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note:geet has finished her 12th..so,obviously she is 17+ n maan doesn't know about her age till now nor her in laws..maan has seen her only in sari's..which made her look matured..n this secret will be out soon..maybe within 6 r 7 updates..or before too..idk..let me type..

maneet 5 this part for u dear.
poo n prachi..love u girls..
u,me will be next as mohi n poo gave me the idea to proceed..love u too..
n my darling nalini..u too
im missing my devil ruby..hope she is having fun in her in laws n enjoying her married life..
last but not least..once more happy birthday deepa darling..😃

PART 16

geet closed the washroom door n took offher dress..she was feeling very shy to look at herself..he hasn't left an inch of her skin..she poured the first cup of water on her head..how can she forget the previous days incident..n today she was really touched by her husband..her skin burned as the cool water touched her skin..she couldn't feel her touch when she was applying the soap on her body..she can feel only him on her n her body burned..she got the itching feel between her thighs unknown to her..she closed her eyes n leaned on the wall..

what he is doing to me..i couldn't take him out of my mind.

She sighed n took a quick bath..she dried herself..when she wore her inner her mind again went to him..how he tried to take it off n how she has to fight with him..

He is nice..but I didn't like it..babaji..pls make him forget that..i don't want it to happen again..but I liked his ..umhh..his talks.haina babaji..

Oh! She did not want 2 say his touch made her feel special..

.he makes me feel gud..the loving words from his mouth..i ve never heared from anyone...how I slept I couldn't remember at all..

woh..he na..he drifted to me in some dream..that i fall asleep very peacefully..how could I sleep like this till 6.30..

maa hothi tho mujei bohut data padthi..will saasumaa scold me..

She wrapped her sari n came out hurriedly..she rushed to the room only to find her husband taking his dress for bath n kids behind him..oh!their talks made her blush..


Payal:maamu..what is that on ur back..

Ansh:don't u know..someone has scratched chachu..with nails..i think it must be between u both only..

P2:hum ne nehi kiya..it must be you..

ansh:no..you

When kids were fighting..maaneet were lost in their eyelock..geet couldn't see his naughty eyes which was saying its her who did it last night during their passion..

Geet looked everywhere than him..she reached the dresser n applied sindoor on forehead..

Maan was too lost when she dried her hair..that loose strand of hers falling near her pink lips..uff he want to taste it again..

Ansh:jute..only girls grow up nails..to apply nail polish...

P2:no..see we have no nails..mama says its bad to have nails..the dust will remain n it will go inside our stomach we will get stomach pain..

Ansh:u r bad girls. U r liers..

Maan was never like this.. watching them fight..but today he was too lost in his wife that he forgot what is going around him..

P2 was in tears..they pulled him making both maneet come from their la la land..

Maan immediately looked at them

maan:Kya hua princess..why are u crying..

Payal:maamu..u say na..we are gud girls..we did not scratch u..

Maan was embarrassed..he took his shirt n wored it before someone saw him like that..

He took payal n palak n kissed them..no baby..maamu got hurt..its not u baby.

P2:say 2 ansh..he is scolding us..

Maan gave a stern look to ansh for making p2 cry..he looked down n said

Ansh:sry..

Maan smiled..

Maan:gud..now shake hands 3 of u..no more fightings..

The 3 shook hands..

Ansh:chachu..aap aaj push up nehi kiya..u know we came insearch of u..but arohi bua took us to play with them..

Maan thanked his sister mentally..but now he is scared of the teasings..when he will go down..

Geet platted her hair loosely so that her hair will dry soon..

She came to maan..

Geet:s..u..n..i.y..e..j..i..

For maan it was again a sweet melody song like her name..whenever she calls him like that..nowadays it was rare to see wife calling hubby like that..even naina called his bro by name...n so was his friends wife too..

Maan:haan ji..sunraha hoonji..

Geet bit her lips as he teased her n more than it the 3 kids giggled listening their lovey dovey talks..

Geet:wo..mei..mei..

Ansh:chachu..chachi bakri bangayi kya..mei mei bolrahi hai..

Maan wacked his back head..chup badmash..bolo geet..

Geet:hmm..mei..neeche jaarahi hoon..aap ko kuch chahiye..

Maan:no geet..ill have my coffee down..ive not brushed yet..

