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Posted: 11 years ago
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Hello everyone !
I got the idea of this post from Mudra di ! I wrote this poem on her thread.. " Thank you Dear! -- Ashutosh " and on her insisting, i have made this post ! Hope you all will like it ! Plzz give it a read n enjoy ! 🤗


I was a man hard and stony, you took out the lover out of me..
I was a only doc to cure many, you came and took over the charge of me..
I am a lover, a seeker, worthy of life now..
I can think of a life charmingly with only you now..
How when you were not in my life _______
A missing sumthing was always there, though i was not alone..
A feeling of loneliness, though i was full of stones..
Now i can breathe, fairly and sensitivley..
I can think of flowers blooming tenderly..
You are beauty of mind n soul..
You are my strength to make me as a whole..
You have made me something else..
You have given blood to my dead heart's pulse..
I can cheer for you in my life..
I can hold you as you are now my wife..

O Nidhi, you are mine n me yours..
Lets go to our land of reality, pure n blissful of love.. The Ashniland !


Will be waiting for your likes n dislikes ( if any 😉 )
Waiting for your comments, which are needed and most welcomed ! 😊

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Wow! I am first! 😆
(guess I am the only one here, with you...)
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Wow! I am first! 😆

(guess I am the only one here, with you...)

😆
Aarti, times matched, still unmatched with so many ! 😛
How did you like the post ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Lovely poetry Bawa... Very simple, touching, heartfelt... one could experience Ashu's love for Nidhi, the depth and honesty in that love came across very well. 👏😃
And Mudra is right, 👍🏼 I am happy you made a post... honestly I had missed this in her post.
Seems like this forum brings out a lot of creativity in every person who is a member here... and you are no different. 😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

😆
Aarti, times matched, still unmatched with so many ! 😛
How did you like the post ?

Yes... but don't you sleep? 😆
Anyways, I have to go now, and prepare dinner. So till next time, bye. 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Lovely poetry Bawa... Very simple, touching, heartfelt... one could experience Ashu's love for Nidhi, the depth and honesty in that love came across very well. 👏😃

And Mudra is right, 👍🏼 I am happy you made a post... honestly I had missed this in her post.
Seems like this forum brings out a lot of creativity in every person who is a member here... and you are no different. 😛

Thank you so much Aarti ! I am overwhelmed by your words ! When i was writing this down, my mind was looking at Ashni, n moreover Ashu looking n talking to Nidhi.. !!!
Glad that you liked it ! 😃
Missing Ashni is making us creative,.. I am enjoying myself ! 😛😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aardhan

Yes... but don't you sleep? 😆
Anyways, I have to go now, and prepare dinner. So till next time, bye. 😊

😆
Plzz have a look at your own thread.. OS !
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

😆
Plzz have a look at your own thread.. OS !

Ok, actually doing it right now. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: bawaswift

Missing Ashni is making us creative,.. I am enjoying myself ! 😛😛

Glad to know that you are enjoying yourself... that's why we all still come here. 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Bawa very beautiful and sweet poem.I am happy that you posted here.I just loved it.Simple but cute and lovely poem.And the pic was too cute.Now want more from you.

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