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Posted: 11 years ago

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please update waiting for long time u didn;t keep up ur work mee verry sad ... can plz plz update plz plz update asap thanks very much for ur great works and keep up ur great works thanks alot

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Posted: 11 years ago

#62

congrats on the new thread😊 i have just completed reading from part 5 to 16 and also the teaser just now and i must say,like all your other stories i am falling in love with this one too👍🏼😛 awesome parts👍🏼...just can't get enough of it😔 eagerly waiting for more...please continue soon and don't torch er us with a late update...😡😒😛😊

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Posted: 11 years ago

#63

heyy just read all d parts n d teaser...
dey r simply superb...but u chose a wrong place to stop😆...
beautifully written...truly explains d jitters n butterflies of normal girl during d entire wedding process n den d first night...oh god u literally scared d hell out of d poor girl on her first ni8..n den made her sleep😉..
eager 2 read more..continue soon..n pm me also..plz..

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Originally posted by: 2102
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note:geet has finished her 12th..so,obviously she is 17+ n maan doesn't know about her age till now nor her in laws..maan has seen her only in sari's..which made her look matured..n this secret will be out soon..maybe within 6 r 7 updates..or before too..idk..let me type..

Part 17

Maan was with his friends..but his mind was with geet..he was unable to take his mind from her..his friends giggled that made him back..

Hiten:not bad..day dreaming with ur wife..

Uff..maan was flushed..

Prem:maan..hmm..u must think about something else too..

Man:what..

Prem:budhu..honey moon..

Man:hm..hmm par..

Adi:prem..tum bhi kisse poochrahi ho..ek workaholic man se..i pity bhabhi..she seems like a mouthless creature..what will she do with this msk..who knows only about work office files..aur kuch nehi..i m already hiding official things so that he may spend time here..

Man:kya...adi..what..whats about office..

Hiten n prem glared adi n he closed his big mouth for bluttering..adi cursed himself..why he always speak truth n couldn't hide anything from man..

Hiten:maan.leave him..but u must also know..u r newly married .now u must spend sometime with ur wife..its arranged marriage n so u both must know each other well..once u r back to work u will forget everything..as friends we want u to be happy..till she knows u well u must give her time..n we know u very well ..ur gud face to all understanding others..but u cant expect it from ur wife..it will be hard for her to adjust in initial days..honeymoon is also sort of time spending with each other..

Maan smiled at them..

Maan:.im blessed to have gud friends like u..n thanks for ur advice.n I ll think about Hm.. but not now atpresent..i ve some more things on way..

He said looking at adi who knew he is gone now from maan..

Hiten:yaar..we are leaving today..lets meet in delhi..

Maan: stay for some more days yaar..

Prem:its ur marriage..n we too have family n business n kids..they are looking way of doorstep..so we will meet in delhi..hope u understand us...

Maan:.hmm..ok..n do a favour..check reception arrangements once again..n if we have left any friends to invite..n take adi with u..office n family needs this idiot too..

Adi gave a puppy look..but he wondered why man did not ask about his blabber till now..but man is man n he has his own way..

After the chat with his office members,he came to know he is needed in Chennai..the new project has some major issues to be discussed.n the government officials has called him to meet within that week..it may take 5 0r 6 days for him to return if he goes there..he was lost in his thoughts..how can he go leaving his newly wedded wife..what will her family think..more of all how will he convince his mother that he wants to go..she will go mad for sure..but this is a big project n he cant be irresponsible..its his dream coming true..his negligence may bring his reputation down..which he cant accept..its his hard work of years to achieve something ..maan decided to talk to his mother..but his thought again went to his wife..how will she react..3^rd day of marriage ..if I say I want to go n I cant take her to Chennai..how will she feel..oh! man..why this marriage thing seems heavy now..how I am going to balance work n family..till now no one was there to stop me..i know how to make mom n Vicky get in terms with me..but geet..i barely knew her ..he sighed..but there is no other way..he must go...he must make them understand his position n the importance of circumstances..

He was called for lunch..n he went down..after the lunch,he asked all to stay back n he stated his position..

Adi was silent..as he hide it from man thinking he will talk about it after a day or two..but maan has found it..maans piercing eyes on him told that he is upset with his behavior..but what to do..he thought as a friend more than his assistant..

Sd:how can u maan..u got married 2 days back..ur wife has gone foe pag phere..n here u are talking about leaving for a 5 days..i cant let u go man..now go n get ready to go to your in laws house to pick ur wife..

