SWARON SS- ETERNAL LOVE - Page 10

Originally posted by: Ria_SwaRon

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Wow, wow, wow... This is totally a-m-a-z-i-n-g

I read all the chapters in a go!

Firstly.. A bow to u for the concept...

It simply is intriguing! I really was reading with speed of ninja so that I know the whole story...

And gurl! U update quick.. Mujhe bhi sikhade... I update in next era...🤣

The Swayam in the story is adorable...

Waiting for futher updates.

You write really wonderfully. I am falling in love with it.

- Ria.

thankuu so much didu🤗
aapko accha laga im very happy😳

Heya behna! 😃

Originally posted by: --MiNi--

Heya behna! 😃

See i am finally commenting! 😳

So coming to the updates, chal chapter 1 se start karte hai!

CHAPTER 1:

Um, it was magical! Just love it. Sharon and Swayam Friendsbook Friends😉 Ohh!!! sweet! But this Sneha, Mahn I hate her, itni jalan? 🤢 HUH!!! I loved sharon's charecter in this SS its so pure, innocent, and Shy 😳😳 Loved the first update!!!

CHAPTER 2:

Superb Update! 👏 Loved it. Aur yeh Sneha, kya problem hai uski? Main Use Ek Maaru toh tujhe bura nai lagega na, 😆 Swayam ke paas jaane ki immat kaise hui uski? Huh, 😡 But Ahhh, Swayam,😳 Use pata chal gaya, ki wo USKI SHARON nahi haiii 😛 And Sharon Ne Use text kiya, that she will be late, That was the best part, Sharon's Smart 😉 All in all, And Powerpack Update!!

CHAPTER 3:

I Just loved, the way you showed swayam's emotions in this one.!👏 The Fear of loosing HIS Sharon, Was beautifully penned! Loved it. And Sneha's Guilt,... Hmmm aacha hua, use apni galti ka ehsaas ho gaya, warnaagar wo SWARON ne beech mein aai hoti na, toh I would Have Beaten Her To Death 🤢😆😉 But now i Just hope ki Sharon ko kuch na hua hoo.. Please! _/\_

Chapter 4:

It was simply A-W-E-S-O-M-E! i JUST LOVED IT!😛 Loved thetalk between Swayam and the Nurse! it was sooo Touching! 😭 Loved the update! Thank God1 sneha chali gaii waha seee! haash! 😉 And, the letter!!! It was just so so MA-G-I-C-A-L! 👏 tHE BLEND OF EMOTIONS was superbly penned! Loved it!!!

CHAPTER 5:

Oficially, It was the best update of alll!! Haaayee, So ROmantic ! 😳 It was just adorable! simple, yet effective! Loved it! 👏 Swayam taking care of sharon, wow that was pure bliss to read! Love how he Kissed her forehead! 😳😳😳 Haaye main mar jaawan! But Sharon Ke dad, ko kya baat karni hai swayam se? 😕 I hope Shaorn ke dad SWayam aur Shaonr Ke rishte Ki baat Karne wale ho, au Chat mangni aur pat byaah ho jaaye unkaa..😆😆😆

LOL. but i super duper loved the update!!!!

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So, All in all i M Super loving your SS. Sorry Pehle comment nahi kar paai thi, 😭

But, Baby, ek please, Next update Bada wala dena!! please? 😔

Ek bada wala update chahiye mujhe!!!!!
Mere liye itna to karegi na? (emotional Blackmail 😆)

Thanks For the PM. Jaldii Update Karrr!!!! 😉

Love You Behna, My baby! 😳

-MiNi 😉

tu kuch bole aur mein na karu..!!
pagli chal next update will be dedicated to you..!!😆
thanxx alot for such a long and lovely comment u really made my day..😳
love you
teri behna

Originally posted by: anandita

thankuu all..

Originally posted by: TylerRosewood

Welcome My Drama Queen

Good Storyline

Liked the plot but disliked ur lazuiness in updating...

srishti pagli mar mat..!
and welcum tujhe nai mujhe kehna chahiye..😆
jo ofcouse mein nai kahungi...😛
hated ur cmnt as well as ur laziness of writing it..😵

Holla peeps howdy?!😆 im f9..!! hope aap bhi honge and bhule nai honge mujhe..😉 so finally xams are over and m free cheers 🥳 and so i present an update which is dedicated to my chatter box and behna mini..love you baby and her u go tada...!😆!

