FF:Secret Endeavors Chp 11 PG21 June18 Jai/Bani FF

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archanasund76

@archanasund76

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Posted: 13 years ago

#141

Hey Moon - thanks for the update.

Exceptional writing from Jai's perspective.

For the first time i felt bad for Rosh and I am annoyed at JW.

When he is going steady with Rosh, how can he think of cheating her and have feelings for Bani? JW and Rosh shared an apartment, a bed and all the possible intimacy and now JW wants to go to Bani. JW and Rosh kiss each other, hug each other etc and the man thinks about Bani.

If he shared such an intimate relation with Roshni, why is after Bani? It is disgusting. He says "I love you Rosh"...what does he mean? Not everybody has a relationship on the bed with a good friend...

After 5 yrs, JW ends their relationship one day. JW and Rosh had no fights, no misunderstandings, nothing...whatsoever and he wants to break off because he feels it is not going anywhere. How can he take anyone's feeling so much for granted. I don't like JW's attitude here.

Jai after his return has not taken even 5 mins out to send an mail to Bani explaining his absence or even called her.

Bani should move on. Jai doesn't deserve Bani.

Waiting for your updates...

Love
Archie.

Edited by archanasund76 - 13 years ago

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Joti

@winnie7500

Explorer

Posted: 13 years ago

#142

Even after reading it for the 3rd time, I see no ramblings.

Loved the 'tie strangulation' and 'watch connection.

And I have to say, reading it over this last time I did feel a bit bad for Rosh. Even though it wasn't a true courtship and more conventional than anything they were still committed. And for Rosh the end really sprung up on her. Although I'm glad Jai didn't let things go on, and told her right away.

Update soon; missing scenes of interaction between Bani & Jai.

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aamirkhanfan

@aamirkhanfan

Rocker

Posted: 13 years ago

#143

nice part

we got the view point of jai, but what is bani thinking

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Proud-BrownGirl

@Proud-BrownGirl

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Posted: 13 years ago

#144

Wonderful narrative of how JW is thinking and feeling about himself, Bani, Roshni and life in general.
Real sad that he's thinking Bani may be with Tarun, but willing to pick up the phone and offer
her an explanation for his sudden departure.

Great piece of writing, enjoyed reading the chapter very much.