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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aashi14

amazing part ,i m just luving dis ff...

maan did tell or rather ordered geet to cum wid him bt thank god she denied it n maan needs a reality check n shud also realize dat geet is his life partner nt a maid orsomething ...
poor jeh😭
eagerly waiting for next


thanku thanku soo much for this lovely comment.. 😃😃
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Posted: 11 years ago

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Posted: 11 years ago

Read at your risk because I feel it's a bit mature stuff. If there are mistakes or you didn't liked it do tell me I will edit it.

A very important part for this FF.

Part 11

Reputation Maan S. Khurana? Are you scared what the mere people in society will think about you?

Let me tell you Maan what people think about you.

Ur own employs think you as a most arrogant and good for nothing man except for money making .You know what people make money for their family to live with ease. You make money for that girl who you use regularly.

Some tears fall from her hazel eyes. But she controlled herself. She doesn't want to breakdown in front of this man.

I was so wrong I thought u really loves your girlfriend but I was wrong because person like you can never love a person.

A person who will never think twice before killing his own blood his kids in rage how can he love someone?

And your girlfriend tell her that how can I leave HER LOVE, because I never hold her love in my hands Maan.

Maan looked at her in shock!


What's your reputation in your wife's eyes you know that?

Maan look at her expectedly.

Your wife thinks you as a disgusting person who uses his wife just for pleasure. And can go beyond any limit for that.

Maan felt a sudden pain in his heart.

OK tell me one thing why do you want me back?

Did you have bored of your girlfriend or you wanted me on your bed again. Or you want revenge on me? Revenge on cheating on you? Or you want your kids back?

A lone tear escape from his eyes.

Do you even know what are kids and parents?

Let me tell you having kids and not about leading a sperm to your wife's body. NO! Having kids is not about giving them enough money. NO!

Maan felt a shiver in his spine.

Having kids is about loving them. Having kid's means to spend time with them. Having kid's means to hold them for the first time after they are born. Having kids is to teach them how to talk. Having kid's means to hold their finger while they are learning to walk. Did you do that?

N. ye... N...

Shut up Maan. Just shut up.

When you saw me that night with Jacob you felt bad right?

Maan nodded a little.

What about me I know you were sleeping with your girlfriend and still I was with you think about my pain.

He was shocked to core..

You felt bad Na? When you thought I gave away your right to someone just 1 time.

Now what do you think how many times in two years you did that with me?

Did you have any idea how does that feel to me?

I m a human being dam it I also feel pain here (pointed at her heart)

Before marriage they got me married even then I protested that I wanted to study but NO! They got me married and then I just find my whole happiness in you. You proved me wrong by giving me reality check again an again. Why?

What was my fault then? Just because I m middle class that doesn't mean I don't possess a heart. I m

A HUMAN WITH FLESH AND BLOOD Maan!

Tears were uncontrollably flowing out of her eyes!

Maan did not like it so he tried to wipe her tears


But geet pushed his hand off her.

Don't touch me MR MSK.

Maan didn't even know when tears started to flow from his eyes.

And you know what this middle class fil*h thinks about you? She thinks you as the most coward person in the whole wide world to send your dam Girlfriend to tell your wife about your affair.

Girl...f...r... I...e...n...d?

Yes that Sam.

Bu.t

Geet cut him and again started

Now why the hell do you care about your fake reputation?

MR MSK you don't have reputation.

Now sign the dam divorce papers and free me from this good for nothing relation.

But let me tell you Mr. MSK thanks a lot for my kids. Seriously I would have die with out them.

They are the only reason because I m alive now.

but you would have killed me Maan. i would have die.

D...ide?

Yes die because u didn't come to fill that form Maan. You didn't.

I was dying with pain.

Whi.ch pain?

Geet hold his collar and continue.


I had told you Maan I had complications with my pregnancy with Jeh? Didn't I?

I was literally dying with labor pain Maan waiting for you in house.

I called you so many times but you didn't come.

Where were you?

Busy in dam meeting or f**king your dam girlfriend,

He was scared for the first time. He wanted to know what happened that day.

Ge.eet?

Don't take my name with your tongue Maan.

Just don't.

I. am. So...r.

Don't say sorry now Maan.

Its not enough. its just not good enough

Did you ever tried you know about my feelings?

Nope

What about I say now I sleep with Jake?

I m sorry about that Maan

Will you accept that?

n. y.

No you will not I know you then how can I accept yours?

Geet just went from there and sat on the couch crying her eyes out.


Maan didn't knew what to do now?

He felt he was defeated.

Defeated beyond the ability to be even alive

He muttered

sor...rr..yy geet.

And went from there

And geet broke into numerous pieces...

I once again lost my love.

But I am broken now broken beyond the ability to be repaired.

I can't trust him.

I can't trust the safety of my kids with their father.

Irony of destiny

Maan walked out of the apartment like a zombie.

And some how managed to walked to car and drive off.

In house

There was someone else who witnessed their fight or say confrontation other the geet and Maan.

That person didn't get much of it and the amount that person get was enough to broke that person.

Tears were continuously flowing out of HIS/HER eyes. And then that person broke into sobs.

He/she didn't know that a person she/he loves has gone through so much.

I hate you. I hate you a lot.

I hate you daddy.

That person was none other than our princess KAJAL.


Precap- some one in hospital. But who?

Done with this part, it was dam difficult for me to write this seriously.

😃Not a target this time. 😃

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😳But I want big comments and lots of likes or else I will not update.😳

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well i m nervous. *me biting my nails*

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Edited by sweetgirls1 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
awes um dear😊
finally geet burst out on maan
i think geet is in hospital
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Posted: 11 years ago
Woww awsme one 😊
Urghhh hate tht Maan 👏
Read ur ff frst tym in one go just simply great 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome part
loved it
feeling really sad for geet she gone through so much pain
she brusted out on maan ...maan was not able to stand before her and he left saying sorry
scary precap now who is in hospitalll i hope maan doesn't met with accident...
waiting for the next part
continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
great yaar.
maan deserve this. i think maan is in hospital. shayad accident ho gaya hoga

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Posted: 11 years ago
seems like there r so many things that maan doesnt even know coz he was shocked when geet was telling it
so something is there which maan doesnt knows
now his daughter also hates him

continue soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

awesome part. I loved the confrontation.

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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update ..
Much needed confrontation ..
Geet's feeling n pain was well described..
It was quiet painful update..
Maan needed a reality check..
Oops... Kajal heard everything..
Dont know wat to say it as gud or bad thing..
Precap is quiet scary...
I think it will b maan in the hospital ..
Waiting for more :-)

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