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Posted: 12 years ago
What a start to the chapter, HATS OFF to you Lin. The way you play with the words.
The three man reminded me of three Kings that came with gifts to see baby Jesus.
Here Khushi is preparing those gifts before the baby is due.
I did a small research on this, and thank you for mentioning this. I am updating my knowledge as well. And i found this in one of the sites. Here's the link
The pomegranate is a symbol of the resurrection and the hope of eternal life

So I didn't know that these three were Prakash brother's not until i read this line.
The third man opened the door that stood behind him and the first man walked out followed by the second man.
Obvious the third man was JP right?😉
And who is Nalini, was she related to Lordy?
Oh ho, even i will take ages to master that art.. Too complicated.
Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Ipkkndrokzz4eva

I feel that there is going to be a danger to Khushi's life and Arnav will come and save her while she is in her village.. And that is how they will meet each other again.

BTW nice chapter, even I used to dine like that once.
I have a collection of culinary at my home and I think the spoon for sop shown in here has a small head.

Anyways I love the part I think what Khushi did was splendid.
I love her.

One think can you give a description of the gowns she wears because it makes me easier to imagine her.

BTW what do I need to sign the parchment? :D



Hey, I'm Jo. Welcome dear. For your name to go on the CAC parchment, you got to pledge an oath
Here's the link to it.

This is all you got to do and Lin will add your name on the CAC parchment.
I, (your username/you can give yourself any fantastical name-male or female), present myself as one among the Circle of Arhasian Comrades and gather at this inn, awaiting the unraveling of Aquiline's narration of the tale of the Beasts and the Bleeding Roses.



Edited by Jo_Pinchy - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: hoopoe

Rabba ve Arhasia... ❤️

"Nobody sees anybody truly but all through the flaws of their own egos. That is the way we all see ...each other in life. Vanity, fear, desire, competition-- all such distortions within our own egos-- condition our vision of those in relation to us. Add to those distortions to our own egos the corresponding distortions in the egos of others, and you see how cloudy the glass must become through which we look at each other. That's how it is in all living relationships except when there is that rare case of two people who love intensely enough to burn through all those layers of opacity and see each other's naked hearts."
...
Tennessee Williams

P.S. Hearty congratulations to the Story teller and all Arhasians for setting foot in the eighth room of our beloved inn... May the LOVE and TRUST we share here keep growing and growing... God bless ARHASIA...🤗

P.P.S. Shass, the Yin-Yang picture of the VERMILLION BIRD (a variant of legendary PHOENIX) and the WHITE TIGER in the above edit is specially for you... 😉 Do include this angle too when you make your post on Yin-Yang.
P.P.P.S I hope all is well in Arhasia... Though I catch up with the updates regularly, im missing the discussions here... 😔 I miss this place very much... 🤗




Rabba ve Hp...🤗🤗🤗

1st--Fantastic quote..so fitting for these two.👍🏼

2nd-- Amen @ the PS.

3rd--after your mind blowing posts n quotes you have started editing too??😲 but hey,you excel at that too..👏

4rth--am hiding for so long from that yin-yang post but every time..every single time you show up on the thread,you just wink at me n say ''yin-yang'' n am all;
''oh man!! not again?!!'' 😕

the yin-yang concept is so vast n complex that am fearful to attempt it,rather,i dont have words to express my real opinion over it...n you know that..besides i wanted you to do it n was waiting for the day you would write it down but today i realized that i'll really not be able to get rid of your meaningful smirks n winks until i'll write it*shakes head*...so i'll do it for you dear.

5th--- Arhasia misses you alot too my sweeto pie... we are counting days till you return to us. love to nandhu.. muah.

🤗🤗


PS; i cant write so much in the same post so will write separately on vermillion bird n white tiger...

PPS; i'll do the yin yang but then you'll do ''the girl with bleeding tears''.. i have bump into some material,will send you the references n pics later..😉

Edited by shass - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
AM IN GREEN N BOLD..

(SOULY...LET YOUR GM REST)



Originally posted by: A_Soul

Chapter 187: The Letter from the Village

As usual too good update
Perfect reflection of buaji's personality in her letter.. Jovial & Wise.. loved it!!


ME TOO😃


... but she felt so overjoyed for no recognizable reason- as though she been loved and admired for a long time...probably at a distance.

Aaahhaa... you never miss to leave that special kind of smile on my face, linny!

Little moj-masti of sister is delighted and what a start of latter.. super like it..!!

