Light of Loneliness

here's another poem i wrote, i hope u guys like it!!!! plz feel free to criticize my writing, it won't offend me in any way

Light of Loneliness

Looking for a light
Anything to guide her
From the darkness
Of the lonely room

Searching for someone
Anyone
To talk to
To get away from the loneliness

She looks around her
But sees nothing
Nobody to help her
And guide her

She starts to cry
Tears streaming down her face
Sobs racking her body
But no one to hear them.

thats sweet thanks for sharing 😃

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

here's another poem i wrote, i hope u guys like it!!!! plz feel free to criticize my writing, it won't offend me in any way

Light of Loneliness

Looking for a light
Anything to guide her
From the darkness
Of the lonely room

Searching for someone
Anyone
To talk to
To get away from the loneliness

She looks around her
But sees nothing
Nobody to help her
And guide her

She starts to cry
Tears streaming down her face
Sobs racking her body
But no one to hear them.

oh wow!!!!!!!!!!! love ur poem.......... keep posting more of ur poems😳...coz i just felt tht ur talking about me 😕............. thts exactly how i feel these days

wow, wat a poem!!! 👏 👏 👏 keep up the good work, u really have a talent, u can write really well,..... i have read one of them before as well and i must say that ur poems r lovely! 😳

Originally posted by: Fiza_87

oh wow!!!!!!!!!!! love ur poem.......... keep posting more of ur poems😳...coz i just felt tht ur talking about me 😕............. thts exactly how i feel these days

aww, you shouldn't feel that way. u'll never be lonely with everyone on IF around

Originally posted by: mini2390

wow, wat a poem!!! 👏 👏 👏 keep up the good work, u really have a talent, u can write really well,..... i have read one of them before as well and i must say that ur poems r lovely! 😳

lol, I personally don't like them, but thx. I've only written them because we have to in my English class and i just wanted ur guys' opinion on them. lol

Originally posted by: ~Unforgettable~

aww, you shouldn't feel that way. u'll never be lonely with everyone on IF around

oh thankyouuuuuuuuuuuuu so much jaan🤗🤗🤗... i know u guys will always be here for me😳

Originally posted by: Fiza_87

oh thankyouuuuuuuuuuuuu so much jaan🤗🤗🤗... i know u guys will always be here for me😳

yup yup, u can always count on us 😳 🤗