Maan:maa pls..meri itni sal ki mehnat pe paani phirjayega..my name fame everything will be in stake..think from my position maa..

Arohi:par maan..geet ko akeli chodkar..what will she think..

Maan: I ll talk to her n make her understand..but I want my mothers permission first..

Sd:if geet accepts..then its ok for me..

She closed the topic with her disappointment..

Sd:now go n send off ur friends .then get ready to pick ur wife..

Maan:ji maa..

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Here in geets house geet woke up after taking a small nap..every thing felt so different..is it real or I m assuming things..

She thought about the lunch..

Like all families in village ,in their family too mens sat first for lunch n ladies would serve..but today her mother made geet sit next to nanji n tej .she herself served for geet n asked her everytime does she want more of rice curry or any veg..she for the first time saw some thing in her mothers eyes..is it love ..love for her..can it be..no..no..its all maanjis effect on me..i think all is normal..

Her mother gave her the kheer..its her favourite...did she made for me..no no..it cant be..as there are guests she must have made for them..

After lunch too her mother did not let her work..instead asked her to take rest..she must be tired..

Geet came out of thoughts as the smell of oil hit her nostrils..something special sweet smell..hmm...

She went to kitchen n saw her mother making hot jelabi's n her relative women helping her making samosa's on other side..

Rano:tu utgayi beta..jaa..jaldi jaake fresh ho ja..n change to the clothes which u wore n came..n wear the jewellaries..damadji aatha hi hoga tumei lenekeliye..

Geet:maa..i ll help u..then will fresh up..

Rano:no geet..tu chal..what if ur husband sees u working n all sweaty..

Geet:par maa..

Rano:go geet..listen to what I say..go..

Women:arei geet..tum tho nayi nayi bahu ho..shringar karegi tho ho tumhhara pati tumharei aagae peeche gumega na,,

They all giggled making geet blush..even if man was not in her thoughts they made her think about him..

As The womens also agreed to rano, geet was literally pushed out of kitchen..this was all knew to her..but some sort of happiness started to form inside her..her mothers normal behavior..no taunts..soem hidden care..she loved this change in her life..

Tej smiled seeing his small sister lost in thoughts..

Tej:gudia..sry..tu tho ab gudia nehi rahi..tu tho badi hogayi..hmmm..kya sochrahi ho..jiju ke barei mein na..

He teased n Geet shied..

Geet:bhai aap bhi na..

Tej was happy seeing her like that..

Tej:chal pagli..jaldi tayaar hoja..

Geet:hmm..

She went to fresh up..she splashed water on her face ..when she opened her eyes she saw man looking at her with piercing gaze..

She looked herself..omg..i didn't get ready..he is back..

Then she looked at the place where he was standing..he is not there..she looked here n there..

May be he went inside..

She went inside n her eyes searched for him..he was talking with dadaji n others..as he turned he saw her n his eyes went to her lips..

Uff..geet looked at the floor all blushy..

Tej:geet,what are u doing standing here..

Geet:wo..wo bhai..

She turned n saw man...the place was empty..

She cant say she was watching her husband..or her bhai will also tease her..

Geet:wo..im going..

She ran to dress up..she wore the sari n jewels..when she filled her maang she felt proud..she is geet..maan ki geet..she hugged herself ..the fire was spreading inside her..his soft kisses,touches n their night started to fill her mind..she had the sweet pain between her thighs..she curled her toes..

Geet..

She looked n saw man standing at the doorstep of room.

Man:geet,tum yahaan kya kar rahi ho..

Geet:wo w o mein..

She stammered to talk..she blinked her eyes n found him missing..geet was confused..she moved to the door n looked on either side..he was not there..

Geet:am I dreaming about him..i think so..pagli acha hua..koi aur nehi tha..warna kya kehthi tu..babajI! WHATS HAPPENNING TO ME..Im going mad..

Rano called her..geet geet..

Geet soon checked herself n came down..

Geet:maa..

Rano looked at geet for a minute..her eyes said so many things..love care pride admiration,,but soon the emotions was hidden..

Rano:geet,puja ka tayari kar,

She instructed what to do n went to continue her works..

Geet heared hustle bustle at enterance..nanji n her uncles were chatting there..she can hear them talk..there is alliance for her first cousin n they are going to meet the girl tomorrow ..if everything was ok they will confoirm the marriage..she was happy..she heared them taking maans name..n she turned to them..did he came..