"Well..." Payal tried to defend her forte, "Cuddling my husband is one matter, but imagine Buaji cuddling yours..."

Ha ha ha... if it happens so there would million dolloer expression of Lordy..!


EVEN I WAS IMAGINING IT..LOLZ.😆

There is nothing one gains from sitting with a sour face on. Life turns its tables, and you need to turn yourself round as well or it would be impossible to reach the dish. You get what I mean, girls?

Linny at her best to give life lesson... Fab..!!

We can only consider the prospect of licking it off the table and we cannot consider even that if the table is not clean enough.

Uff... rest every thing was fine but this one was heavy buaji... I read twice, thrice even four times but I still doubt I understood it!! Khushi did you get that?


SO TRUE SOULY..I WAS LAUGHING ALONG WITH REGISTERING THE BUAJI-STYLE WISDOM..😆😆😆😆

Waiting impatiently for that day,

Ouch.. if their husbands are also going to accompany them in staying then we all too waiting impatiently...


OOOHH..EXCITING ISNT IT?? IT'LL HELP LORDY HUMBLE DOWN A LITTLE BY OUR VERY OWN KHUSHI...REVENGE OF THE INNOCENT ANGEL !!


P. P. P. P. P. S. I am stopping this letter now in all certainty before Master Happy also comes into the house and adds another P. P. S. to the train of P. P. S.s the letter is already tailed with.

Linny ki jai ho...!!!

Buaji.. did our sanu (reader Sansu) dear give you the idea of not stop train of P.P.P.P.P.P.S.s?


I LAUGHED SO HARD ON THE PPS's , THEY WERE DAMN FUNNY PLUS I AM SURE BUAJI HAS MET SANZ SOMEWHERE...😆

"Nani breaks all the rules, Kushi!" she announced and Nani frowned childishly, "They are the rules of my time. This generation knows nothing of how classy and perfect chess rules had once been!"

Oye naughty nani...!

Kushi's eyes shone cleverly, "It would most certainly have to be my very mysterious husband."

Words Highlighted nly for Shassy - the jaani dushman to pay attention. *wink*


TERA DIL TORNEY KA DIL TAU NAI CHA RAHA BUT SOULY,WAKE UP!! SHE WAS TALKING ABOUT ''HER'' HUSBAND.*ROLLS EYES*

Kushi added hastily, "I meant I am trying to find ways to get him to soften a bit."

Soften a bit in context of...?? Ok I stoped my sane mind *tongue out with wink*

Kushi frowned and, reaching out her hand, moved a white pawn towards the fallen king.

The one who don't know anything about chess even though this line touched to her heart & mind, then it says a lot about your writing linny...
You mentioned defeated & fallen king & then white pawn moved towards king..
are you pointing that he is already defeated by... his past? And khushi is going towards him, to be with him, to start the game, to make him win and stand strong.


EXCELLENT DECODING DARLING!!👏

"Worry not, Nani, the game is only about to begin. And for this game, I will make the rules."

JUST LOVED THIS LINE...!!


ME TOO..😛

Chapter 188: Back to Square One

Gripping Start, it was..!
Lordy scared of what his own half could do to khushi... my heart goes for him..!!


MINE TOO...

Kushi was on her way to the stairway to head for Lord Arnav's room when Lady Anjali stated, "Stay in my room until he comes."

Why did she say that?

Chotey, if you come late and do not find your wife in your room, know that she is in my room. Dotake her to your room for it seems she prefers to spend her night with you than with me.

Ohhh I got my answer here...

I can't let it happen, he banged his fist on the table and then resumed his frantic pacing up and down the room. Suddenly he stopped near the window and, despite there being no moon to light the outside world, his eyes easily picked out the silhouette of the tall rose bush. He closed his eyes as a fresh wave of memories washed over his mind, more horrible than the dream he was trying to forget.

How could you, every time, be successful to create more n more inquisitiveness in your reader's mind by same unrevealed past?

He looked away to settle his disturbed stupor and his eyes instantly fell on the book before him, standing out among the other books in the shelves, because something was protrude from within its pages.

It felt good if I look at it as his mom (rose bush) directed him to khushi (handkerchief).. as if "don't look at past my dear son, see where is your future is"


EXCELLENT DECODING DEAR JANI DUSHMAN😊

Till she who burns with youth, and knows no fixed lot, is bound
In spells of law to one she loathes? and must she drag the chain
Of life in weary lust? (Blake's
Visions, 5.21-3)

Wanna write what I felt but not getting words.. sorry!!