Eagerly waiting for long comments and loads of like from my sweet readers..!!! love you all and you guyzz are the best thakuu so much for motivating me always..!!! 😳

Precap:- Sharon finally gets conscious again and encounters swayam who takes care of her . Swayam meets sharon's dad and he asks her to come-out..he tells sharon and goes out...

Chapter 6-

As soon as they went out of Sharon's sight the nurse arrived and handed Mr.Raiprakash a letter and he said :

Ga: (handling the letter) Beta isse pehle mein kuch kahun please I want you to read it.

Swayam took the letter from him and opened it, it read:

hey Swayam and Hi Sharon,

I am sorry Swayam job hi meine kiya uske liye..I am sorry apne badle ke sapne mein apne dil ko ansuna kar diya..mein woh Sharon jo best hai..jo deserving hai ..jo perfect hai usse jal kar usse tabah karna chaha dil ki jagah dimag ko suna ..I am really sorry Sharon ..tune mujhpe itna trust kiya aur meine tere sath dhoka kiya tera pyaar cheene ki koshish ki but mein ye bhul gayi thi ki pyaar dil se hota hai aur dil hmesha apne hamsafar ko pehchaan jata hai dhund leta hai jaise Swayam ne tujhe pehchana ..woh sirf tera hai aur uskein pyaar ne meri aakhein khol di ..Hosake toh mujhe maaf kar dena bestiee..!

Swayam bolte hue sharam aa rahi hai par haan mein Sharon ki bestfriend hu ..yaa shayad thi..Uske perfection se jal ke aur usse hamesha peeche reh jaane ki chidh ne mujhe ye karne par majboor kar diya ..Badla lena chahti thi usse aur kafi had tak mein successful bhi hogayi thi but uske accident ne mujhe meri life ki sabse badhi galti karne se rok diya..haan Swayam ..tumhare jaane ke thodhi hi der baad mujhe Sharon ke caretaker Raamukaka ka phone aaya aur unhone mujhe sab bataya usko khone ke dar aur naa papane ki chinta ne mujhe ahsaas dilaya ki woh kya ahmeyat rakhti hai meri life mein..mere dil mein naa jane kyun par ajib sa dard hua mujhe aur meine saari jagah pata kiya par who kahin nai mili phir tum aaye aur tumhare dil ne tumhare pyaar ne dhunda usse..

Hamesha usse ditch karne ka guilt rahega mere man mein par ek baat ki khushi bhi rahegi ki kismet ne usse tumhare jaisa saathi diya hai aur mujhe itti badhi galti karne se rok liya..
Bas ab aur kuch nai bolungi ..Inn sabki uski aur tumhari zindigi se dur jaa rahi hu..Uska khayal rakhna , usse kabhi bhi akele mat chodhna aur usse bahut pyaar karna ..

Ho sake toh mujhe maaf kardena...

Love,
Sneha

Swayam was feeling sad as well as hurt ..He was thinking about Sharon ..in this condition how will she bear this pain..How hurt she will be and this will definitely affect her health ..Seeing his expression Gautam said:

Ga: Beta ..Sharon ke barein mein soch rahe ho..?

swayam just nodded and looking down he said in a worried tone-"hum usse ye nai bata sakte"

Ga: (smiled ) mujhe pata hai isiliye meine tumhe bahar bulaya tha aur ..

Sw: ( looking towars him) aur..

Ga: Swayam I don't know ki tum kya sochoge ..Ready ho yaa nai ..par beta Sharon ki condition tumhare aane se pehle critical thi aur tumhare aane ke baad bahut improvements hue hai..Swayam Sharon meri zindigi hai..mera sab kuch ..(Folding his hands) kyat um usse shaadi karoge..?

