya, Satya Naik!"
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honeybees22 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow that was nice pls cont it

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: alishamerchant

Wow!!! Shud write part 2


let's see.
If i have time then i'll change it to a two-shot
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Aj yeh sab hnay wala!!!
Bs difference itna keh that satya will make raghu fall!!!
Anyways!!!
A great one shot !!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: hayakhan5

Aj yeh sab hnay wala!!!
Bs difference itna keh that satya will make raghu fall!!!
Anyways!!!
A great one shot !!!


i know yaar
baas likhne ka maan kiya toh likh diya

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