I UNDERSTAND THE MESSAGE THAT HAS BEEN IMPLIED HERE BUT LIKE YOU EVEN I CANT QUITE WRITE IT😳

And that Kushi! His hands fisted on the arms of his royal chair. How dare she keep coming to me, despite knowing how dangerous I could be! What is that girl playing blind for! Always trespassing into my territory with no fear or care for her own safety.

I love this part of solo conversation...

The threat must become the shield. I will have to use myself against her.

Ohh Vo usse darayega... Oye.,.chal koi nahi yeah bhi koshish kar ke dekhle.. Vaise bata deti hoon kuch hone wala hain nahi...!!


I SECOND THAT...

... Then she reasoned to herself that she had been asleep and it was not right to judge him by what she had not seen. He must have come and left, finding me asleep...

Ooo... Come here khushi let me hug you...


RETURN HER POOR HUBBY ROM YOUR DUNGEON N SHE'LL BE FINE..YOUR HUG IS NOT NEEDED.

Smiling, she knocked graciously.

It doesn't take even fraction of sec to our heart to start dreaming, hoping & wishing... isn't it!!!

"Who else do you want to sleep with?" his eyes glinted angrily.

With YOU.. you stupid...!!

LOLZ😆😆😆

"You will never understand me, Kushi," he glared at her, "We are two worlds apart. A lord is always a lord, and a beggar always a beggar."

Ah.. his words are hurting... him too!!

AGREED.

Kushi breathed in, the ...I don't think I can hate you even more than I hate you now..."

"I have always hated you, Kushi. Always," he asserted coldly, "So much so that I never want to see your impoverished face again!"

To whom both of you are telling this haan??
Kisse bewkoof bana rahe ho yaar...


AIK DOOSREY KO..😉😆

And with that she turned and stumbled back to Lady Anjali's room. I will never weaken again or my words of wrath will have been in vain. She was determined. In hatred we began, in hatred we remain...

You have not idea how much I loved that line...holds so much than just anger...!!


AGREED.

Oooh... that was one fab update... just as you said "Back to square one"

Minute details & innovative writing... you are so good yaar...

    "Yes, I'm fine," Lord Arnav cleared his throat again and stepped towards the tall table near the window upon which where a jug of water and an upturned glass. He poured himself some water and gulped it down hastily. Then, placing the glass down, he turned and nodded to Lord Akash, "Let's leave."
    Holding it before him, he frowned at the red embroidery in its center, a red heart that confusedly looked like a red rose. Immediately, he remembered how the handkerchief had come to be there and who it belonged to...
  • Tears stung in her eyes but they refused to fall down her cheeks for her anger surpassed her pain.

I LOVED HOW YOU POINTED OUT N CAPTURED ALL THE MINUTE N IMPORTANT HINTS..WELL DONE..MEREY SATH REHTEY REHTEY INTELLIGENT HO GAI HAI TU SOULY.😃

I am not sure this is the best time to come out with this song or not.. but i hope it is right fit...
This song always leaves its impact on me and started flowing with it mood does matter how happy, cheerful i was...
Hope you all like it...


I LOVED THE LORDY BG THE BEST..BEAUTIFUL SONG!!

BG for Lordy (click on play to listen)

BG for Khushi (click on play to listen)

Enjoy
H
Soul

Edited by shass - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
That was pretty good...
Phewww... What the, that was a very complicated dinner ware arrangement, I couldn't get head or tail of it...
U r such a superb writer & I just luv u for ur writings...😊😊
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Posted: 12 years ago


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Posted: 12 years ago
Lordy = reserve by A_soul

Did i did it again?
Hd ha Haa... Devil in me being happier n happier..

Sorry linny I know u dont like spamming, so do I..
But this one I just love it..
Edited by A_Soul - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I like the way lord Akash supported Payal n assured by asking her to use love to win over his mother...lady anjali is tring to convince Khushi that he loves her...but will she be able to see it...will She realise that he is pushing her away to safeguard her n may be because he loves her...hmm time to just see that???
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Posted: 12 years ago
wow that was the best compliment for khushi but she won't bend...pride, she is on a mission so she has to win till when I wonder...
payal,is lucky though even she has a taunting mother in law she has a support in her husband and khushi has the support of both nani n Anjali but her husband how contradict their lives are...
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Posted: 12 years ago
Exellent update..
Just lovd it..
Thnk u so much for such a nice update..

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