Nanaji:if maan comes ask him n geet to come with us. Tomorrow

Geets papa:ji..

Geets ears sharpened whenever they talked about man..her stomach was having butterflies with his name n she was going insane..

She asked herself..how can I change in two days..why im not thinking about the persons near me..when im the one hated marriage n denied to this relation.now why I cant take maanji from my thoughts..

She again heared maans name..

She thought to herself..no I wont turn n get disappointment..im dreaming him everywhere..if this goes on im sure im going to make fun of myself..

Rano:geet,ganapathi bapa ko turmeric powder mein banaliya..

She came checking for geet..

Geets hands were all yellow..

Geet,ji maa..banarahi hoon..

roshini:rano..maan aagayi.geet tu b hi chal .ask him if he wants anything..i ll bring snacks n tea for him.

Geet:hmm..

She looked at her mami..but behind her she saw man talking with her family members..his eyes on hers..without making oblivious to others he was looking her..his eyes desperately waiting to meet her..

She chided herself..

Geet st:geet..u r dreaming again..he is not there..its ur imagination..u continue ur work..

She said to herself..

Roshini:geet im saying to u..

Rano:is geet ko mein kya karoon..damadji kya sochegi..pagli jaldi aa,,

Geet knotted her brows..even my ears are hearing only about him..

Geet:I ll wash my hands n come..she showed her coloured hands..

Roshini:jadi aana..

Geet nodded n walked backside..as usual she started to crib to her babaji..

Babaji,,ye kya hai...im seeing him every where..

She heared some sound n turned to see man following her..

Geet:dekha babaji,ab bhi wo mere peeche padi hai..nehi geet he is not following u..its ur imagination..if u see him he will vanish..no no..i wont turn..she nodded her head fast..she heared him chuckle..babaji..my eyes n ears..sab ko sirf wahi diktha hai aur suntha hai..

She was walking in a corner..she was suddenly pushed behind a pillar..geet blinked her eyes..maan was looking at her..

Geet:aa..p..

Maan:hmm mei..

She was still confused..

Geet:no geet..now u have started to feel him too

Her hands were on his chest..she slowly raised her hands n touched his cheeks..she can feel him..the colour on her hands printed on maans cheek..

Maan:.geet,what r u doing..

He was shocked..she applied turmeric on him..n his shirt too was spoiled ..

Geet :aap..aap..ap..sach mein ho..

She bluttererd n the reality was too stronger..she has messed him with the yellow colour..she closed her mouth in horror..colouring herself too..oh babaji...ye meine kya kardiya..aapki shirt..aapki chehra..

She panicked seeing him like that..

Mei saaf karthi hoon..

She forgot about her hands n tried to remove the stains with same hand making him more messed up..

Maan: held her hands on either side..enuf of ur cleaning..u r making me more colourful..

She looked at him..oh shit..ye meinei kya kardiya..i have made it more worse..

Tears formed her eyes..what will he say when all will ask him..she has soiled his respect..

Maan: left her hands..sry..is it paining..did I held u too strong..he checked her arms..

Geet nodded no..looking at floor in guilty..i am sry..i..i..

She sobbed..

I spoiled ur dress..ur face..meine..jaan boojkar nehi kiya..pls don't get angry..

Maan: pulled her to a loving hug..

Maan:pagli..issiliye rorahi ho..it will go when u wash it..but the problem is my shirt..

All have used to say her pagli..but from maans mouth it was cute n loving..she sniffed..

Geet:aap naraz nehi ho.

Maan:..no..bcoz its my fault to pull u so sudden..u got scared ..so its my mistake not urs..

She looked at him with her doe shaped eyes..

will any other man accept the mistake without blaming the women..she was again awed by his confession accepting his mistake ..making her ease..removing her guilt away..

He slowly kissed her tears..

Maan:sr y for making u cry..no tears..ok

Geet:hmm..aap sry math boliye..galathi tho meri bhi na..i messed u more..

maan:chup..bilkul chup..i told na..its not ur fault...i missed u..he genuinely said his part..

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Part 18

his hands on her lips created fire in both..there closeness affected them..he slowly rubbed his thumb pad on her lips..her body jolted in pleasure..her eyes closed automatically ..the reflection of her submission..