Sw: (holding his hands) yeh aap kya kar rahe hai uncle please aisa mat kariya ..Yeh toh meri life ka sabse accha decision hoga..mere princess mere pyaar meri zindigi se shadi karna..Ofcourse I will Uncle uske alava mein aur kisi ke barein mein soch bhi nai sakta par..

Ga: par..?

Sw: par meri Sharon unique hai special hai ..Uncle agar aap bura na mane toh mein Sharon ko special feel karana chahta hu..Humari first date jaise plan kit hi meine vaise hi usko dena chahta hoon..Mein usko pyaar dekar uska pyaar pana chahta hoon..Usko propose karke uska decision jaana chahta hoon ..
I don't want to impose anything on her..

Gautam smiled and nodded ..He kept his hand on his head and said: "I am proud of you beta..meri Sharon bahut khushkismat hai ki usse itta pyaar karne vala ladhka mila hai.."

Swayam nodded in negative and said:" Nai uncle mein bahut khushkismat hoon ki mujhe iss duniya ki sanse khoobsoorat ladhki mili hai ..Andar se bhi aur bahar se bhi.."

Gautam smiled at him and left while swayam went back to the room to find the most beautiful girl on this earth , his angel sleeping peacefully on the bed..He knew it was the affect of the medicines but a smile crept on his lips he came near her and kissed her hand sat beside her on the stool admiring her and soon fell asleep too..

A few days went by and sharon's health bettered and she got discharged while Swayam decided to stay in Mumbai for somemore time .that night he called her mother and told her everything that happened and all his planning..She immediately agreed they had a small talk and he told her how much he loves her..her mother smiled and after advising him hung up the phone as it was getting late..



Next morning Swayam was woken up by the bright and beautiful rays of sunlight peepin through the window of the hotel room. He rubbed his eyes and sat up to fing the ohh sweet morning message of her ladylove he smiled and opened it, it read:

Hey swayu..Good morning ..I know tum abhi so ke uthe hoge ..Aur agar so rahe ho toh bhi koi baat nai cz job hi ho I am the first one to wake you up..and know what I can't wait to see that million dollar smile playing on your lips,,So jaldi jao and open the door of you room..

Swayam gave a confused smile and opened the door to fing a gift box a beautiful one packed in a blue and silver wrapping paper and a note on it..He opened the note, it read:

A small present for you my love ..Hmm so now open the present..

Swayam opened the present and found something that really left him awestruck a beautiful guitar. He has always loved to play guitar and it has been a longtime since he has played it because of his work in the office and now in Mumbai he didn't had one .but now he was really very happy..He took it out of the box and admired it. For him it was really the most amazing present he has ever received. He went to his bed and immediately called Sharon.

Here Sharon smiled and picked up the phone but before she could say anything Swayam began:

Sw: Ohh shar thankuu ..thankuu so much this is the best surprise of my life and the best present I have ever got ..I really don't have words to describe how happy I am just now..

Sharon smiled and said-"mein bahut khush hu tumhe ye pasand aya.."

Sw: pasand nai..bahut bahut pasand aya ..vaise tumhe kaise pata chal ki I love playing guitar..?

Sh: tumne bataya..

Sw: meine bataya..?

Sh: haan remember..umm the first day we had a chat..

Sw: ohh yes man..How Can I forget..

Sharon laughed and said -" accha who chodho ..umm swayam I wanted to ask you ki kya aaj tum mere sath Mumbai ghumoge..?"

Sw: wow shar nice Idea ..Ofcouse

Sh: ohkay then will meet you at 12:00 noon..

Sw: Ohkay done yahi hotel mein..

Sh: hmm bye love you...

Sw: bye love you too my love..

Sharon smiled and hung up the phone and then to themselves the both cried in Unison-" uff ye 12:00 kab bajenge?"





so guys this is it..this time bahut long chappy hai so I want long comments and more likes..
minu meri jaan meri behna I hope tu satisfied hai..aur tujhe accha lage..
Res for Mini(meri behna) and Veronica( meri bestiee)🤗

Regards,
Anandita..

Awesome update 😊

first hug for updating🤗

heyy sissy very nic chap

loved it...

the dad nd swayam convo was good...

nd sharon gifts guitar to swaym...

nd i m also waiting of tere 12 kab baje ge