Geet:tho..mei..jaon..

Even after he said he don't want anything,She was asking permission to leave the room..or she was expecting something from him..she was confused with her own behavior..she took slow steps n turned back one last time before stepping out of the room..may be she expected him to stop her..maan smiled as she left the room..he would have done much more than what she expected..but before kids he cant cross his limits..even it is hard for him after last night..his heart n body was craving for her..he sighed..

Maan:ok..u 3 go n play..i'll fresh up n join u soon..

P2/ansh:o..k..i..esss..

they shouted unison n ran out of room..

Geet came down n took blessings from mil..n sd looked at geet keenly..geet kept her eyes down as her mil observed her..

Geets st:is she angry on me..i woke up late ..ab mein kya karoon..sry boldethi hoon..im wrong na..

Geet:erm..wo..maa..sry..i..dont know..how I slept..yese kabi nehi hoga..

Sd called her near n kept her hands on her head..n blessed her..

Sd:its ok..have ur coffee n be ready..ur family is on way..after breakfast u r leaving to ur house for pagphere..

Geet nodded n went to kitchen..

Geet:Kaka:shall I help you

Nakul:no bahu..sab tayari haogayi..u take coffee for maanbabu..n have urs..

Geet:ji..

Geet was happy as no one scolded her..but she did not know sd found the love bites n was happy that they had started their life..n so that they woke up late..

Maan came down n saw his friends gaze on him..they were scanning him from top to bottom as he has grown two horns in a night..maan tried to ignore them n move..but their laser eyes were following him.

Maan stopped n looked at them

Maan:kya hai yar..yese kyun dekrahi ho..

Hiten:did we say anything

All :no..

Prem:then y u r thinking we r looking at u..specially ur glow in face..

All laughed n maan know they have just started n this is not going to be an end..

Adi:waise..itni jaldi kyun maan..pagphere rasam tho bhabhikeliye na..

Maan glared at them..

Prem:hmm do u have any idea joining bhabhi..

All chuckled..

Maan:bas bhi karo yaaar..i want to fresh up..

Trio:ohh..oh..oh..no escape today..waise..tumhara chehra sab kehtha hai..raath neend puri nehi hui..

Hiten:waise..i will suggest you something..you better go back to your room n sleep for some more time..

Prem:wo kya haina..ur eyes are red..which shows ..hmm..hmm.hmm..

Kuch tho hua hai...kuch hogaya hai..tumm,tumm..they were replacing words of their choice n teasing maan..

They all started to sing the song in chorus...making man blush beet root red..

Hiten:erm..my dear friend..till now I was thinking only girls blush..but today if we keep a competition between boys n girls..u will win for sure..chehra dekh apna..pura ka pura lal hogaya..n ur ..

Prem..:Chalo we are descent boys..we wont say anything..

They again broke into laughter ..

Maan touched his cheeks n face n checked in mirror..his eyes were red n lips swollen..maan rolled his eyes..scratched his back of head n smiled sheepishly..

Maans st:when Did this happened. geet bit my lips..i don't remember it.

As his savior the kids came running

Ansh:chachu..dadi is calling u..she asked are u ready..

Maan:5 min..i'll come..say to dadi..

maan rushed to freshup..he smiled himself thinking how geet slept at the peek time..

Jalli..

He came wiping his hair to his mother..

She Took the towel n started to dry his hair..

Geet came their with his black coffee..n gave him.

Geet:maa ..shall I bring coffee for u..

Sd:don't want beta..i had it now only..

Maan was looking at his wife lovingly..his gaze burned her skin..n her blood rushed to her cheeks making her red..

Sd:maan..geet will now go to her maayka..

Maans face went pale..he must be away from her..

Sd:you both keep the gifts ready..which u should take when u go to take her home by evening..sunrahi ho na maan..

Maan:ji maa..all are ready..i ll just go n check if the driver is ready..n has washed the car..

Sd:ok go..but before that dress up..ur inlaws family is coming..so u must look presentable.they must also know how handsome u look even at home...kyun shehzadha..

Maan shied..this word always makes him feel special..though it is said 2 tease him..geet was awed by the mom n son..she has never seen such a lovely scene in her house..this is too different for her..

Sd called her..geet beta

Ji maa..