He cupped her cheeks n slowly bent towards her lips..he was desperate to take that..but before he close the distance..he heard the clearing of throat..

Meera was standing showing her back..maan left geet n stood a step back from her..

Meera:can I turn now..

Maan:..hmm..

He was caught off guard n was blushing...he is never a man like this..forgetting the surrounding..but the small partition for a day ,away from his wife made him crave for her..n what he did was in desperation ..he held her..hugged her n was about to kiss her in her house..oh god what if any elders of in laws have seen it..

But he least know the ladies have seen him pulling geet n left without their notice..as meera belonged to maans family they sent her to get them..

Meera turned..

erm..bhai aaj holi tho nehi hai..nor haldi.

she teased him..n geet want to hide somewhere..

Maan glared at meer..

Meera:ok ok...im sry..but..all are waiting for u both..

Maan:..what r u doing here..

Meera,yash is leaving tonight..so im staying a week in my mothers house..

Maan:oh..

Meera:geet give him soap n towel to clear himself..

Geet:yes di..

Tej came there with a new shirt..

Maneet were embarrassed..

Tej:hmm wo..we brought this for ur gift..u can wear this jiju..

Maan:..hmm..

He took it from him..

Tej:geet..go n help him..geet:hmm..

Meera:geet:hmm don't make bhai bath again..

Geet want the earth to swallow her..she was all sharam se pani pani..

But the truth was her heart was loving this small teasing sessions..its making her forget her past scars..the loneliness n crave for love..she indeed felt lucky to have man in her life..from when he entered her life she has some peace..some love..care..

Geet showed him the washroom..maan removed his shirt n gave to her..he was standing in his vest n geet was looking..hmm ..no..drooling at his perfect features..she has felt it..

Man saw her lost in him..he snapped his fingers before her..

Geet:huh..

Maan:.u can drool me how much u want..but in our house..our room ..i promise..i ll make u drool more than it..n in return I expect same from u..

He whispered huskily in her ears..his eyes were dark with desires,,geet blushed knowing his intentions..she gave the towel in his hands n ran away from there..she heard him laugh at her back..

She came to her room n leaned her back on the wall..she was smiling..her heart was beating fast..she hugged his shirt tightly..like crushing him with her.

Meera:erm..geet..tumei nehi jaana hai kya..bhai is waiting..

Geet:ji di..i want to..

She bit her tongue as she desperately answered she wants to go with him..

Meera:then come ..all are waiting for u..

Meera took geet..maan n geet did the pooja n took blessings from all elders..maan gave them the gifts he bought with him..n the sweets sent by his mother..geets family too gave him gifts n snacks were served ..all chatted for a while..they asked maneet to join them the next day ..

Maan was left inthoughts..he must check details of the project..n prepare ..on what basis the meeting would be..

Maan:hmm.sry..i have work to finish..but,.as its first time i ll try to come..or i will send geet with u.all.

He then explained his problem n he has to leave to Chennai..

Geets cousins were educated n they supported him..n the elders have nothing to say..

Nanaji:ok beta..atleast geet will be there..it will be fine...

Maan:..ji sure..

Maan looked at geet..her face fell off hearing it..he is leaving her alone..he did not think about her..she want to scream..cry..beg ..dont leave her alone..but she bite her lips..she never expressed her feels n how could she now..how can she expect him to listen to her..she controlled her tears ..she smiled at others as they all advised her to support him n behave gud when he is also not there..she could only nod..

No one noticed her drifting her in shell..but maan did..the spark in her eyes missed n pain was visible..

Maan looked at the time..its nearing 6..he has to drive..the roads were not gud n his mom has adviced to come earlier before its dark..

nanaji understood his situation..

Nanaji:ok beta..its getting late..now u both have to leave..

Maan:.ji daarji..maa too told us to return before its dark..its not safe to travel at night ..

Nanaji..yes beta..

Maan looked at geet..

Maan:..chalein..

Geet nodded..ji..

She bid bye to all..she searched her mom n found her in kitchen..she was standing showing her back to her..she must be happy as im leaving..geet thought..

She went near her n said..

Geet:maa..mei chalthi hoon..

She saw her mother in tears..

Though geet hated her mother she is not that harder to see her mother in tears..

Geet:maa..

Rano hugged geet n cried..

Geet was shocked

Geet:maa kya hua..

Rano wiped her tears..kuch nehi..she caressed her cheeks n kissed geets forehead..

