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Posted: 12 years ago
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Hey guys i am going to write this FF and it will be like Ehmmbh Season 2 where there daughter Mansi is growing up; like 3 or 4 years old and Virika getting ready for there new baby and all! I hoping to get many likes and comments on this! I will TRY to update everyday!! AND TRY to send PM'S everyday!! but i can't promise you guys since i have exams! BUT plzzz give likes and comments i would appreciate it! BTW i am going to change things around of the way some of the characters act and stuff
Episode 1
~Chandigarh~
Vanshika- "Mansi beta why are you running around the house?!? What if you get hurt?"
Mansi- "But...But dadi i am very bored" she says making a fit
Vanshika- "Arraye upset kyun hoon! I'll play with you come on"
Just then Sundar comes.
Sundar- "Ma'am Mrs. Sharma neh kaha ki woh yahan arraye hai! Aap unke saath kaye emergency ke liye jana"
Vanshika- "Abhi?"
Sundar- "Ji"
There was a honk outside.
Vanshika- "Arraye she is already here" she then looks at Mansi and kneels on her knees.
Vanshika- "Mansi beta i have to go for an emergency! I'll be back in a while!"
Mansi- "But dadi i wanna play"
Vanshika- "We will play as soon as i come back i promise! Okay Love you beta" she gives her a kiss on the cheek and leaves.
Mansi was so upset that nobody has time for her since they are all busy. She got super hungry.
Mansi to herself- "Bohot Bhook lagraye hai" she then walks to kitchen and tries to get cookies, she couldn't reach it since she was so tiny. she then grabs a chair from the dining table and brings it to counter pushing it, she climbs on top the chair then the counter, she almost the cookies, just in time the Chef Maha Raj comes.
Maharaj- "Mansi beta yeh kya karaye ho?!"
Mansi- "Mujhe Cookies khanna!"
Maharaj got her down from the kitchen, and grabs the cookies from the shelf and gave her some with Milk; she starts eating it on the dining table. After she was done she went outside to lawn and sat on the bench playing with her toys. It was pretty cold outside. She fell asleep on the bench.
~Hour Later~
Vanshika comes home with Viren.
Vanshika- "Thank you Viren beta for picking me up or else Mrs. Sharma would've kept talking and talking"
Viren laughs- "No problem Ma! Where's Mansi?"
Vanshika- "I have no idea but i hope she is okay!"
They then look around the house for her, the last place they checked was the lawn and they saw her sleeping on the bench.
Viren- "Mansi"
Vanshika- "Viren she is sleeping in the cold check if there is a fever"
He then feels her forehead.
Viren- "A little" he takes her to the room and wakes her up "Mansi"
Mansi wakes up "Papa" she hugs him tightly, he kisses her on the cheek.
Viren- "I am so sorry! I should've came home! Why did you sleep outside? Now look you got sick"
Mansi starts crying- "I miss you Papa" she hugs him again and he plants kisses all over her.
Viren- "I miss you too beta! How about you rest here and i am gonna go change, then warm up some food for you, then me and you go out okay?"
Mansi got all happy- "Yayy okay"
Viren smiles and kisses her on the forehead.
He went out the room with Vanshika.
Vanshika- "Viren i think you should stay home until Jeevika gets back! I mean Mansi has been so lonely lately! Sitting at home all day!"
Viren- "I know ma that's why i am gonna make it up to her and take her out all day tomorrow and today! I want her to be happy"
Vanshika- "Good then go get ready! And call Jeevika later; ask her when she can get back from Hrishikesh?!!"
Viren- "Okay Ma" he then goes back to the room and got out his clothes and changes in the bathroom he went to Mansi's room and saw her in her bed playing with her teddy bear.
Viren sits next to her- "You okay?"
Mansi- "Yesss Papa! Abh jab aap agaye ho toh mein bilkul theek hoon" she says so cutely, Viren kisses her forehead.
Viren- Chalo"
Mansi- "Kahan Papa? Don't you have to eat?"
Virne- "We are going to eat somewhere out! Anywhere you want to go"
Mansi got so excited- "Really?!"
Viren- "Yup"
Mansi quickly got out of bed but Viren stops her "Wait" he says, "Let me get you your jacket" He got up and go her sweater from her drawer and the puts it on her. He picks her up and takes her to the car and sits her in the back on her car seat.
Viren- "Abh batao tum kahan jana chati ho?"
Mansi- "Hmmm...Ice cream"
Viren- "But your sick"
Mansi- "But aap neh kaha ki anywhere" she laughs
Viren smiles- "Chalo theek hai" he drives to Baskin Robbins and got her favorite Oreo ice cream and got himself one too.
Viren- "Abh kahan"
Mansi- "Hmmm...Papa?"
Viren- "Yes?"
Mansi- "I wanna go to Mommy"
Viren looks at her.
Mansi made an upset look- "Meh mommy koh bohot miss karaye hoon! Please hum mommy keh pas ja sakte"
Viren- "Of course but it will take a few hours to get there"
Mansi- "Okay papa"
Viren- "Lekhen pehla hum Ghar jana hai kyunki hum ko clothes chaye! We can't wear these clothes all day"
He takes her home and packed some of her clothes and his clothes in one bag and then seeks Vanshika's blessing and leaves.
~Hrishikesh~
Beeji- "Jeevika beta can you get me some water please?"
Jeevika- "Sure Beeji" she gave her a glass of water.
Beeji- "Look beta you should rest too! I mean your pregnant!"
Jeevika- "It's okay Beeji i am fine! I just..i just miss my little Mansi"
Beeji smiles- "Just Mansi?"
Jeevika smiles and blushes- "And Viren! But i am worried that Viren has been busy lately and Mansi always stays home! She probably feels lonely"
Beeji- "It's okay beta i am sure she'll understand that you guys are doing all this for her and her brother/sister"
Jeevika smiles a little, there was a knock on the door, Jeevika was about to get up but Beeji stops her.
Beeji- "Don't worry i'll get the door.

CHAPTER 1 ENDS HERE!!

Precap- Viren- "I missed you Jeevs"
Jeevika- "I missed you too"
They embrace each other.
Mansi comes- "uh oh mommy aur papa romance karaye!!" she laughs and Virika go after her tickling her :)

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aw! Really, really liked it!! Please continue soon!
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#3
nice start
liked it
where are virman and their daughter
continue soon
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nice start...
keep continuing...
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Nice story! Looking forward to read more! :)
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oh my gawwdd
dis was amazing
please update soon nd please pm me :")
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A good start...
Wish you luck...rock with it..!
Update soon...and do pm me on d next update! :)
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gry start..i just luved it!!!!
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nice start...plz keep on updating whenever u get time but don't leave it incomplete
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wow season 2 yippie.
Grt start
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