She came running to her..

She was scared like a frightened kitten..

Sd:I told u already..u r like my daughter..so no need to get scared..after breakfast change into a better sari with heavy works..u r going 2 ur house first time after marriage..n wear some more jewels..in house u r simple its ok..but u must keep ur respect of ur sasuraal in ur maayka..

Geet :ji maa..

Soon tej n his dad came n was welcomed warmly..with love n respect..they gave them the sweets they bought..geet came running down..but she stopped at the stairs n chided herself for running in enthusiasm as all looked at her..

Meera came to her n nodded its ok..

Geet came n took blessings from her father ..

Tej was though answering for the formal questions,his eyes were on geet..he felt a little change in her..

He couldn't find it what is it..

All sat for breakfast n tej n maan sat next to each other..

Whenever geet served to them tej noticed the change of colour in her face n the small smile creeping her lips as maan asked something 2 serve him..or her brother..it was silent language..but tej understood geet is happy n the smile on her face is becoz of his jiju..

He looked maan with respect..

Maan:what..why r u seeing me..do u want anything else..geet..serve puri to ur bro..

Tej:oh no..jiju..im full ..

His heart said:im full of joy..though im against this marriage..now no more..this is the best thing happened in my sisters life..his throat chocked..n eyes moisted..

He glanced geet..the kids were running behind her..n geet saw them not eating..so she sat n started to feed all 3 saying stories..n they took without any tantrums..maan was looking at geet..tej n maans friends n all were looking at maan n his gaze..they cleared the throat making his trance broke..

Maan:erm wo..mei..bache ko dekrahi thi..

Yash:oh..is it so bro..we didn't ask u..

Maan:krish kahaan hai..

Yash:meera ke pass..

Vicky: bro don't try to change the topic..ok..

Savitri asked geet to have breakfast n get ready to go..

Geet had her food without intereset..something inside was stopping her..she don't want to go..it sounded funny..it was she who hate the marriage stuff n sasural..but now she don't want 2 go..she touched her mangalsutr..this one thing changed my whole thoughts..

She washed her hands n went to room..maan has already escaped from the group n was waiting for geet in room..

Geet closed the room door n started to remove her sari without noticing maan present there..maan stood paralysed seeing her in day light..along with it she was cribbing to babaji..

Geet:babaji..kuch karona..i don't want..

Her words struck in her throat as maans broad palm slided on her bare waist..she was undoing her blouse n maan did the rest..

Geet moaned as he placed numerous kisses on her valley..his hands roaming on her body..geet was feeling her knees week..she clutched maans shoulders..maan bite her taught nipple over her bra..she hissed in pain..

Maan stopped n took her lips..it was so different from before like he was asking her not to go..his hands holding her slim waist possessively..

The knock on the door brought them back..she looked at him with longing eyes..he said like he read her eyes..

I ll come soon to take u home back..

Meera:geet..do u want help..she asked standing outside..

Geet:no di..im ready..2 min aathi hoon..

Meera:ok..

As geet changed maan weared her jewels..he saw the love bites..he took the medicine n applied over it..he wore her the rest of jewels..

Geet:its heavy..

Maan:I know..but maa will prefer to see u like this. For the respect of family .sometimes we must think about others happiness n give up our comfort..when u reach ur home remove it n when u come back u can wear it..

Geet:ji..

Maan looked her from head to toe..she was looking beautiful..

Maan:beautiful..

Geet reached the door..

maan pulled her n hugged her tight..she too hugged him back..their both souls needed to be with each other..but the rituals were stopping them..both parted n geet came down followed by maan..maan asked his driver to drop them in Amritsar n come back..

Geet bid bye to all..n went with her family..

She looked back at maan before she stepped inside the car..she felt she is leaving something there n going ..

Its her heart which she is yet to find out..

Amritsar..

Geet was welcomed n all asked how she is..how is her sasuraal..her devar..devrani..nanand..n how is her husband..did they all behaving gud with her n all..geet was tired answering all..

The rituals were done n geet was chatting with her dadaji..maamu n their sons..

Rano was with ladies..geet entered kitchen..

Geet:maa mei karthi hoon..

She was used to it n she said casually like all normal days..rano took the veg from her n kept aside..

Rano:u sit..im here na..ill do all..tu aaram se bet..