Geet was surprised with the love..kiss was the last thing she expected from her mother...before she talk to her mother..roshini came..

Roshini..ye kya rano..damadji bahar kadi hai..aur maa beti ka pyaar abi tak khatam nehi hua..chal geet.atleast think about ur husband..he is ur first priority now..

She chided n took geet away from there..

Rano followed them..

Maan opened the passenger seat for geet n she sat there..maan took the wheels n maneet bid bye to the family..he drove off..the drove was silent..as geet looked at maan.she remembered him saying he will leave to Chennai..she looked away from him ..she wanted to talk to him..but she couldn't..maan was also having hard time..first thing was her sad face..he know the reason..he want to sooth her. n next was her nearness affecting him..he wanted to kiss her badly..he want to talk to her...both wanted to break the silence..but how..both are nervous..geet was fidgeting her pallu n the cold breeze made her hair fly..she was often settling it n maan was having tough time to drive..his concentration was on geet more than the road..he looked at her..she was nervous..n was chewing her lips ..the car was driving on a lonely road.both sides were only farms ..as the sun has set all has retired to their houses..the sight was so lovely..maan looked geet .she looked more beautiful .the car horn sound made him back.on opposite side a car came very close to their car.by a mere second he took left side n the cars tyre screeched n stopped suddenly making geet jerk in her seat..

Man turned to geet:tum teek ho na..

He asked in shock

Geet was in fear..she said weakly..hmmm

Maan slammed his arms on the steering..he never lost his control.but today he lost..he would have put both their lives on stake..he has parked the car by the side of a big banyan tree..he got down ..n stood at the side..he was tensed .he kept his hands on the tree trunk..n was cursing himself for lack of concentration..

.geet was worried with his behavior..she did not see the car which came opposite as she was busy admiring the sunset..n his sudden break feared her..but when he asked is she fine..she saw him worried n tensed..all over it the care for her..she slowly got down the car..she want to sooth him..

Geet came near him ..she lifted her hands to touch his shoulder..but withdrew it..

Then she called him..su..suni..ye..ji..

Maan turned n saw the tensed lines on her face..her fear was making her stammer..he calmed a bit..

Maan: im sry..

Geet wondered how many times he will ask sry..

He took steps towards her..she walked back till she hit her back on the tree..he trapped her by keeping his hands on either side...

They were covered behind the big tree..none can see them..maan looked around and confirmed it..they were alone..

He slowly tucked her hair starnds behind her ears..she had goose bumps..

He slowly pecked her lips..tasting her ..satisfying his hunger..geet was no less than him..as the lips met her body again cracked into fires..she held his shoulders tight n submitting herself..her stomach twirled along with a pain..she shrugged the pain which over took the pleasure..

He made her sit on the side stone n took a seat next to her..he took her hand in his..

Maan:sry..i want to say im leaving u here for a week..u must also understand my position..its work..very important for me..for our business..i told u before too..i have worked a lot to reach this height..i cant be irresponsible..mujei bhi bura lagraha hai..like u im also a human with feelings..how can I leave my wife..but my circumstances..i thought u will understand me..if u are grumpy I cant work in peace..i promise I will be back soon as soon as possible.if I leave u in delhi u will be alone..here maa,arohi kids all are here...geet pls..understand my...

Geet stopped him..ji..i..i.. now understand..aap..kab jaarahi ho..

Man sighed..im waiting for ur approval..the sooner I leave the sooner I will be with u..before our reception I want to be here n spend time with u..

Geet went silent..

Geet kuch tho kahaona..

Geet:I ll wait for u..

Man cupped her cheeks ..thats like my wife..i expect u to understand me..be my support in my every way of step..rahogi na..

His eyes had expectations..

Geet:ji..

Maan:ok..lets go now..or I don't know what I will do to u..

Geet stood up n her stomach pained a lot..her face changed suddenly..

Man:what happened..

Geet:ji..wo..erm..kuch nehi..

Maneet came back to their home..when man asked her to come in she requested him to send arohi or naintara..she denied to enter..maan was asking reasons..but she denied to say him..arohi who came to check them asked what the reason..n geet whispered in her ears..

Arohi:oh..ok..come with me..maan u go inside..she took geet with her by the side way..

Maan entered n sd asked

Sd:where is geet..

