Hamari Jaan..Akdha SS

please continue...i can't wait ...update pls😊

Really good ...continue and pm me 😊

EAGERLY WAITING FOR NEXT PART👏👏

Cont soon n pm me if u can

continue soon dear! beautiful update...
...loved itt!!

Originally posted by: Liana.Wink

My SS (Short Story)

Hey Guys! I Must Appear To Be Newbie..But I Am Actually A Very Old One..I Was Very Active On D3 Forum..And I AM Quite Silent Reader Here..I Had 2 FF On D3 Forum(Which I Had Discontinued)

I Wanted To Write One For My Akdha..This One Is A Short Story..Everything Is The Same..
I am writing from when Akdha got married..and the night they spent in sambhar..when jodha asked to give her a separate khema..

Guys I Also Want To Tell You..I Am A Rajput Myself..My Name Is Sheetal Rajput..And I Can Understand that Jodha-Akbar are not fictionous..So I Want to make it clear..that what ever I write is totally fictinous..It has no relation with the real life places,situations & characters..

Also..This SS Will Have Merely 4-5 parts..

I Hope You Would Like It!

Hamari Jaan

Jodha was sitting on the middle of her huge,soft,round bed..In her khema..and a train of thoughts running in her mind that what has happened to her life..what has she become..
A "Toy" ??
She Could Have died for her Amer..But getting married in the mughal kingdom that too to "The Jallad" whom she hated the most..

This made a lone tear trickle down her eyes..
She kept on blaming her "Bad Luck"
Her Train Of Thoughts were interrupted by The rattling sound of footsteps which she heard outside her khema..She expected that the "Jallad" was here..and the thought of him forcefully imposing him on her made her shiver..However..She collected the power to speak

Jodha - "Kon hai wahan??"

And suddenly saw a figure in dark..there was someone..a man..Maybe "Shehensha"

But he couldn't be it..She could make out easily..very easily..this man's physique was very different from the "Jallad"

Then Who Could Be It??
Is It Safe For Her??
Is Something Wrong Going to happen??
Is She In Some Danger??

For Knowing these answers..Please read the next update..And do tell me..how is it? and should I continue??

~Sheetal~

loved it. continue. and PM me if possible

amazing start dear...cant wait to read more
continue soon...
thanx for the pm