She hesitatingly asked..

Rano:waise ..tu khush haina..

Geet:hmm..

She found her mothers behavior weird..she was never used to this normal voice n caring words from her mother..n she has always made her work..today she made her sit n she herself doing the work..

But geets hmm was not the word they expected..rano eyes roshini..

Rano:bhabhi..poochiye na..

Roshni:rano..mei..na..how can i..

Rano:then how can i..ye ladki bhi na..jo hum poochrahi hai uski seethe jawaab nehi dethi..hmm ye koi jawab hai kya..

Some more relatives joined helping hands to rano..

Roshni:ok..ill ask her when we are alone..

Ladies:geet ye haar bohut khubsurat hai..ye tumhari maa nei di thi kya..

Geet:nehi kaaki..this is gifted by my sister in law..this bangles by mil..for making sweet..

The ladies were questioning geet n she was answering them with pride unknown to her..

She was able to answer the questions they asked about khurana family,man nhis carreer...she was happy as maan told her everything about him..

Rano..geet beta..y don't u change n sleep for some time..

Geet:ji maa,,

She went inside n changed n sat there..sleep ..how easy was it to say..but here her heart was aching..its been 2 r 3 hrs she is away from her husband n she is already missing him..thinking about him she hugged herself n cudded to her knees..his thought makes her body feel current..hmm..his kiss..she touched her lips..how hungrily he took her n said she tasted honey n he will suck everything from it..the sweet pain started to torture her thoughts n body..

Roshini came there..n saw her lost..

Roshini:geet..geet..

Geet came out of her la la land..

Geet:Ji maami..

Roshini:Just came to talk to you..

Geet:Ji..

Both talked here n there..

Roshini:geet..erm tu wahaan khush haina..

Geet:hmm

Roshini:how is ur inlaws behaving with u..

Geet:nice

Roshini:tumhara pati

Geet:ji..wo bhi.

Roshini:tu uski saath..erm..khush haina..

Geet:hmm..

Roshini:wo ermm..tu..aur..tumhara pati..

Geet looked at her maami who is shuttering..she has never seen her like that..isei kabse bolnei mei problem hua..

Geet:maami..aap..kya poochrahi ho..

Roshini sighed..

Roshini:u both are happy with each other na..are u comfortable with him..

Geet looked at her ..why she is asking same que again n again..

Roshini:did u have pain..

She looked at geets exposed neck which was now visible as her heavy jewelries were removed..geets face flushed now thinking what her maami is asking..she pulled her sari up to her neck..covering the love bite..

Geet:st:uff maami..why is she asking did his bite pains me..doesnt she knew it will pain..

Roshini:do u need any medicine..

Geet:hmm wo..he applied..

Roshini was thinking something else n geet was saying about her love bite..😉


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wrong time to stop..hehe..will geet come 2 know what her maami is asking...n maan !!!misssing his wife..3rd night kya hoga

girls u all r faster than me..i was editing post n u r asking where is update..lolz..now u can read..its done..

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Update Kaha Hain?😕
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beautiful update di
love it sooo much
poor geet ko pta nhi hai ki kya ho rha hai usee abhi bhi ek incompleteness hai 😳 😳 😳
😉 😉 😉 😉
geet ko nhi jaa na tha bt kya kare rasam hai yto jna to padega na

aur maami aur geet ki conversation padh kar to mera has has ke bura haal ho gya 😛 😆 😆 😆😆

poor maami kya baat kar rhi hai aur geet kya baat kar rhi hai 😆 😆😆 😆

wating for nxt👏 👏 👏👏
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Originally posted by: -indu-

Update Kaha Hain?😕

editing the post yaar..😉😃😆
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intazaar nahi hoti...
edit jaldi karo na
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Originally posted by: valli22

editing the post yaar..😉😃😆



Will be waiting😉
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lovely update di...
The kid with their innocent que made maneet enbarass...
Maan is blushing he he he...
Geet is scared of their closeness...
Manneet longing to be gether...
Geet missing maan even for 2-3 hrs...
Geet's mami and her que...poor soul couldnot understand it...
Wat is next...
Continue soon...
Waiting...
Edited by sri91 - 11 years ago
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I dont understand why does the elders ask such awkward questions ??

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