Man:she is with arohi..

arohi came there in a while..

arohi:erm maa..wo geet couldn't come inside..i have asked her to take bath she is waiting for change of clothes...i ll get her dress from ur room maan..

sd: arohi..tu bhulgayi kya..its her first time in our house..n she must be entering house with same rituals like she attended the puberty..

arohi:oops sry maa..mei sab tayari karthi hoon..

man who was first confused now was clear..geet got her periods..n she was too shy to say to him..

sd:maan:geet will be staying with me for this week..so,if u want u can go to Chennai..did u say her..

maan:ji maa..she accepted..hmm..if I can go..it will be gud if I leave tonight itself..i ll reach tomorrow morning delhi n will take the first flight to Chennai..

sd thought for a while..ok..but once again talk to geet..

Vicky:man if u r going tonight ill also come with u..i hv some college stuffs to work..

Maan:ok..

maan turned to pack his things..

sd stopped him..u understood na why I m saying this..

maan smiled..yes maa..husband n wife cant be together..

sd:samajdar ho mera shehzadha..

maan:maa..geets family has selected a n alliance for her cousin..they asked us to join tomorrow..if the alliance is gud they will fix tomorrow itself..what to do..

sd:no problem..i ll send arohi with geet..

maan: gud idea..

as he left,sd went out n saw arohi making geet bath in haldi water ..giving her new dress to wear..n gave her gingelly oil to drink.

Geet drank it making yucky face..arohi did arthi n made her enter the house..

She felt very shy with all rituals..

Sd:geet,for 3 days u must not go upstairs..u can be downstairs..n stay away from kitchen too..

Arohi whispered in geets ears..like u said in ur house u cant enter..here too we cant enter till 3 days..

Geet:oh..ok ..

Sd:u can stay in my room..

Geet s face fell down..little upset..her eyes searched for maan..

Man was nowhere to be seen..

Geet went to sd s room..

Sd:take rest..she gave her pillow n mattress..

As sd n arohi went..maan sneaked inside n shut the door..

Geet:ji..ye aap..

Man:shh..shh..ayistha bhol..aur ma aur arohi aahayegi..

Geet:par aap yahaan kya kar rahi ho,maane dekliya tho..

Maan:Geet:shhh .bohut bolthi ho..but at unnecessary times..let me tell u for what I came..

Geet:ji..

Maan slowly kept his hands on her stomach..she tucked it with a hard breathe..

Maan:will it pain too much for u these days..do u want any pain killer

He asked in utmost care..n geet was falling for him more..

Maan:arohi used to make the house upside down bcoz of pain..after angels birth she is off from pain n now she is normall..isilye poochrahi hoon..

Geet:no..only a little..

Geet said ..her face all red like an apple..this man knew about all things..

He lifted her chin n made him look at him..

Man:erm..geet..i want to say u one more thing..dont get shocked..

Geet looked at him..

Maan:erm..as we both cant be together..i think I ll go n finish my work..so I ll be soon..im planning to leave tonight..

Geet was blank..but his logic was right..

Maan:shall i..

He asked with expectation..

Geet :hmm..he kissed her forehead n cheeks..

Man"take care..i will miss u..i promise I will compensate this ..once I finish this I ll try to be with you fully for a week..n I wont leave u that time..

She blushed hearing it..

The knock on the door made them part away..

Maan:erm..maa hogi shayad..

He opened n saw arohi..

Arohi:man,u r supposed to stay away from her..from this room..

Maan:im going to stay away for 5 days.. ur bhabhi is so sweet..she gave me permission..n im leaving now..

Arohi s jaw dropped down..

She thought geet will crib cry n make him back from this tour..

Arohi:u accepted geet..

Geet :ji..haan..

Arohi:geet..if u let man this way na..he will make house as office soon..

Maan:sry dear,u forgot house is inside my office..

He looked at his watch..uff im running late..arohi,accompany geet to her house tomorrow..n im leaving my car here..i n Vicky are going in dev bhais car..

Geet looked at him longingly..maan n Vicky had their dinner n bid bye to all..maan mouthed bye to geet from entrance n she looked at him leaving her back..how will she be with her in laws without him..till now she felt secured ..she now realized his worth in her life..within this 3 days he has given her such a comfort that she felt him as her power inside her..he never let her feel alone in this new place..but now all looked scary without him..what will happen in the lack of his presence..will she be able to cope up with all..who will make her mistakes justified ..her hear bleeded within missing him..if this is called love..then she has fallen deeply in love with her husband..

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